Awww yeah, I was hoping you would grace us with SN update this weekend!

ONE MILLION WORDS GG

Million!

Congratulations on a Million!

Sweet, update. Good chapter, better than most for some reason. And you broke one million words. Fuckin' insane, man.

Are there even any other mlp fics over a million words? The only one I can think of that comes close is Project Horizons by Somber.

May you have a happy million word celebration, congratz to everyone that had to do with this story.

Interesting... but couldn't the Google humans just go to their top grade military bunker? Maybe setup some nice looking kinetic strike satellites to defend it from the outside? I'd imagine humans have a much more efficient way to throw a satellite into orbit by now, but that's just me... Cool chapter, grats on the million mark.

Woo! One million! Have a few drinks for your accomplishemt my friend! You deserve it!

First of, congratulations on 1 million words. It has been a blast to read the whole story so far.

Now, to the chapter itself:

Hah, funny chapter indeed. Rarity getting spanked, hard! Twilight going a little crazy again with Nav either ignoring her or making her think she is seeing things.

And ofc, the crown piece of the whole chapter....Pinkie drinking coffee!

What's the scouter saying about her partying levels, Fluttershy?

It's over 9000!!!!!!!!

And then she turned into Super Sayian Surprise!

I wonder how long it will take Pinkie to hunt Nav down so she can get into his coffee supplies?

Anyway, really loved this chapter, had me laughing all the way. Good progression on the story aswell.

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Any reason why it's better than most? It'd be nice to know so I can keep doing whatever it was.
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I wrote through my vacation. I don't know if I should be proud or ashamed. All the way up in Colorado. I'm writing this from my phone's mobile hotspot since the Chicago Ohare airport doesn't have free wifi.
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Last I heard, Project Horizons was longer than mine.
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They did, but there's only so much you can do. Even with five thousand people, the human population might be buggered. Especially if Discord was still around and kicking...

2341014 Still the longest story on FiMFiction.

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That's why I said for some reason. I don't know, I just liked it more. Not that any of your chapters are particularly bad... but this was just more entertaining, for some reason. Maybe it was because of how you mentioned the journey Navarone's going to go onto soon.

EDIT:
Very unique rap....

Everyone, remember to upvote this. I can't believe that 2,252 people have viewed this story and only 468 have even voted. This could easily get featured again if enough of you upvote this.

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Obviously the science of genetics has come a long way... can't the remaining humans just... create some more genetic variety?

This is milestone for dude you should get a reward for most words in a fic and this only your 78th chapter you should be proud good work,

I think Rarity was actively trying to help set Fluttershy up with Nav with the lingerie modeling thing. I wouldn't be surprised if Rarity gets help to turn Fluttershy into a human for a while and dresses her up as Sailor Moon for Nav.

waffles with awesome-sauce

I wonder which pawn Discord will use. Also, poor Fluttershy not getting any love from Nav.

I love your writing, may it live on always

2341014 Really? I need to catch up on that then.

Looking at these comments i really want to read this D:
But this is so B***ing long that i would need to alocate alot of my day in order to even take a chunk out of it
Even though i havent read it i can still be excited!
YOU HAVE HIT THE 1,000,000 MARK! WOOT
Anxious to read
-Buck

yay update

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They probably could and I wouldn't be surprised if they did. Or at least, tried to. Who knows? Maybe some humans abandoned the planet, waiting to come back when it wasn't an irradiated wasteland.
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There would be no survivors if this happened.
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I really, really need to go back and edit those early chapters. They're so very terrible and make so little sense. It actually pains me to read them. It gets better, trust me. Very little in the early chapters matter, thankfully.
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Second longest. Project Horizons is longer.
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If you decide to read it, know that the early chapters are a marsh of despair, something to be conquered and dominated rather than read and enjoyed.

I'm surprised Navi didn't go up to Twilight and freaken figure out what the hell that summoning spell was.
Fluttershy is trying rather hard to seduce Navi in her own way. What happens in the end of the story will be interesting.
Though Navi and Rarity's relationship is the most entertaining. They just love pissing each other off.

