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Aww shit! We on a roll now!
3 million words. Wowwy. Good stuff WMID.
When her followers realise she saw from ALL their perspectives
Holy shit such a good portrait
Let's get the ball rolling damn
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Most definitely
that was a epic chapter 200 . . . at 3 million words total too
Goodness. Such a word buffet.
Looking forward to more, whatmustido.
And so begins the Fallen's Ascent, the Martyr King no more. Leading a new world forged by steel iron and ancient magic as old as the mind is young (because timetravel be whack yo) Enemies of the Exodus be warned for the Champion of the Valley and Shadow of Death laments no more and with righteous will he bares his fangs and grips his steel. Let the world be bathed once again in the fires of purity and smog of destruction so it may arise like the Phoenix this world is!
.... I have no fucking idea where any of that came from but I loved this chapter.
Been a while since I've read pony stuff since having a job and several hobbies that involve other people jockeying for my time takes most of it. The Coma made for a good recap for us and as far as in universe integration that was done nicely. I'm glad i was able to read this, and i look forward to the next update.
You hate me. I know you do. Because you always update this damn story when I'm at drill
Or AT. Never when I'm at home relaxing. Or gaming. But always when im trying to do military shit. And with that being said I would like to say great fucking work and I love you so much
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Hahahahaha Discord would wipe us clean of the face of the earth (;D)
In the picture she look dead inside
I call nav magic nuking someone or something maby the guy putting a bounty on him as the warning to leave them be with no collateral damage
This, plus all the dirty puns were the best gift of this chapter, and a welcomed sight after getting thru the coma chapters.
Also congrats on now being the defacto 3rd largest piece of literature that humanity has produced so far. Now being longer than "Les Hommes de bonne volonté"
Recap of the recap of the recap. Complete.
Now the prolog is done, its East To Tarterus.
But First.
Time to Tool Up. Human Style.
Quick question. How large is Torch compared to an Imperator Titan? How much RnD would it take before Any dragon could be Intelligently Greed leveld to Kaiju? If Spike throws his message flame ahead of him, can he intercept attacks, and deliver them back to the sender? Can other dragons learn this trick? Can Changeling who change into dragons learn this trick?
Can Spike learn how to reverse message Abyssal water pressure and orbital speed space rocks? Or even just link to a volcano supply chamber and spew high pressure magma?
If he has a swarm of dragons, what defenses can tey eat, or failing that, the ground from under the defenses? Diamond Dog sappers?
Could the Dreadnaught have all its external covered in runes, so that not only absorbes all incoming energy forms, but focuses them down into a coherent beam in any direction?
Can Navi be treated for parthenogenetic cloning so their personal genetic code is used to create their exact full living soul complete equivalent, which uses Flo to have the duplicated mindstate? Then the option is delete teh origional, as with teh seeds, but now has a full soul also, wich should transfer to the seed backups on loss?
Right here it dawned on me that the coma arc combined with this chapter is equivalent to when a television show replaces a character's actor. Like with whomever they will use to replace Ruby Rose on Batwoman. However, the best example I can give of this is David Tennant being replaced with Matt Smith on Doctor Who. Before Ten regenerated into Eleven, he went back and visited all his past companions for final closure. They did the same thing when Jodie Whittaker replaced Peter Capaldi, just slightly differently. This is basically a whole new actor playing the role of Navarone. I am not saying new Navarone is a bad thing, it is just something that occurred to me.
~KBO.
Good to see Nav open her eyes. Also there's not an instant change something which we can see gradually work towards as she follows the objectives she set while unconscious
YAY
Flo's creep factor is growing exponentially.
"Wow, who planted all these red flags here?"
I thought twilight was smart? This is the most idiotic thing I think I've ever seen her day.
You sir, are a wonderful monster dropping 30k+ chapters longer then some whole fics. Kudos as you manage to maintain a great and consistant tone seriously will continue to be back for more.
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Actually, it's not the third longest. There's still Venmurasu at 3,640,000 words as of june 2020, The Subspace Emissary's Worlds Conquest at 4,102,328 words, Super Smash Bros Under Fire: The Great Adventure Saga at 7,296,586 words (though the vast majority of those words are literally "praise jesus" over and over because 110 out of 111 chapters is literally just that, so it sorta cheats), and Devta at 11,206,310 words. So if we just ignore SSBUF it comes out at around fourth or so. Not entirely sure it's EXACT place though.
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Nav's kinda dead inside, what with no soul and all that...
Keep up the great work, and always love the chapters you write!
What actor would nav be as a female
Puns are the highest form of humour and wit, fight me you gelatinous puddle of sewer water!
Wow....took me an hour and a half to read the latest chapter. Now it's after midnight for me. TIME TO READ IT AGAIN!
And here... we... go. It's good to be back. So to speak. Nice painting, by the way. Nav doesn't quite look how I pictured--I think FemShep from Mass Effect kind of influenced my previous mental image of her--but she's close enough. Taya, uh... Taya's... big. Way bigger than I thought.
You know, the very concept of tl;dr must be the closest thing to blasphemy in Twilight's world now that she knows about Celestia.
