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7871312 Well I can help any way you wish, being the fifth time I've reread this book I'm very interested in how it'd end. If it would ever end. Anything I can do to speed such a process along is something I can strive for. Or help if needed.
Fantastic chapter! I love seeing all these loose ends tied up in preparation for the next adventure. I also particularly enjoy Nav's dry, blunt humor, so getting an update is a total treat. Can't wait for the next installment!
Great chapter
He better turn back into a man the moment he reaches tranquility and absolute peace with him being a woman.
Also please stop making nav into a cringy sonic oc
well, that was fun. you're nuts by the way.
Three outta three voices in my head agree:
Blossom is cutest vampony.
Ooooh crap, she's feeling optimistic, there goes the mission.
Still love the interaction between Nav and his daughter. This chapter had a ton of golden moments and heartfelt scenes .
I do not like that Nav kept the bat wing... it just breeds trouble.
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It's kind of obvious what he's doing with Nav's character appearance changes, but I have to admit that insult made me giggle.
Also I still want him to turn back into a man at some point as well, and everyone trying to make him accept it pisses me off too. I did say it enhances the story because it fleshes out his pride, but everyone going, "Oh Navarone, the God of Chaos made you female, it's perfectly natural to change your very personality, as well as accept what everyone else calls you."
I mean, fuck, it's like none of them are even slightly worried the God of Chaos has a fucked up plan for him being female, especially with how forceful he was in keeping him female.
As for the chapter itself, I got warm happy feelings seeing how much Celestia trusts Nav, "Put on this ring that pretty much nullifies all your conventional defenses"
And she just puts it on without hesitation.
It almost feels like she'd give him the kingdom if he-
OH SHIT! I just remembered! Wasn't she supposed to reveal how she doesn't control the sun before he leaves? Or am I confused and she's planning on doing it after he's gone?
I still can't get over how much goes on in this story you have here. Most chapters are longer than half the fics on this website with three times as much raw information.
I'll probably re-read for the 4th time just for shits and giggles while I wait for the next chapter.
Aww that's cute, Nav is feeling optimistic.
Reality is going to shit on her hard isn't it?
Hmmm. I expected a comment from Chromium pointing out things I had missed in the chapter, either funny or plot points. I guess it's up to me this time.
Nav just hugged the Stay Puft marshmallow mare.
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Also, I don't remember half of the things on Rarity's dress. Time to go back for a reread I guess.
7871679 I only just noticed that the chapter was there, mate. Like, just 5 minutes ago. I haven't read it yet but rest assured, I won't let you down. :P (btw, I'm not Chromium anymore; Changed my name to Chroma Matrix :P)
I've never fucked a fuck myself, but I'm assuming that's meant to say sucks.
Fuck, that was strong. You really excel at putting in those little extra touches that are both funny and make Nav and Taya feel alive.
You just broke the 11th and most important commandment, man;
Thou shalt not be a cocktease.
Nah as always good chapter. Having said that, I just realised Luna is probably going to shit bricks when she sees how Nav has changed physically and mentally when she gets back from her timeshare on the moon or wherever the fuck she is now.
Navs new Celstia annoying dress was designed before, or influenced by all the tattoos on the big guy from Moana?
How much fun will Rarity have, making all sorts of Special Clothing for Kat, maybe even Q class in all its meanings?
If they are heading to the Fire elemental Hawaii next, should we be looking at that scene from 2012, where it looks more like Iceland, and as such, when going to Iceland it looks more like Etna etc?
If Silver Quill is handling the trade, will she also handle the accounts, or will Level Ledger get hired for that job?
Nav is optimistic. How long until everything goes horribly wrong? Because if it's not immediately after they leave Equestria then it's a staged train wreck
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I'm pretty sure that Celestia wants to put waaaaay more plans and preparations in place before she gives up a huge chunk of her power. Nav just put her on a time limit by publishing her forbidden books, some of which are the ones that take a dump on Geocentrism and expose the true size and mass of the sun, but she's got some time left.
New favorite quote from the story. Yep.
Holy fuck, Watcher was a Femboy... Or he often posed as a female. Either one. That's cool I guess. Also, I like how Watcher is finally opening up to Nav. It's really nice to see that Watcher isn't the cold and calculating old stallion that he seemed to be earlier in the story.
The description of the dress... Got to me a bit. It's really been quite the ride, this story. There is a reason I've read it so many times. Seeing the way that Nav changes as a person while also changing the world around him is more satisfying that you can imagine. Truly, that would be a beautiful dress and I'm glad you put this in the story.
