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Wow, that was quick.
This whole trip sounds to me like something I've been hoping for a while. A push back from the brink of personality erasal/modification and some hard truth reveals. The fire elemental bond is just the bonus on top.
Huh, Blaze might not be a total asshole.
Who knew!?
Dank shit my man.
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Me. I knew it all along!
Just finished reading the last chapter and refreshed just to see if I was lucky. Turns out I was.
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I wish I could get lucky...
I find it funny how nav is writing this a a journal and even though he couldn't have written anything while he was a dragon and probably wrote all this and the entire Iceland thing in a relatively small time frame, this chapter stops here, like he intended somehow to read it and wanted to leave them on a cliffhanger until they found the next one
I feel like at the end of it all he's gonna end up with the Earth element or the female fire elemental that cut off his wing that I forget the name of, just for the sake of irony
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Well I mean, Nav's a total piece of shit. What did you really expect?
So Flo might actually have been a bitch this whole time, Celestia might have been a bigger bitch than we realized, Nav made Dash his bitch, and Gilda is still just a regular bitch.
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And yet, none of them can compare to Kyle's mom.
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Was wet axe wound a reference to Pink Guy?
Dang, two chapters this close together? Effin' awesome.
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Never heard of it.
Yet another wonderful installment in a truly epic saga.
How large is Nav as a dragon? Cause I feel she might be larger in my mind than in the story.
Hot damn I like it!
Blaze for best elemental
Huh, while I liked the whole story of Nav improving him(/her)self as a person and becoming happier, it's an interesting twist to see how much of it was (or may have been) a lie. Still, I hope he doesn't totally regress to where he was at his worst.
I'm never quick enough to be one of the first commenters because I take my time enjoying the material.
Still waiting for that 420 Blaze.
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That's what she said.
Picking up pace, are we?
Just that one rather large error so far.
This is why I love Taya.
Alright, the start of this chapter had me already thinking this, but now I'm not sure if these bits are partly based on the conversation about what he'll be like if he were turned back into a guy or lost Flo a few chapters back, or if you've been subtly trying to get people reading to talk about the subject for a while now or if you've been planning this chapter since he started being Flo's host.
You are a criminal mastermind, after all. You never know.
He's going to end up taking both Flo and Blaze as some kind of small, weird personal council, Imma call it right now.
Nice callback.
You motherfucker.
Aww, I was hoping he'd go with Giratina.
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I don't think that counts as an emergency. I don't think Nav could justify using the dagger. The quartermaster might have to spank her.
Taya is supposed to be adorable, it's true.
>insert evil laugh
What callback? That's just a southernism.
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#rekt
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If you manage to catch the next chapter when I post it in the comments, you can post on it before just about anyone else.
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Let me put it this way: Part of her makes the rockin' world go 'round.
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I was thinking Sapphira, but I didn't want to be that faggot and Nav isn't blue.
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Maybe it is, maybe it isn't. We haven't heard Flo's side yet.
Combining Dragon form, with Fire elemental, wont get Nav the Celestial Flare attack?
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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=-sMN4w8hdJs
I apologize in advance for linking you this.
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What the fuck even is that? That bullshit isn't even... I can't even consider that sound. It's just static. What the fuck did you just do to me?
Alright, one actual error here.
to hatch*
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I know. I called it a callback because he hasn't done that in a while. I figured either he grew out of it or it was waiting for him to be right pissed.
Thought of naming him Saphira, eh?
Well, I've read the books, people are asking about this, and I'm a little curious myself, so... is there a specific part of the Cycle where Saphira is around the size Nav is as a dragon?
I've been figuring he'd be the size she was when they officially set out in book 1. So slightly smaller than the size of a one-car garage.
I might be going full stupid here, but did you change your username? I don't know why but I think you may have. Or I'm hallucinating.
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I didn't. I had someone ask the same question on fanfic.net
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I let my curiosity get the better of me and now I feel like I just opened up Pandora's Box.
Please let the next chapter be titled either "Dawn Of A New Day" or "The Counter Resets"
EDIT: Also guys, I just realized something...
all this might mean that Flo has been altering Nav's mind and his thinking of forgiving Luna might've been her altering his emotions toward the memories to try and push/force him to forgive her after everything she did, instead of Nav getting past it on his own and being able to give her a chance to be changed and possibly rebuild a friendship on that change.
and if that does turn out to be the case...fuck no, keep that bitch out of your head, no question.
Bacon.
What Navi need is a psychiatrist, the problem is understand his mind after having Flo all the time, being a human, not a pony, and change from Male to Female
Wow, this is starting to get interesting.... I mean, it was awesome before, but it surprises me how you write more and more twists in the story.
Also, this was long on my mind, but if Nav don't have a soul, and he were to find his own tomb, would the soul transfer to him, or is the soul long gone? Do they even have any real connection, beside being the original body being a template. Every time Ava comes up, I cant help but wonder, what is Nav actually. So far he seems to be a clone created by Discord to.... kill himself ???
You know what the problem is with these kind of stories? When they have so many chapters you forget who is who and what happend
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I imagine around the size in D&as terms around the size of Gigantic+. It's stated he is 5 times the size of Spike, I think at this point spike is around 9-10 feet tall. So Nav would be around 40-50 feet.
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> I was thinking Saphira
Should have gone with Rand. It works for Danny Rand and Rand al'Thor. It would also have given precedence for why Spike has a plain, monosyllabic name.
Another chapter, another realization that this story is making the slow chug to this sites longest story... Noice.
(For those who haven't looked, this story is second on the site for word count)
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It was first for a pretty long while. There are longer stories, though. There's one series out there with over four million words, but it's divided into several different stories.
"Spoonful." Spoonful of sugar is an imprecise measurement of some amount of sugar while a "spoon full" of sugar is a spoon that is full of sugar.
Weird, me too.
Heteronyms are hard.
Another good chapter. Navarone should learn to not sign things when drunk. In fact, Navarone should stop getting blackout drunk and making snap decisions altogether.
Next we head to the Dragon Lands.
~KBO.
Y'know, Fancy Pants never got that duel Nav owed him, since the war games. What gives?
Hang on. Wait. Hold up. Stop for a second. Freeze.
I thought that naming chapters was long gone...
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Nav's just a liar (and lazy). If Fancy ever pressed the issue (he's gonna), Nav will give him a duel.
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I usually only name chapters after I write them. Sometimes I wait longer to name them than I do for others. If you check the list, you might find yourself surprised.
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Fixed
Eh
Is there actually an error here?
Getting blackout drunk is super fun, though! Just think of all the (male) friends a nice young lady can make.
It was written so quickly because if there was a link to a gDoc, I missed it. So wmid didn't have to deal with my bullshit.
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I posted two links to it in the last chapter.
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No, no error. Wound, an injury, is just a heteronym of wound, encircled or enfolded and the past and past participle of wind. And wind, encircle and enfold, is a heteronym of wind, the perceptible natural movement of the air. I just first read wound as wound that made me think of wind, which, in turn, made me think of wind. And that got me to thinking that heteronyms are difficult to convey in text even with proper context, but they are sure fun to explore and play with.
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Yeah. But I'm blind. *shrug*
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Oh, it appears that I have been surprised.
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I don't know whether or not that's the most brilliant proof I've heard for Flo being completely psycho