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I referenced this picture, if anyone cares: http://i100.photobucket.com/albums/m8/whatmustido/Do%20not%20judge%20me/1341007322326.jpg
That chapter was... meh?
Also,
Lolwut?
1812747
Fixed that.
Wait... why is there a romance tag? I thought we made it through that shitstorm?
1812781
Read some other comments. Just because the story doesn't currently have romance doesn't mean it didn't in the past. Someone pointed that out and I realized it was sort of true.
1812787
Yeah, I saw brightwarriorz comments, but still, the romance tag doesn't necessary. Sure, there was a lil romance, but that's all over, and from what I can tell you're not planning to add more.
1812819
From what you can tell.
1812614 Nice picture. And private army of timber wolves....most genius idea. Getting pony hug piled while trying to evade question. Priceless.
1812819 I'm at chapter thirty five or so, and I can tell romance is a recurring thing. Even if Nav never returns it, it's there. Plus, if a story contains a lot of something, or intends for that message come across, then the tag should be there. Still, you have a fair point... However who knows if there'll be more romance or not?
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Aren't you the cruel one...
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Mr. WMD, over here, is implying there will be more.
1812443 Well I knew that it has clop. My sticky screen proves that-- I mean lolwut?
I just thought it was funny, and considering there is no indication of said clop until you get there... And I know, I just like to know things that probably aren't ever relevant to anything ever.
1812878
There used to be indications of clop. I removed them all when I realized the chapters with them got more views than those without.
1812878
There used to be an indication, but you'll have to ask WMD yourself, if you wish to know why he removed them.
1812865 I see that, to be fair I knew that before he "cleverly" hinted at it.
Also, you corrupted poor spikey wikey Mr. WMD! You monster.
Cool pic.
Navi just keeps getting more and more junk. Though it was nice that we got a scene of him enjoying his time with his friends.
I thought that scene seemed familiar. Now I know.
I don't think I've commented for a chapter or two, so let us see here....
-Nav got a Timberwolf. Hells yeah. I like this. Especially the part with him possibly making a whole lot more.
-Cadence isn't trying to force romantic love on Navarone and is only being his friend? Who is this imposter? But I do like this, it shows their evolving dynamic. Didn't Nav say earlier that she is like his sister?
- The Griffons now have a Parliamentary system? I bet Celestia is going to love this. Not.
- Overall, everything seems to be going along swimmingly with your writing. I think I only caught one mistake this entire chapter. And the pacing is good.
I just thought I'd let you know, I'm reading this again, and when I think about what I'm reading here at the end, I get a terrifying feeling that the story is getting close to the end.
1812889>>1812887 Seems legit. Still, the views for each chapter should be up by about a few hundred... Thousand. Clop or no.
1812919
I depend on my fans for advertising. I post my story almost nowhere except on skype because it feels wrong to whore myself out like that.
As always good job!
My eyes almost boggled out of their sockets when I say this updated Loving it.
Noticed mistakes counted three but forgot the other ones before this one.
since I was able to talk to the wolves, the wolves would be willing to talk to *them*
fuck this is the best story ever i still remeberd when you posted a new chapter every day around 10.man you are the reason for my existance
Awesome. Do moar now.
1813151
Fixed it.
1813315
Working on it.
1813195
Most of the story was prewritten back then. Now I'm posting as I write.
1812941 As Nav has proven, sometimes being a whore is okay.
Yes, Navarone is a massive whore.
Nav's got himself a wolf now, fuck yeah! You should name him Blood after the dog from the story "A Boy and His Dog".
YAY update.
An army of timber wolves would be cool, But i think having it as a pet would be better.
Timberwolf joins the party! You have gained empathic bond! Be sure to show him to Blueblood once so that the wolf can pee on him!
Hm, interesting part with Zecora, and I liked the foreshadowing that you hinted at, with the seed. I think I can imagine who would be the sacrifice if that were to happen. *cough* annoying unicorn on the zep *cough*
Heh, and does he unknowingly love Fluttershy? Or is in denial?
Anyway, I liked the chapter, was nice.