I want it known that I'm actually writing this while reading the chapter. By that I mean, I read until I find a part I feel that I need to comment on, put in the bookmark, then scroll down here to type out what you are reading right now. With that being said... I just read the part where Nav was reading out the note that Rarity included with the Dress... Honestly, this bit almost made me shed a tear. I love this bit so much, it really shows that they are friends. I don't actually know how to write out what I feel about it; I can't put it into words. I do know that I love it though.
HAHAHAHAHAHA
When Nav gave the ring and key to Kat I had a random thought about the ring. All of the items he got are supposed to be cursed, so my thought was, what if the curse for the ring was that instead of cancelling out magic, it started consuming and storing magic instead. Either within itself or within Nav, though Nav wouldn't actually be able to use the magic or tell that it's being stored. Hell, it could already be doing that.
HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA Fucking LOL I love it
Nav is an anime character.
My sides.
Lol. (Not 'loling' about the Rainbow Dash being more adorable than Fluttershy, which I agree with by the way.)
Well that was entertaining to read. 10/10 chapter. Not my new favorite but the overall quality of your writing is really increasing. I loved it.
Nav...what are we going to do with you?
7871756 I read that and just kept thinking Goddammit, Twilight.
That was easily one of the best chapters you've put out in a long while
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Oh shit. HIT THE DECK!
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That dress description is missing only one thing:
Poor Nav.
Ya know, if she would just open up and TELL Taya "Your lusting after me is HURTING me." I bet that would nip Taya's desires right in the bud.
Because it's obvious it's causing Nav pain, of the emotional variety. Hell it would cause ANY parent pain to be in that situation. But since Taya is a stupid idiotic child, she doesn't realize that.
Because if she did, she would knock that shit off, because as immature as she is, she does love Nav, and if she knew that her desires were causing her 'mommy' emotional agony, BOY would that guilt trip her.
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Nav isn't the only one that has to suffer in this story. The reader gets to do their fair share of it, too.
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Rarity isn't dorfy enough to be a dwarf. If she saw an ungodly abomination from the depths, she'd probably scream in horror and run, not grab the nearest baby to use as a weapon and charge.
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How many cuddles a day would you give her?
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All of my readers are so paranoid.
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And here I was, thinking honey badger didn't give a shit.
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Celestia didn't have a timeline for when she was planning on revealing that. She's been working on collating information with Chrysalis. And it's not so much that they're encouraging him to forget his time as a man, they're just trying to get him to accept reality as it is, not as he wants it to be. The fact of the matter is that he's currently stuck as a chick, because they see no way of turning him back. Part of being happy is accepting yourself for who and what you are.
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Spank him for giving his daughter terrible life lessons?
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You're crazy. Why reread the entire thing if there's a timeline on TVTropes?
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You're slipping, fam.
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It's not my fault Twilight likes teasing people like a dirty little slut. And yes, Luna is going to be quite surprised with his changes.
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No clue what Moana is, no clue who Level Ledger is, never seen 2012, and Rarity loves making pretty dresses of all types.
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If you read it on GDocs, you can leave comments wherever you want. Certain words, certain paragraphs, entire chapters (don't do this), even just punctuation. Also, what Watcher did with his plump pink ponut is entirely his business and theory-crafting about it is rude. So what if he secretly enjoyed the thrill of getting mistaken for a soft mare and is only trying to make Nav happy as a female because he's jealous that he'll never get to experience it? (I actually didn't mean it like that at all, but the thought of it amuses me greatly). Also, now that Nav isn't just his commanding officer but actually his liege lady, he can open up to her more. His job is to serve her in any way he can, which means he can finally let his guard down and not have to worry about sticking to strict military protocol.
7872124 To be fair, we have patterns we can follow to back up our worries. Also the story isn't a very happy go lucky story. That would be boring to write and read.
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If that was the case, she would have stopped after Nav told her hell no the first time and then spanked her the second time. A person can't help what they want, unfortunately. It's something that develops in you early on and once it's there, it pretty much stays with you. Hiding it or denying it typically only makes you mentally unstable. As an awful but apt example, pedophilia typically manifests at an early age, but it's not really a problem until after you turn eighteen and it becomes illegal. But at that point, it's so ingrained in a person that shutting off the desire is impossible, as much as they might hate themselves for it. And just because they have the desire doesn't mean they'll act on it, but it's still there, burning a hole in their mind and making them feel guilty and awful. Somewhat similar story for Taya. She wants Nav badly, but at this point she's aware that it's wrong and feels super guilty about it, but can't stop herself from wanting him. She can, however, stop broadcasting to him that she wants it because she knows it makes him feel awful.
