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Wow...Didn't see that coming...
If that would of happened to me i'd be out for blood, pony blood...
1166793 yo realize that he was raped by two of his ONLY friends. Their friendships would be over not to mention having even WORSE trust issues!
That was a horrifying week for him. Loses his body, finds out that the ponies in the town still don't like him (not even the curtsy of remembering his name), forced to fly despite past events, and two 'friends' take advantage of him to prove a point and fulfill desires.
It's worse if this is his first time...lost his virginity to horses instead of a love one. Crappy week.
The was truely upsetting
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Rape is supposed to be upsetting. Of course, to the ponies it wasn't rape, but it was to the person whose opinions we are reading.
That was fucking horrifying.
Upon reading that there would be clop in this chapter I thought, "What? There has to be some pretty fucking big events for that to happen, as he's made his views clear. I can't imagine what would change his mind."
After reading a bit of it I thought, "Ah, they'll try and force it, he'll make it clear that he doesn't want it and it'll end up as a sad memory of a misunderstanding that will reduce his trust to zero and make regaining it hard, but at some point they'll do something that will convince him to trust them again."
After reading all of it, I can't imagine that he'll ever stay in the same room as them, for any amount of time, never, ever, ever.
Personally, I'd tell them that they are absolute and disgusting monsters that I never wish to see again and that if they try to do that again, I will do my absolute best to kill them, in any manner that I can. If they persist with attempting to get close to me, for any reason, I'd take what I can gather and leave Ponyville, even Equestria if needed. Maybe ask Celestia for a residence in the castle, with an added provision of Rarity and Pinkie never being allowed to visit me.
I can picture Pinkie being clueless enough to go along with it, but Rarity isn't stupid enough to not notice the clear signs of grief he has over his change, only personal desires could cloud her judgement enough for her to miss, ignore or misinterpret them.
But, of course, Discord will want to keep his cover.
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I'm not going to lie: It's pretty fucked up. However, I have explained it in the past. I don't know if I've put this in there, but there's also the element of shame that Navarone was feeling. I mean, if you got raped by two female animals, would you be willing to tell anyone about it? He does his best to avoid Rarity, but he knows Pinkie didn't mean anything evil by it. Hell, objectively he knows Rarity didn't mean anything evil by it either, but he's still terrified of them for now.
1392986 Well, I can't say that I'd see them as animals, not human for sure, but not animals. Their gender doesn't matter to me, either. I don't think I'd tell anyone, except perhaps the princess if she really pushed it, but I would not hide what I felt about them.
I'm not Navarone, and he might hide it from shame and fear. However, I am not him and I have different reactions from him. I wouldn't hide it, but I also wouldn't speak of it for two reasons:
One, the difficulty of bringing legal charges, coupled with an unwillingness to actually press chages that would destroy their lives.
Two, it is a matter that I consider between us, and if they do not press me again I will not rally support against them.
I can tell you, my emotion at being overpowered by a opponent with superior strength and then violated by the same would be anger, not shame and/or fear. In being subdued I struggle harder, I do not surrender. I would not have mounted Rarity of my own volition. I would have used every single free willed moment to fight back and try to break the door down and escape, no matter how many times I was incapacitated, that is simply how I function. I'd resist, as much as I could, without killing or permanently crippling them, until I collapsed from muscle exhaustion. I am stubborn beyond belief and I can ignore any pain, up to and including burns of all degrees, at will. Pain and coercion can never sway me, and anger and stubborness will never allow words to do so either.
I would never hide how I felt about them. That is part ingrained honesty and part simmering anger.
Honeslty, the violation of free will is worse than the rape in my book. Pinkie I might forgive with enough time (years) and consider a "positive acquaintance". Rarity I might tolerate to converse with at a distance after several years, but it would never move beyond that. I might have forgiven drugs, but not mindcontrol.
*cough* Well, that's enough of a tirade. It's just that the scene pushes a lot of my buttons (betrayal, mindcontrol, "I know what you want and you don't", rape, continuing to do something after you find out it's bad, etc...) and flares up emotions, mostly anger, lots and lots and lots of anger.
Anyway, want to say that I'm enjoying the fic, especially with how long it is and the quality of writing. It's too bad that more people haven't read this, I was surprised by the lack of views when I found it. Sorry about the length of my bullshit.
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It's not bullshit and it's a very valid complaint. If I could redo the story, I would have taken a lot of the comments I got about this chapter into consideration and rewrite some sections. However, this is a fuckmassive story. If I had to redo all the interactions between Nav and Pinkie and Nav and Rarity, it would take forever. There are other things I would redo, like making the ponies closer to the show's representation rather than real life ponies.
