Page generated in 0.035 seconds
Total duration
1,013 users online
1,371,576 hits today, 1,835,564 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Lol silly angel, nice chapter.
I like nav's crossbow solution best!
1190460
Don't worry. That solution gets used a lot in the next chapter. Well, that solution and another one that's somewhat similar. Navarone's life is about to take some serious down turns. It'll be fun!
What a rude stallion, hope he shows up again.
1190567
He does have to preen and they do shed, but I don't write that because it would be boring as hell. They're also very sensitive, just as some write pegasus wings to be. He probably could get a job with the weather ponies, but honestly I don't think they would take him. He does a large number of random odd jobs through the town, and with that he gets some bits and free food. The bits all go straight to Twilight. He could move out, but Celestia wants him to continue living with Twilight. We don't know that yet and neither does he, but there is a reason for it that we'll learn much later.
And yes, they make a very dangerous duo. Around chapters sixteen, thirty-three, and fifty-three, you'll see just how dangerous they can get when they work together.
If Twilight tried to summon another human, she would get a very pissed off monster that wasn't a human. But she would never try that, because she knows how pissed off Navarone would be if she did it. Nav knows how pissed off he was that his life was ruined like that. He doesn't want it to happen to anyone else.
1190642
Yeah, he's rude. But he has a somewhat decent reason to be. I mean, Navarone does look like nothing anyone has ever seen before. That said, he was really being dickish. He might make a reappearance, but no promises.
Ah, another wonderful chapter. Thank you, whatmustido, for being such an awesome author. And if you have an editor I say thanks to then to.(Though it's possible you don't have one.)
1190678Twilights spell malfunctioned. The most dangerous species is not man; but rather it is Chuck Norris!
1186993
You should just Narrate it as he posts it on here.
I've yet to see a HiE story that doesn't contain the human scaring Angel into good behaviour (if they interact at all). Honestly, it's a little tiring.
ahh yes the trusty "do what I say or im'a cutchu" method nice to see it employed so well
You have me convinced, I need some weighted gloves. Also, can't Fluttershy understand animals, their meaning/mood/language?
Ok, so I just started reading this story Monday. I heard it was one of the longest on Fimfiction, and I am a sucker for epic long stories, especially well written ones. I have to say I am impressed so far. I can't believe this hasn't received more attention, it would be well deserved. I have heard rumors however that this tale becomes very dark, twisted, and all around fucked up and wrong in the future chapters. Though I don't want to subject myself to mind bending, sociopathic, blood orgies... I am intrigued by this story nonetheless. That being said, I give my highest regards to the author. This is a fine piece of literature, and I can't wait to delve further into the intrigue and mystery of Nav's future.
1991023
I can't deny that it gets dark and fucked up. However, not all of it is like that. For the most part it's relatively tame and even comical. There are just the occasional sidesteps into depravity that I like to think I made justified. And even if not... The dark tag is there for a reason. So yes, some parts are like what you said. But no, most of it isn't.
His maybe?
Well that was a bit dark, but then again he is supposed to be a part of discord personality so…
2367086
Fixed it. And what would you do to someone that was apparently hitting one of your friends?
Did anyone else get Bugs Bunny vibes when Nav slapped the guy with the weighted glove?
"A few days later, after more than a full year had passed from when I was first brought here, one of my terrible fears was realized: Someone was reading these journals."
oh shit guys, hes onto us!
Just for clarification, twilight summoned a weakened form of the most dangerous creature alive... So Nav is a weekend form of Discord, a draconequus? or are humans really the most dangerous, seeing as Cain supposedly came up with discord.
2438394
Neither. That was what she thought the spell was going to do. What it actually did was bring Navarone forward. Remember, Discord was the one that got her that spell, even if she doesn't realize it.
Although yes, humans were probably the most dangerous, if only because they were the ones that made nukes.
2438423
Lets hear it for MAD!
Also, cool story.
1190780 But the spell was supposed to bring a weakened member of the species, and Chuck Norris doesn't get weakened, so it reverted to the next best thing.
~N
This clarifies everything. Fluttershy is indeed best pone.
While Angel is best snack
2438394 if it were not for Discords limitless power humans could kill him and he would not exist on the pony world because he would be dead but discord has to cheat and have limitless power and we don't have Master Chief or Chuck Norris to kill him hell i would settle with the Didact killing Discord LOL
Oh hey, it's that unicorn that Discord fucked with and sent on a quest to slay the monster in the prologue. Was wondering when he'd show up.
Yay some one finally put angel in his place, though i would have said i need a new fur hat and a new key chain
2766880
Had the same thing happen to me in Skyrim the other day, except the unicorn was a vampire and my crossbow fires exploding bolts and rips the still screaming souls from their bodies when they burn to death. More or less the same thing, though. In the same spirit.
Come to think of it I do believe I had some rabbit haunch after that...
Navarone's friendship report
my sides
2796770
Jarl Ulfric Stormcloak approves.
2687442 First Contact, Scarecrow does something quite shocking, I suggest you to read it.
Human friendship report was awesome.
Also: Mmmmmm bunny stew, that little turd had it comming.
1991116 Damn it!
My mind canon is "The dragon gene is recesive"
Finally! That Angel always got on my nerves, being disrespectful to Fluttershy.
3163019 I was hoping he would get incinerated
kicking some bunny ass so to speak
2796770 Really? Something similar happened to me in Tibia except the unicorn was a Paladin and my glove was the most powerful sword in the game, I do believe I had some rabbit meat after that actually.
... not to mention I was like twenty levels higher than him and a elite knight...
This is your journal. Stop writing in caps.
I swear, if Nav would have said this:
I would have flipped my shit 630 degrees to the left!
Princess Luna eating meat..?
I was a bit weirded out at first, but then at the thought of a herbivore eating meat brought a huge sinister smile to my face.
I liked it after that.
3432264
Horses can and do eat meat. You ever go to a farm and have a cookout, it's not uncommon to attract some of them over to you. I've fed one a hotdog once and I've heard a number of other stories about giving them meat. And then there's this: http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=uYui4P_dVc0
I like the update to this chapter; it better contextualizes Luna's actions later in the story. The rape scene with Rarity and Pinkie in the previous chapter was also much more tastefully done. All in all, these edits have proven to be vast improvements. I'm delighted to be given a reason to read over old chapters again. I miss my time working through this leviathan of a fanfic.
Incidentally, this chapter was a favorite of mine simply with how nonchalantly Nav responds to the white unicorn's duel. The whole affair was on par with your usual brand of humor that arises when Nav simply doesn't give a fuck--which tends to be most of the time.
Room of Requirement, anyone?
God, I love these rewritten chapters, although I do miss the sky rodeo. Oh well.
3500712
The sky rodeo was pretty terrible, in my mind. Only one of my prereaders asked me not to take it out, while just about everyone else wanted it gone.
Ok I like the rewritten chapters but I'm just wondering a few things. Will there still be major events that were already in the story? Like Egypt and the stuff with Luna or is that stuff gone now?
3547982
I'm not redoing the entire story. I just redid some parts of it that were absolute shit, like the first twelve or so chapters. The rest, I'm just cleaning up to fit the edits. I'm already up to chapter twenty-eight on the rewrite.
1991023 Nothing can get more dark and and twisted then Spec ops: The Line. But who cares? I LOVE dark and twisted!
I can't decide whos scarier, omnivore Luna, or ho$@y Pinkie.
"shame i didnt have a holy hand grenade" XDXDXD Monty Python and the Holy Grail Reference