2342311 pfft ive already DECIDED i just havent gotten around to allocating enough time to put a nice dent in it
As for your first chapters... no sweat, ive probably read worse.
Anyways
Achievement Get! - 2 Author comments in 5 minutes!

Cool. You updated.

This is thye best HiE I have ever read, mostly because it gives a new perspective, with the slightly blunt way of our humanity. You chose to be a bad good guy that knows he is not a good guy. It makes fun of the way the try hards work, with their 'I end up in equestria, becomes a hero'. I dunno, this is my thoughts on the difference. Also, the touch of discord being man made gives a new spice to fim. I haven't found many of those.

well, shit. when I searched this is the only story on this site that has 1 mill words, congratulations! you should be proud.

One! Million! Words!
Congratulations good sir you are the proud owner of the first MLP fanfic to reach one million words ever, of all time!
Have a stash, thank you good night.

~ for further delirious commentating. Be back whenever I've been up for too long.

I forgot, does Fluttershy know that Nav's leaving? And if she doesn't, I wonder how she would react if she did find out? Things sure are heating up, and I really want Nav x Fluttershy... But that isn't really possible, is it?

Anyways, nice chapter. Congrats on the mil.

“Dude, don’t yell in front of Spike! He’s not feeling well.” I waited for her eyes to flick to him and for him to let off a well-timed groan before continuing, “And you obviously aren’t either if you think there’s something over my shoulder.”
I dove for cover as Twilight exploded in rage.

I laughed so hard for some reason.

Every chapter is interesting, even when Nav is doing a whole lot of nothing that important. How is that possible?

Congratulations on 1,000,000 words!

1 Million words, wow.

And, I know that it's supposed to be sort of the point, but 1 million words of a very bitter, cynical Navarone is finally wearing me down. Not sure how much more I can read of 'I hate this pony for [Reason],' 'I want to leave,' 'Who can I keep [secret] from [pony],' etc. While you've definitely proven that you can write to us, it just seems to be getting extremely stale. The brief trip to the past broke up the monotiny somewhat, but all the same, I'm reading these mostly out of habit there days. I'm not exactly sure what to say, but Navarone is getting way too predictable? Somewhat flat? I'm unsure of what would be the proper wording, but it's the same responses to nearly every siutation that pops up now. Just... been unsatisfied for awhile, and thought I'd voice my feedback. Hopefully it's more constructive than pure criticism.

Till next chapter.

i have a bad feeling for the future of this story

Positives:
This story keeps me absolutely hooked.
It is written in such a vivid nature and I've never felt for one second that anyone has broken character or done anything to spontaneous as to arouse a sense of inconsistency.
I love the way all the characters are portrayed and their emotions and opinions are all very interesting, if not always to the point.
Chapter 77 introduced me to some great music I may have otherwise never found, I applaud this.
I feel intellectual for reading a story with more than 1million words.

Negatives:
Navarone as a character is becoming stale, and predictable. Of all the characters, he's the one who the author should have the most creative freedom with, and although we saw a distinct change of personality in the first run of chapters, since about the mid-way point he has been consistently cynical despondent with little to no change in that, regardless of what changes around him. He's become relatively predictable.
The 'going to the past' was a great move as it split up the monotonous direction that the story has taken, but that was cut short and until it happened I still harboured the same opinions about the intensity of the story. It doesn't seem to sprint or flow, it seems to just trundle along, with everything being taken in stride.
Around the 50 chapter mark I thought the distinct lack of appearances from Discord was very interesting, as I felt the story was building to a point where he would make his appearance and everything we had read before would play into what he does or says when his character comes into full swing. 27 chapters later I'm starting to find myself becoming frustrated that, especially after 1,000,000 words, Discord still hasn't played as much of a part in this story as I felt he should have, although I am fully aware that this will change eventually.

Damn i love this story.

Also it would crush me if Nav and Fluttershy didn't end up together.

Finally finished! This is the first chance I have had to sit down and focus on reading the whole chapter. I have to say, it was very entertaining even though nothing of importance actually happened.