Griffin trap maids, eh? Sweet. Been reading Leech's work lately?
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Yeah, I've never felt quite so personally attacked, myself.
I could not click to open fast enough.
What the heck fam, I thought nav had a jew fro, and wasnt taya black? I've been reading this shit for years; multiple times!
You are tearing me apart lisa.
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I reccon Kiernan Shipka
pmcvariety.files.wordpress.com/2016/09/kiernan-shipka.jpg
C'mon man. *sniff* Don't bring that up...
Y'know, Nav really did grow as a person after the coma. It's really interesting to see character development like that.
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Hmm, true but I think that in terms of completed/truly ongoing stories it ranks higher. Venmurasu is still not fully published but will probably end up being longer. The Subspace Emissary's Worlds Conquest Hasn’t updated in 2+ years and I think is cancelled, the issue with SSBUF, and Devta at 11,206,310 words. So I think 3rd longest ongoing story is valid.
Also: it’s a real sign of character development that Twilight is fine with siphoning gallons of child blood to beautify a semi-undead god that tries to murder everyone that opens her book.
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Taya is purple and he had a jewfro when he didn't brush his hair and was male.
You know, it suddenly occurs to me that a millennia old, paranoid, over-controlling and evil Sun Goddess might have her mind backed up somewhere. Maybe a clone body too, maybe made and powered through some large sacrifice of subjects and enemies. She might not even remember or had even erased the memory herself, fearing that if someone could erase or control her mind they might stumble upon her final backup...!
Shit, is the Alicorn Amulet her Horcrux? I swear, if she puts that on and Oldlestia is back...
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stop giving Whatmustido ideas
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I'll admit, I also worry that virgin blood to fix up Athena will work along the 'stealing their life force' lines of blood magic, though that seems like something Nav would have asked already and I just forgot since this literal epic is so long that they needed ten whole chapters just to recap the important bits.
It fits with Hera's general misunderstanding of the value of fae life or life in general. I'd fear for the children.
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I'd say all the aristocrat paintings are like that but some are super creepy, like those in a haunted castle. Should have had Twilight put a cantrip on it so the eyes follow you around the room.
Always a great read and always happy to see an update.
However our main character just caused a huge problem for themselves and now its a race. You see, he has proven that these "left over" locations from an older species are not impenetrable after all.
You just need the right team with solid backing (as a "well off" dragon or a nation might provide) and you too could be hauling back riches, arcane devices, data, eternal youth (you never know). Its not like the tales of his adventures are being kept quiet after all. Even in the event of a gag order being in place, information control gets a lot harder the more people are involved. Add some wine and bad judgement...
I don't know if he would consider it a betrayal if other national leaders sent their own expeditions to claim advantage / wealth now that the method of breaking in is understood.
I could see the changelings doing so as they might have the best intelligence network and know where these locations are. Also the best chance of learning what other nations might know about these locations.
Also, many people will see themselves as being at least as clever and lucky as that strange person they keep hearing about. So the "Mysterious Places people don't come back from" might just see a whole bunch of new visitors as the gold rush begins. Blank spots on the map will be filled in. Curious colts and fillies will be diving into old condemned buildings and caves with warning signs. Mass hysteria.
Adventurers, government agents, and others will be knocking on and knocking down doors and walls to all the places they have heard of or have known about but never bothered to look into until now. If nothing else, old dangers might need to be put down before others find a use for them.
Not sure what they are going to find even if they succeed and if they survive. But keeping potential rewards for themselves is what the powers that be do. The lust for wealth and all that can move mountains.
I would place a bet that the castle of the two sisters won't last a month before some dragons might be tearing it down looking for lost treasures. Some might decide the EverFree forest itself must be hiding something if it causes so many problems for those who enter.
I would be worried about infiltrators to the crew now that success is in the air. Our hero pays amazingly well and has a great track record of bringing his crews back alive. Some of them might answer to other masters.
On another note, our hero has another daughter to catch up with. As well as assassins who represent parties who won't like the wind of change he heralds. Good times indeed.
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You know all I could think of when Newlestia was there was: oh no, you aren’t beaten yet
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yes but the entire point was that they were talking about literature as a whole, so that's not just ongoing stories.
And yeah, looks like twiggles is just completely desensitized to that shit now lol.
FUCKING BURN!!!
That portrait perfectly captures how done with this shit Taya and Nav are.
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Of course you couldn't. You're a slowlax.
(Snorepoke?)
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That would explain why it has such a pronounced corrupting effect (more so than just raw power, alone, should have). Maybe it's less "Celestia puts it on & reboots" and more "someone else puts it on and they slowly become Celestia". Though how much of an effect it would have when her soul is technically still in a living body is questionable. Probably result in a sort of "the clone thinks it's the original" scenario.
And so comes post coma time. Yeeee ya!
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Wow, wasn't expecting to get roasted like that.
And yes, it is a Slowlax.
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Very early on, when Nav and Spike went to Egypt. She stayed with Celestia and her brother. First time though, before finding Taya