Great chapter as always. I always wanted to see how Nav would tell Cadance what love exactly is from a scientific point of view, just to see the reaction. If Nav gets aroused by ponies asses, then there is no hope left for him. I am not being a jerk, I am only stating the fact. I have my suspicions about the "ghost" in the library. It always comes down to the hugs does not?
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He never said anything about arousal, just that they're attractive. I think we all know he lost all hope for himself a long time ago, though. And if Nav started trying to tell Cadance about love, it wouldn't end well for him. Remember, she likes torturing him.
1815319
There is a thin line between attraction and arousal.
He could bring Cadance down by telling her that loves is nothing more than a chemical in the brain, no different than eating large quantities of chocolate.
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You just know she would find an answer to that. It would be something he couldn't answer that would only end in pissing him off.
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What ever happened to good old human ingenuity in weaseling out of any conversation? All he has to do is make her question herself and then he wins. I have no doubt that you, me or anyone else could win this. However, he is not really out to brake her beliefs and all that so it does not really matter for him. And how do you go agains science? It is a solid argument, even in a fantasy filled world with talking barn yard animals.
1815503
Because she can just say magic and the science argument goes away. Sure, science is law in our world, but in a world with flying horses and unicorns, who is Nav to say magic doesn't run everything?
1815569
He could have at least tried... and then fail. Alright fine, you got me there. I still think anyone else would have had a better chance.
Man, this story is so long. i wonder sometimes if it's ever going to end. It's so good, but I wonder if you plan it out, or do you just make it up as you go along? If planning, that's ridiculously good man, because I think this story will still be another 200k words, at least. I'm just estimating based on how in-detail you go, and how much more stuff you've alluded to- the giant journey in one year's time, and other stuff, too.
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It's a little bit of both. I do have some things sort of planned, but I keep getting off track as I think of more and more to talk about. It's getting annoying, really.
1821987 well, never quit. I love this story and so do a bunch of other people, and everyone will rage if u let it die now. You have to finish it! ;D
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Face it. Nav will somehow end up with with something that treats him well while still being a crazy bitch.
Or he turns gay...which frankly doesn't bother me at all.
And speaking of relationships....I'm glad Nav is starting to show more of his feeling toward Taya. Having a father showing he loves you could help Taya in the long run with her mental problems. Heck I think the author is setting up a Roaring Rampage style chapter for when some poor dumb fuck hurt Taya or threatening Taya. Hell not even Celestia or Luna could control Nav when it come to Taya.
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Woo, one person that doesn't mind if he turns gay! That bodes well for the future.
Also, he's not really good at showing emotion. He knows it's good for Taya so he does what he can, but it doesn't always work.
1823926
Well fuck... you sir are one of a kind. Granted, I would rather not have any romance, but meh, I am but one reader among many.
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1824091
Well if you were abused and used by members of the opposite sex wouldn't you.....actually I don't think any of use would go gay.....Fuck I just ruined my point.
Also whatmustido.....Why the Fuck has Nav not had a freak out yet from all the shit that has been done to him by the Ponies? I know he will leave soon but still hes acting pretty restrained when it come to these matters...is...is he saveing up all his hate for one last proper fu for everyone?
Cause knowing the shear crazyness of Luna and the Mane six they will try to follow him when he leaves equeastria. So he better have something good to shatter the friendships he has with them.
Except Fluttershy of course.....Fuckin Weeaboo
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In the chapter I'm writing right now, Celestia is building up a very massive debt with Nav. Trust me when I say being followed won't be a problem
1825259
While I might be wrong, I'm pretty sure Nav is at a very unstable state. Imagine a door, all those problems try going to that door BUT at the same time, clogging up said door. Also, I don't see myself becoming gay, but I can see why Nav would... he's gotten a metric shit ton of abuse from the females.
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Wait, is he leaving next chapter? If so... thats bitchin'
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I've always preferred imperial fucktons to metric shittons, but that's just me. And no, Celestia's just abusing her friends with benefits privilege in a way that's going to come back to haunt her.
1826100
^This
Also, wait... so her debt is gonna come back to bite her in the ass next chapter?
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She's building the debt next chapter. You'll see when you read it.
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But i want to know nowwww!!1
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You can't always get what you want, mate. You should get it soonish, if I can get my family to leave me alone for long enough.