That said, Navarone has had a... difficult life before his time on Equestria. A lot of it is never really mentioned and most of what is mentioned is probably lies. He was pissed about what happened, but at the same time he's a pragmatist. Yes, fighting would probably make him feel better about what happened, but it would also end up with him in more pain. He's also very passive aggressive and way too forgiving at the beginning. He gets revenge on them in various ways, a lot of which is offscreen.
All that said, I urge you to read the reasoning I had behind the actions of everyone involved, if you haven't already. It's one of the comments above this one.
1393305 I didn't mean it to come of as a complaint, I just meant that it pushed my buttons. Said pushing got my brain rolling on how I would react, and I don't have a lot of passive in my aggressive. This resulted in me vomiting out that mess of words.
I honestly don't mind the similarity to real ponies, it all factors into what makes each fic different from the next.
I'm a pragmatist as well, but some things I feel are too important to allow practicality to overrule expressing my emotions, this would be one of them, and if Celestia herself told me to make nice I'd... politely tell her to fuck off. Politely since she's Celestia and I'm not actually pissed at her. Gah, the anger's getting to me again. I'm gonna finish this before I spout more words.
I have read the reasoning, I understand the reasoning, I agree with the reasoning, I was just expounding on how I'd react in such a situation, regardless of why they did it.
Salud y paz.
I face pallmed so many times
1392986 I understand this is an old comment, but... I've read to about chapter 15, and I haven't seen really any repercussions for what Rarity and Pinkie did. If it were me, I would be able to forgive Pinkie pretty quickly. I mean, Rarity most likely manipulated her into it, and Pinkie loves to make other ponies happy. I would be pissed at Rarity though!
And I would just like to point out that it doesn't quite add up...
They claimed it was to make him happy, but Rarity isn't stupid. Pinkie obviously had reservations, but again, Rarity manipulated her. I can't help but question these things though...
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see this comment: 1166793
Rarity knew that Nav might not initially like the idea, but she thought that he would be happier in the end if he finally got his dick wet. She knew it might turn out bad, but she was hoping and thinking it would turn out good.
....wait so let me get this strait....he got RAPED and MINDFUCKED and didn't tell anyone what! why? how? what conceivable reason could he have to not expose 2 rapists...it doesn't even need to be to the authorities just the "not rapist!" mane six.
holy SH%T!! I cried during this chapter what the fuck! I read it and the only thing I could think was "cant you see you're tearing him apart!!"(mostly to pinkie cause rarity is now a monster in my eyes) [curls into a ball and sobs uncontrollably]
so yeah....at least you didn't shatter my view of best pony....oh god mr/mrs author you're an awesome writer and I sincerely hope Nav's mental state is not a reflection of something that happened to you cause those feels Nav was feeling were horrible ( but were written excellently)
my feeling in no particular order
top part of story
near rape scene (cmc and kidnapping)
RAAAAAAPE!!! (HORRIBLE MIND WRENCHING RAAAAPE!!) (insert metapocalyps NOOOOOOO here.
after (and no seeking of aid!!!!!)
P.S I'm now contemplating a way to enter this ponyverse...(fictionverse?? ponefiction?? I DON'T KNOW!!!) and becoming a psychiatrist so I can console Nav, help pinkie with here "problems" and any other characters that have been traumatized in this world (my logic is that in a world where everyone thinks things are ok and peaceful there would be no psychiatrist's cause no one thinks they're needed, or at least not many)
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You're right about being no psychologists, as we'll find later. As for the reasoning for Nav not telling anyone, see here: 1166793
Hopefully that post will also give you a small bit of insight into why Rarity and Pinkie acted the way they did.
I see you have updated many chapters and removing parts of the title as well, any reason for that?
A couple things before I forget. You got Opal's approval. Good job.
Twilight is experimenting with horns after she saw a chaotic spell happen? Also, since it made a pegasus and a human/unicorn hybrid (everyone expected that to be the mature part I bet!) does that mean the spell was supposed to make an alicorn?
Pinkie used the CMC for something like that? And then Rarity raped him that fucking close to Spike? What the fuck inspired you? I can understand anyone thinking of things like that, but it takes something to make you think of it.
And why the hell does a naked human bring laughter and a cloaked stallion bring blushes? It makes no sense!
And why does the sad pinkie look so fucking happy?!?!?!
1777912 How the hell are you supposed to forgive ANYONE for rape. In any circumstances it would forever splotch your view of them, as well as traumatise you. I wouldn't give a rats tail if Pinkie was being mind controlled by Discord's brother. I COULD NEVER FORGIVE SOMEONE OF THAT. The fact that I am a guy doesn't even matter.
