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I've finished the narration of the prologue; you can find it here.
A slow but great chapter none the less, cheers.
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Snap... you would make a great narrator. However I hate the first chapter, so I didn't listen to it.
When drugs are introduced in a fanfic I always see Pinkie getting a hold of it.
Celestia has pretty much stated outright what Navi is to her. So she really is not his friend is she? Just another boss that occasionally has sex with.
Chrys seems to be doing just fine, the trolling ability they both have when they work together is amusing. Poor Twilight is trying so hard to start a relationship with him, but is too thick-headed to see he really doesn't want to.
The orphan thing was a little random are they important for later on? Despite all the negative things he says about himself he acts like a fair judge.
I wonder what Luna allowed Chyris to take away from her memories?
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Nothing from her memories. That only works on humans, because we hold our emotions inside, not on our sleeves like the ponies. Chrysalis got the fact that Luna loved Navarone and that he was hers, and essentially that if Chrysalis didn't mind her place there was going to be a very squished bug pony in place of a queen.
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She wants to be his friend, but she doesn't remember how friendship works anymore. There's more than one reason she's sending Twilight to get friendship reports.
The orphan thing was essentially a way of saying that though Navarone is turning into an asshole, he is still fair and he can be kind. It's also a way of showing how smart and genre savvy he is. As soon as he saw them he knew that they were going to make a break for it as soon as they got a chance, unless they were given a good reason not to. He also knew that the two colts wouldn't leave the filly behind, so he told the guards to watch her closely.
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He's always been an asshole with a small heart of gold. Now he just has extreme mood swings with all the trauma he's carrying.
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Let me put it this way: He wasn't anywhere near as bad as he's going to get.
So now Celestia confessed to Nav of her plans with him. Im rather surprised that he was not pissed off and did not decide to threaten her or think of killing her. Nav is not like most people, but he should still be pissed. Another person would just loose it and would do almost anything to retaliate. Is he so numb to the life he has that he is willing to accept being ordered around? A predator in a world where the prey is dominant. All that psychological damage and he is still controlling himself from snapping at them. I imagine that he daydreams of shooting Celestia with his crossbow in the head on a regular bases. As humans, we despise the idea of being controlled and being subjugated to other's wills. He has the opportunity to just say no and be done with it.
Lets say he is off on a mission somewhere and Taya is whit him. Equestria burns to the ground, would he really care? Would he really be so concerned and distraught to care if that place is taken over or something? Friends and all that aside, does he really have any important connections to that place as a person? Will he accept his freedom and rejoice in it or will he go back?
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Oh, I narrate things all the time. Just not a lot on FiMFiction because half of the stories I see on the frontpage are either absolute shit, or the same old thing with different names slapped onto them.
And I have promised Navarone that I would narrate his entire story. All 700k+ words...
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If Equestria burns, he would only care for one reason: Ponies are inherently good, or they are in his mind. So yes, he would not like it. At the same time, though, he wouldn't risk his life to take it back, not anymore.
And yes, Navarone is very, very pissed at what Celestia said. But he recognizes that he does not have a choice. Navarone is not an idiot. He has been in situations wherein fighting is not an option. He could try to fight back, but what good would it do him here? He hates that he has to do stuff like this, but he realizes that he really doesn't have much of an option, at least not at the moment. It is better to sigh and take the hit now and work around her iron grasp later.
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And may God be with you during it. I fear for your voice, mate.
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Eh, nice.
Get a few buddies and share the fun/pain?
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Oh, even better; I may livestream one chapter every week. I think that may turn out to be a good pace.
I am enjoying this story immensely! I almost feel like Nav's catchphrase should be the same as mine, 'In serving others, we serve ourselves...' It has a lot of different meanings. Anyways, thank ya for sharing and keep up the great job!
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Oh, but he isn't doing it out of the goodness of his heart. Or at least, he isn't doing it like that often. It's more "I have to do this, so I'm going to, but you damn well better believe that I'm going to benefit as well."
1335863 (chuckles) That's actually one take on that catchphrase :) Best part, the one who is being 'served' generally has no idea they are being used.
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Navarone isn't an idiot. He knows some history, even if he's not a buff. Royalty doesn't keep people around for no reason. If Celestia ever calls him to Canterlot, he knows that she has a very specific purpose in mind. He knows that he's being used. There's just nothing he can do about it yet.
1335893 Hey you, I have a question. If changelings can eat memories when they have no emotions to use, why not have one eat from a unicorn, and immediately have the unicorn mindread said memory back? Wouldn't this be an infinite food source?
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It only works on humans. They can't use the memories of ponies like they can on Navarone.
1334448 that link said "OH NO! we cant find that sound!
so i'm guessing someone messed with it or something was wrong with the link entirely...
cant wait for the chapter he says "No" blatantly to Celestia and walks away...i do not know why i crave such a situation i just do.... anyway good night for i work midnight's! well i guess it would be good morning but yah no way to word that properly.
Oh shit! Glados has found a way into equestria and taken over twilight's mind! Run Nav! Whatever you do DONT ACCEPT ANY CAKE FROM HER!
Ok there's chrysalis hmmm every time I mention or ask about where something is its like the next chapter or the one after that..... Well I'm going to try something. What about the umbral knights? I'm pretty sure that you said that there will be more on them. HYPOTHESIS ACTIVATE
Good chapter
Hehe.. The song "Green and purple" actually makes more sense than it just being about him getting weed. Who was the first one he tried it on? Spike. What are Spike's colors? Purple and Green. You are clever author.
2784453 Your going to be a happy little boy.
2827426 Also, the "Far out, dude" reference was funny because that's what Spike always says when he's stoned in the Pony.Mov series.
So much daaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaawwwww!
Random idea: If Nav didn't take the deal of eternal life they would've made him a vampire and fed him blood in his sleep.
Or 'send' him out on a 'dangerous' mission where he gets 'bitten' by a vampire.
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Cadance has a bluish glow, while Chrysalis as a greenish glow. And whatever the unicorn manipulates also gets an aura
I hate to bother you, but, here ya go.
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Fixed.
love this story and the hole discord thing aside I can see how a lot how this could and would happen if shifting planes was something that could really happen
When I was reading the bit about the marijuana, I couldn't stop fucking laughing XD
3788917 my guess is that our world and theirs were interconnected way back in the past. That's why there was a Morpheus statue.
i.imgur.com/x9kpZte.jpg
4383920 YOU DON'T SAY
4383920 or he is in the future
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whoa whoa whoa back the fu*k up a second. i present a quote from discord in chapter one
humans were there billions of years in the past and all this side dimension shit is just to distract the reader from the facts he stated in the first chapter. and he dose an amazing job of it also. many a time i forget this has anything to do with discord untill i log back in and see the coverart.
Truly, Navi is a bad father. With the stuff that happened immediately after makes me believe that ponies have no resistance to pot..... I hope he gets Luna high.
Snoop Navi
So is that why you blackmail and threaten Nav to do what you want him to do, then have Nav take a magical binding oath (against his will) to make sure that he continues to do what you say?
Celestia you really need to start practicing what you preach to everyone, rather than to leaders of countries.
That's the way I read that. (Should've been written as that.) XD
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I can't imagine doing Twilight would ever get boring. With all the magic she has at her disposal, shit could get really weird really quickly.
Is it bad that Navarone is the basic embodiment of me?
3469113 No. No vampires.
6034788 Yes. Incredibly so
It's a shame that Equestria doesn't have anything equivalent to Mario Kart.
1334448 it's gone what happened to it?