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Dragons, mate. Evil things, they are.
But, I loved the chapter, looking forward to the next one.
Sometimes I forget that Nav is really Discord with his personality taking over. Kinda confusing, but interesting, none the less.
Although the dragon reactions to the ponies is understandable, I find it sad that Navarone could not have made the dragons into his friends or some kind of acquaintances. Would have given him more interesting topics of discussion with the dragons.
Of course the ponies ruined the dragon gig. He was actually doing fine down there. Though he should really make weapons and armor that can defend against a dragon. Going down there with only that little tiny weapon was not smart. Wonder if they'll ever meet Spike's parents
Fluttershy is making her moves on him. Wonder if that will go anywhere.
Side note: Twilight is a jerk leaving him behind. He gave her the answer to help her escape and then she gave him the biggest imaginary finger that she could give him. At least he can still trust his feathered counterparts to back him up. And now everypony is traumatized (or aroused) with seeing him streaking across town.
Very nice chapter.
darn you you used a couple of references i would have used in my story not the one was much of a reference if not just a "phrase" since you only used it once...
"I turned to Rainbow Dash. “Besides, I’m not the only one that likes to eat mares,” I said with a shit-eating grin. She turned several shades of red and started choking. I giggled and settled back down."
OH GOD MY SIDES
Long ass chapter is long
Long ass chapter has references
Long ass chapter is BOSSS
I have a feeling i will be seeing that red diamond again
And now I can add Twilight to the list of irredeemable characters in this story. Thanks for that.
So when is he going to get his powers?
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He's already gotten the power of flight and he's picking up how to manipulate. He gets powers slowly so he doesn't get way too overpowered.
2787643 Also a nice touch that most real opponents he faces (up to this point, anyway) can still simply crush him like a bug if they feel like it and assuming he can't rely on the sky for an emergency exit. As useful as being a clever manipulator and liar can be, it's usually of at best minimal use for protecting yourself from somebody saying "oh, fuck this" and bashing your head in with a brick or hammer or 5,000lb. claw. It's a nice counterbalance, him having to use his head to overcome his shortcomings in matters of physical conflict.
honestly though fuck twilight i would kill her, not even joking she can fuck herself.
Hummm... fuck Twilight and Rarity, seriously, those girls need to get their priorities straight.
And hug Fluttershy, you made her so damn hugable, it's a wonder i'm still conscious from sweetness overload and i'm perfectly ok with that.
Whelp, that's a Dwarf Fortress callout directly. It's also one that invokes nobles. This was my favorite before, now even more so. Remember guys, Losing is Fun!
horsefeathers! i found another error... how can this be? ITS IMPOSSIBLE!!!
dunno who said it
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I actually did it that way on purpose, but I'm not surprised someone would see it as a mistake. I went ahead and changed it to reduce confusion.
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hmm, now that you say that i can see how it would be correct and an error. but i guess fixing it would reduce the confusion.
I must ask you a question that I've been dying to know ever since i finished version one of the story.
How does it feel to be writing the longest story on the site?
If... you don't mind me asking...
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Eh, feels alright. Mostly ashamed, though.
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ashamed?
but why?
I never expected that... is it from the amount of work you put into this story?
You have my honest curiosity
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Million words about ponies. Whenever I think about what I could have done with that time, I get depressed. I just want to finish this bloody thing, now.
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oh. yeah i know what you mean...
thought this would cheer you up. Never thought a million words about ponies would make someone depressed. but i guess that's how some book author's feel.
i don't think anyone blames you for how you feel. you should take a bit off working on this story... seriously.
every new chapter that comes out MUST BE READ
I'm trying my hardest not to fanboy... damn these ponies!
Why did i ever start liking the darn things... oh that's right... to stop from going insane...
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I'm just happy the end product is good. I'm definitely not ashamed at the quality, just that I could have been writing something that might actually make me money. It's been fun to write, for the most part. And it's definitely good practice. But now that I've gotten relatively good at writing, I figure I could be actually getting something out of it if I tried. But I can't just stop a project until I've finished. So onward I forge, improving and adding more, until I get to the inevitable end.
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Pff, i'd be worried if you were ashamed of the quality
if i had money, i'd donate a ton of money to you, your writing skills are amazing, i must say.
3614727 Aww, don't rush it mate, don't destroy said epic story with a rushed ending ~
This story is just...FANTASTIC,!!!!
An actual Dwarf Fortress reference! Many brownie points were scored.
The Stockholm syndrome is strong in this one.
Am I the only one here who wants Kat to fucking die?
3868769 No.
DWARF FORTRESS FUCK YEAH!!!!
LOSING IS FUN
This confused me for a while, is it a reference to this from chapter 18?
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Yes.
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Thanks.
Hypocrite.
Also I keep wondering why is he so fixated on lies... even if he really is good at lying, he takes a too much pride in it... that can't be healthy.
“Yeah, just look at you! You’re purple!”
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3614575 I found a mistake, I have no clue how it survived for so long.
Missing quotation mark.
4376088 Don't know if you've been asked this before, but is that picture from AoT?
Good thing he got bored with the party.
I just love this story so much.
Oh my god, Dwarf Fortress.
There's nothing your nobles would enjoy more than a nice, quiet lava bath, or a collapsing legendary dining room.
Nav's quick to kill Calix for being a abusive dick but hesitates at tha thought of killing Kat. His relationship with his rapists is so odd
I couldn't figure out why this made me laugh so much. Then I remembered, it's very similar to something I've done with my friend Megan. A little bit of background, I don't normally tease people for being short, and she 5'2", so really not too short, but it's been a running thing with her. So, when getting up to leave from an instuctor meeting, she groaned and said "It's so far up." Without missing a beat, I responded "Yeah, imagine how the rest of us feel." She reacted about the same way Twilight did.
Humor is good enough for a like. I'll hold off on the favorite until I get caught up.
>The guards at the gates also made me peace-bind my weapons as I walked into the city
>We follow our orders, though, and since we’re told to peace bind weapons, we will do so
Is it peace-bind, or peace bind?
Losing is fun!
Best noble ever.
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Isn't he a person/persona that created discord(if i understood it right) so isn't he like really old since discord said he immortalized him?
7074295 Discord immortalized Cain. I don't think he immortalized Ano- Navarone, but I don't know. Discord said Anon (Lets call the Navarone that was not called into being by Discord Anon) was the only person he ever truly despised.
No Spoiler mark, because this is all from the first chapter.
Wow. I'm putting Emerald Script on my list of favorite OCs.
She's just the right mix of everything you would expect,and more then a fair share of rationality and reality.
I really like the way she seems to adapt to different people's and situations, but yet keep her normal manerisms when it comes to interaction.
I especially like her joking nature. "Ropes" and the way she seems to have an eye for certain somebodies when she likely thinks their not looking.
Its a shame Calif had that "unfortunate accident" though such a nice guy, may his pure would rest in peace.
Now that ending though...dang. Two assassin's hiding in a roof.
Who da thunk it?