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I swear these updates have been coming faster than usual. Whether they are or not, keeping a story going after a million words is an impressive feat. Keeping a story fresh and entertaining after so long would be unthinkable if it weren't for you.
-Edit, found a typo.
"Spike seemed rather horrified by that news, but Gilda just smiled. “Cool. Wasn’t expecting to see her for a while.” She elbowed Spiked and said, “Come on, big guy. Let’s get ready to see some friends, eh?” With that, she pulled him off."
Shouldn't it say Spike, rather than "Spiked?"
Ahem.
AWWWWWWWWWWW SHIT NIGGA
Yes.
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That's a mistake one of my proofers pointed out and it should have been fixed already. Whatever. Now it has been.
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im gunna be sad when this ends. i hope it ends great tho.
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I secretly hope this has the shittiest ending of all time. I would hate it just as much as everyone else, but I'm just too much of a troll to ignore that feeling.
Just as I was about to sleep... Goddamnit, whatmustido.
3149109 i ment great as it ends with a bang. terrible or not. a fitting end to a great story.
and oddly it seems as if it could have a sequel. but from WIMD said to me once i think the story will be wrapped up properly
Let me guess... The Crystal Heart is either the water Elemental, or its Santa's actual heart, and when Nav finds it, it can be used at any time to summon Santa and have him fight alongside you, using his zombie-reindeer cannon.
A little dissapointing that it wasn't Santa's workshop, but, as ussual, utterly fantastic. Also, why don't you like me to sleep?
3149090 Dude, we're all gonna be sad and depressed when this epic bastard ends.
Navie~ You´re a writing machine, I haven´t the slightest clue on how you are able to create quality this fast... Stimply amazing. Another great chapter!
DoaM and sleeping dont work well together
also whats all this talk of this story ending soon?
Damn it! I was just about to go to bed. Now I gotta read this chapter.
(reads chapter)
...Damn, no STD joke involving Shining Armor like I hoped.
I wonder why all the comments keep calling nav "navi". nav isnt a small blue winged orb!
Another chapter that has no problems with adding more. And interesting new stuff of the amulet.
Alicorn amulet, gives you power and corruption. Any magical creature, even Taya using it long enough would get corr--
This story has truly corrupted my mind, as I have thought how it would be possible that much predicted thing about Taya's... awkward talks would be possible out of dream world.
Alicorn Amulet, is very addicting, power comes with it. And she has no issue with doing it. Try and stop your daughter with that power and her knowledge of your ways. You can control her for so long.
Yeah, may your corruption burn story, may it burn.
By the gods above and below, how the hell do you keep things this bloody epic?!
Dragon greed and relationships don't mix well it seems. No way that's going to last for long.
Genre Savvy Nav is best Nav.
I love this chapter I can't wait for the next one if it is uploaded tomorrow it wouldn't be quickly enough
No rush though take your time quality over quantity
You put these things up this late on purpose, don't you? Something to separate the obsessive fans from the normies? Evil, dickish, genius bastard.
Ahhh~ love 'ya...
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Everything's made of crystal, yeah? Well then if it comes to it they could always just tell Rarity that it's after labor day, point out the color of her coat and let her screech bring the city down on Mr. Hellhorse's head. So long as the shield holds the damage to the neighboring lands should be negligible.
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I put them up late because I stay up late.
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Genre savvy, yes. But he may be up against the wrong kind of villain here. Or worse, he might not realize until too late who the true hero is.
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You know you like it. And you know you want to see Nav teaching his daughter first hand about the birds and the bees.
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Not me.
I hope people realize that this is the longest story/book/anything literature in word count, in recorded history.
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http://www.fanfiction.net/s/4319623/1/Brave-New-World
I've seen one that's four million words once, a Harry Potter one.
Why can't he help Sombra come back to sense? Worked so good with changelings and Chrystalis...
...Meh... probably he is tooooooo tired from all this shit already.
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Because he was in a position of power over Chrysalis and all she really wanted was food. What Sombra wants is power, and he already has enough of it to be troublesome. How can you capture something like that? And besides, that was back when Nav was something approaching a decent person. Now he just wants to kill everything between him and the elementals.
I thought the semi-rivalry between Twilight and Nav was pretty funny. If he doesn't find the heart first, it'll be very disappointing. Fucking Twilight. Why does she still defend Celestia like she can do no wrong, hasn't she read enough about her in Nav's journals? Not to mention her sister fucking raped him and she is defending her from being punished.
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People always seem to forget the existence of other fan fiction when mentioning this stat.