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.
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There was a reason for my holding back from suggesting the usage of FB or clown silk.
I gotta say, ive been following your story for years and i absolutely love this masterpiece, for the longest time even reading the story gave a feeling of depression and hating the world because of Navs mood and situation and now he/she is accepting things more and trying to be a better and happier person it is also felt by the reader, you have a really good way of writing that lets the readers truly get into the story
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We would give her as many cuddles as she is comfortable with. Or more.
We would give her so many.
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Not about it rather as a matter of addressing it in this time
You never disappoint my friend. Navarone, at last finding happiness, at last accepting her life and the ponies in it, at last feeling like she is moving with purpose towards a brighter future. Everyone is so proud of how much she has grown... and with the theme of the next portion of her quest, well, it's only appropriate to see it all go up in flames...
Now my largest question seems to be whether or not there will be a time skip in our future. Oh well, I guess I'll just have to tune in next time! Maybe we'll get ocean monsters!
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You're right, but I don't have to be happy about it.
In fact, I can't be happy about it, even if I accept it.
It would literally make no difference in how much it bothers me, just makes me complain less about it.
All it does is make the people around me less annoyed because I don't bitch about it anymore.
Yet while it does BOTHER them, they can understand why it pisses me off, and that complaining makes ME feel better.
And in Nav's position, I would be reminded how much it bothers me every time someone treats me differently based on it, except now I've internalized the complaints. Granted, I haven't been made a living punching bag like Nav, and given a larger endurance for bullshit, but that shit's going to make him explode at some point.
I mean, fuck, it's pretty clear it still bothers him and he's just rolling with the blow as Watcher put it. (Except it's a blow that leaves him rolling)
You don't accept something that "Changes who you are" against your will, you can only ignore it, and there is a great difference between the two. People who have lost limbs break down rarely after they have "accepted" the injury, but they DO break down, it's just usually when they're alone because they don't want to be a burden on someone, which would hurt even more,"usually".In fact they usually go through the stages of Grief. Which you might've already done for him, now that I think about it.
For Nav, it's not as severe as losing a limb, but it's still a part of him he's reminded he lost every day. Fuck Discord.
It felt... right? Time to be jinxed... The bad luck is coming.
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Oh no, he definitely lost a limb. It wasn't chopped off, but it's still gone.
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Well, I mean....
It wasn't like it was a third leg....
If I could give Nav anything right now, i'd give him a bag of Doritos. He seems like he needs them.
Holy shit¡¡ A new chapter¡¡ I will read all the story again¡¡ Now i have a purpose in life¡¡
by the way it will be my 7th time reading this thing¡¡
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Wow, I feel like a dick for saying that.
...god damnit who'd dying next chapter?
7872124 I think I'll probably switch over to commenting on every little thing over in Gdocs just to annoy you. Thanks for the idea, fam. :P
7872124 Heh... Do you get a notification every time I leave a comment on Gdocs?
Damn
How long is this story now
I actually had to laugh since I imagined Nav saying this in his female voice.
Also I actually wasn't expecting 'sex tag' to finally make a reappearance. Was kind of missing it really.
As much as I like female Nav, I hope you'll turn him back soon enough. Now that he's actually accepting his new gender, tired of fighting it, Discord may find his acceptance much less entertaining, since he isn't complaining or angry about it anymore.
That was kind of the point of the whole thing, to increase his suffering and make the forced gender change a hilarious show.
I'd really think Discord would now simply turn him back into a male, once he is stuck in a embarrassing situation he hasn't been in before, like when he does it with a stallion he turns him male again. That would give him back his original gender, but at least it will compensate Discords entertainment for having forced Nav yet into another situation he never wanted to be in.
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If only there was some place you could easily find that information.
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Don't make me no difference, bruh
“I wouldn’t want to help anyway. Moving fucking fucks..."
I burst out laughing a this grammar error,you silly potato u
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This may be redundant, but isn't that the point?
It's a parallel between him and Discord, the trouble maker of the novel.
You know I might just be addicted to this story
Who needs drugs when you've got diaries, amaright