For the story as a whole, from beginning to end, I have to agree with some of the others. Although Nav did go through some big personality changes early on, he seems to be getting a bit stagnant and predictable as of late. Something needs to happen to help change his perspective to maybe something a bit more positive. Personally, I would like to see Nav giving Taya a bit more attention, he seems to be neglecting her for some reason. Maybe maybe he could give Flutters a chance one of these days... Also, Rainbow should totally hook up with Vinyl Scratch and Nav. Just sayin.

Looking forward to the next chapter, keep it going boss!

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That's one of my weak points. I try to have them say the right things, but I usually have them say it incorrectly. If that makes any sense.
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Damn, I thought I had fixed that.
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She doesn't know.
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Any reason why?
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Wow. Fluttershy is a more popular choice than I was expecting.
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Discord is just about to make a move. Hopefully it will be what you're looking for. If it makes you feel any better, you can look at the bottom of the prologue and see that most of the plot has been caused by him. Hopefully the story will also start picking up as Nav gets out of the mindset that he's just burning time until he leaves.
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Second, actually. There's one called Project Horizons that has over a million.
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Again, I'm hoping the trip will help with this. Honestly, this story has been going on much longer than it should have. Maybe it'll end soonish before it gets too dull.

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I'll wait and see. Honestly, you started to lose me around the time he burned the bridge with Luna (Yeah, it's been awhile). The story itself as far as plotlines has been pretty solid, but the characterization is what's growing stale. Don't think the trip will change that, but we'll see. Then again, he really doesn't have much bridges left TO burn, so it might force a characterization shift.

I gotta say though, would love to see what you could do with a lighthearted romance focused story, rather than this darker one. I'd probably jump on that train if it ever departed.

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Well IMO it seems Fluttershy is a great match Nave and the only one that looks like that cares about Nave.

2346578 I'll have to wait and see! I have absolute faith that you'll make it incredible. Can't wait.

2346578 You're surprised that one of the most caring characters is a popular choice of mate for one of the most broken characters in your story? As afraid as Nav is of destroying her innocence (let's be honest, that's basically what he's afraid of), she would help him. She would help him grow as a character, or at the very least change.
And by the looks of things, he will have to sooner or later. Nobody wants a light, happy carefree Nav, but one who isn't nearly as cynical and spiteful as he is now would be nice. What if Discord's move is to do exactly that: Change Navarone because otherwise he could ruin his plans. The way I see it, either you gotta make Nav more likable or just a fountain of hatred, preferably the former.
Give him a reason to care about the ponies. Give him motivation other than "survive to piss people off". I would give him some ONE to care about. preferably.
Of course, he could always find out he isn't real. But that wouldn't end well, would it?

Anyways, I'll trust you on that he'll start to change soon. A good ol plot would do some of that, huh? He could always find out that Taya is in cahoots with Discord too.

2346578 Oh yeah, and I imagine Nav's voice as scottish too, just so you know.

Well, I'd like to see Nav give Fluttershy at least a chance, although from the way he has treated her in the past, I don't know if it would work out. For sure would like to see some sexy time
I still think this story still has some way to go, obviously Discord and his plans, hopefully getting some revenge on the princesses for treating him like crap over the years, him leaving Equestria, his quest to rescue the "elementals" are just some of the things to look forward to, at least for me. Keep on writing, mate.

Man, I hope you don't end this story anytime soon. Hell, Nav just going around fucking with people is massively entertaining.

Really do hope to we're humans pulled forward in time as a political faction.

About fifty thousand words left before this becomes longer than the Harry Potter series.

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Hey man, if you enjoy writing and you're in a super cool relaxing setting, then why not take the time to do something you enjoy. That's what vacations are all about right? I'm glad you took the time to hammer out a chapter, as always it was awesome! Hell, my computer has been dead all week so now everything I do on fimfiction is via Android... needless to say it's a pain in the ass, but to me definitely worth the trouble. It has also taken me a while to get used to the mobile app... its different to say the least. Anyway, this was a good chapter. I am looking forward to seeing who goes with Nav to rescue the elementals, and what life changing experiences he and his crew will have.

I don't know if you've answered this already in your chapters, but we also need to know what the true purpose of Celestia sending Nav to the abandoned factory.