Part of the reason for all this of course is simply a lack of editing. I've read quite a few stories that have surprisingly little content for their word count.
(The Twilight series is terrible for this though; it continually amazes me how it got published when it's of a quality on a par with bad fan fiction. Hell, it started as a private self-insert mary sue story, which neatly explains why it shares the same flaws.)
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Damn. I liked it better when you were an evil genius.
I mean you've still got the genius, but the evil just made it so much more flavorful! Also now I don't get to picture you cackling like a madman every time you finish a paragraph and going full Doctor Evil as you upload a chapter at four in the morning.
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Technicaly Sombra is legitimate ruler of Chrystal Empire, Who makes his shiny, chrystal, badass, Self-sufficiency realm with
blackjack and hookerschrystal ponies and energy source of 5 megatons of pure northern lights.If I spent thousands years of making desert tundra with earth ponies tribes in whole new civilization, only to being thrown out into the cold because some of my fatcat ex-servents have had a thought that (not without help of some princess) working and digging so hard to make this pathetic tundra in something better is evil and tiresome. Then ofcourse after soo many years working like a cursed nigra (no offence), I would be a one pissed off motherf*****! Thinking only about seeing occupiers in the deepest pit I can find and in anticipation of delivering some healing drubbing to my loyal citizens.
P.S. Nav was under amulet influence while he was speaking with Sombra so first inpression was kinda messed up.
P.P.S. lol so many words
P.P.P.S Sry for looong sentences I know that it's not right way to write in English, it's just a thing from my culture hard to think and write in small ones.
Chapters out the wazoo man. The seer length of this story plus you're upload rate will never cease to amaze me.
As I always say...
Jeep it up man.
Huh, thought you were going to ignore season 3.
.... Wheres Santa... GIVE ME SANTA!!!
Wow, Twilight is the biggest cunt in this Story .
Jeez 2-3 days between updates? I hope this is a thing now
1114767 i'm just joining, and there's 94 chapters. you didn't know how right you were.
I found a link to this story and, to be honest, started reading it just because I was bored. I am not a fan of the show, and knew very little about the whole Pony phenomenon.
That didn't stop me from enjoying the story immensely. I started reading last Wednesday (8/25) and just finished a few minutes ago. I admit to being completely immersed in the stories and sad to see that I had finally caught up.
I registered with the site just to say this: You have some real talent!
So I was right about it being the Crystal Empire. Now then, this story needs some more steamy clop!
NINETY-FOUR CHAPTERS?!
ONE MILLION WORDS?!
LET THE QUEST BEGIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIIN
A new chapter? Let me quickly finish what I am doing and then I shall read it.
A new chapter already? The hell?
Amazed again. No further comment needed.
I don't know if this applies to everyone. But, since i know what most of the characters look like, it is easier to picture them when i read this. But since Taya, Navarone, Kumani, or any other of the OCs don't have a body or voice yet, it kinda creates a barrier for my immersion (facial expressions, posture, etc)
So i was wondering if any artist would be willing to draw what their representation of the characters is, then i believe it would add to the story immensely.
Just a thought
Damn it this comes out just as I'm turning off my lights to sleep , I gotta wake up on five hours
nav seems to flip between considering the ponies his friends and claiming they arent his friends. he has a very interesting psychological relationship with everything in this world that a psychologist would simply love to study. it might drive the poor doc crazy trying to make sense of nav but meh, FOR SCIENCE!
3150157 Well, living around Pinkie Pie and WITH Twilight for any amount of time and I can see how his patience is low!
Props to those who guessed crystal empire i guess XD
so the theme of this story is to make it partially canon? where events happen and Nav either makes them more fun, or easier, or just fucks them up entirely?
So what will happen with twilicorn? will the explanation be that Celestia is a lazy plot and wants a stand in for her to have a vacation? XD
Another chapter and another interesting and sometimes funny action adventure. HOW the hay have you managed to keep this story so interesting so freaking long!?
Huehuehue, Tyranids.
With
sexygreatgreat and sexy stories like this one, it is easy to forget the show's original intended target demographic. However, then you watch that dammed commercial with the train and the baby Pinkie Pie, and the realization that this is a story based on television show made for six year old girls comes flooding back. Even knowing that, this is an awesome story, not despite that fact, but because of it. ...I think I may have lost track of the point that I was trying to make. Anyway, I was surprised to see an update so soon, recently the updates have been coming out on Saturdays, it has only been three days since the last update, you spoil us too much, whatmustido. Thank you for that, by the way. KBO.