I really hate to say this because this is turning out to be a very good fic, but you kinda aren't writing Pinkie's speech very well.
Pinkie would never say something like this, something like the following example would be much better:
"Silly billy, I’m sure between the two of us we can think of a few more things to help them with!”
or something along those lines...... just saying.
Otherwise like somewhere in my top ten favorites, maybe even top 5.
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I'll admit, the character dialogue is one of my problems. I think I've gotten better over time, but I'm not certain. I know I started pretty bad for all of them but Twilight and Rarity, though. I didn't even bother writing most of Applejack's accent.
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Hmmm I really having problems seeing Pinkie or Rarity doing anything like this, the thing with Luna held suspension of disbelief but the rape is simply not something easy to swallow if you watch the show at all....
I'm sorry, no, im not sorry. You are a fucking idiot, if ANYONE was raped, and it traumatized them, they wouldn't "Let it slide" Fuck that they would tell, especially if you have direct contact with a ruler. Fuck you, just because of this JUST because of this, this is honestly the worst fucking fic ever, there were some issues before but those werent as big as this, i will continue reading, if not for the fact that this story is now amusing for the writers stupidity.
i feel like you should have made him smash raritys head to bits and scream at pinkie until she killed herself
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He does almost get Pinkie to kill herself much later, so there's that. Right now he's still in shock.
if i had his mind set those 2 would get death glare for the rest of their lives (and maybe a creepy smile or two to freak them out but only when no ones looking)
I had to read a slashfic in which Pinkie and Rarity were brutally tortured just to get past that fact that even up to chapter 10, Nav just completely lets the fact that he just got fucking raped slide. No offence author but im having trouble reading this fic after that particular chapter.
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And give himself away immediately? Also, see: 1166793
Aha hahahah holy shit we flew over the shark doing a fucking acrobatic kickflip 1080 while slamming a dew
Fic abandoned. Even Latias' Journey was darker in some ways but I somehow kept reading that. What the hell.
was i the only one who noticed that reference to Navi from The Legend of Zelda?
For the first half of the chapter I refer back to my previous comment.
For the sex scene I can't honestly say I didn't see that coming.
Poor Luna
Damn :/ putting a fucking shirt is going to be a pain in the ass with wings as big as Celestia's
looks like someone is gonna have to strap down his wings to get a shirt on.
God fucking damn. I only finished reading Mute Anon last night, and now this. Stomach sick just about covers it.
If you do read this, Author, does Nav ever get proper justice for this? I've still got 70 chapters to go but it would be nice to just know.
Excuse me while I lie down and sob for a bit.
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In some ways, he does get revenge. But he never really gets justice for it, no. Such is life for the resident human.
ill never see pinkie the same
1907094 Er, mate? Rape is one of the most UNDER reported crimes. People who experience that tend to feel ashamed and dirty and don't want to talk about it. It takes enormous strength to report it. It fucks you up in the head.
The bigger bitch here is how hideously, amazingly out of character Pinkie and (especially) Rarity are. What the fuck, whatmustido? How's that come to pass?
Ok, so I was extremely pissed off before by this chapter. So much I said 'fuck it' and ranted over how you must be a horrible person for thinking that doing this without any real repercussions (even if you said you'd rewrite it if it wasn't so damn long) was the way to go for the story and that the amount of likes on it did not speak well for the brony community. I also was going to stop reading.
Unfortunately I'm extremely OCD about finishing stories and some of my comments weren't entirely true considering the next couple chapters.
I stand by the fact that with how you'd written Navarone so far, no matter whether he knew he was Discord or not, no matter if he was trying to blend in or not, he'd have fucking done something about this. The next few chapters he seems to just shrug it off, Stockholm, sure, I can buy that for most, but this guy isn't that nice. You know what would have worked better (even if not by much and only to justify why he's so fucking passive about this so quickly)? Him swearing to tell Luna what happened one day or asking Celestia to give Luna a note saying what happened and hoping Celestia doesn't read it. Why? Because Luna will get off scot-free or go back to imprisonment and he'll avoid being stuck with her a little longer, he'll have revenge and something will have been fucking done about it.
I also stand by the fact that this is damn close to 'Rarity's Generous Plan' with Rarity getting away with it.
Overall: FUCK. THIS. CHAPTER.
wow, that was actually quite terrifying.... i didnt expect that to happen, man Navarone managed to keep his shit together jesus man wtf was wrong with Rarity? i dont even.... what? Even Pinkie was having second thoughts beforehand
i kinda get why there arent that many stallions, that was scary, well good riddance to hoping for anoter Navarone pony scene i guess
Nice, another rapefic. Pretty pathetic. Downvote.
2911065 good job! You just rated something based on the 7% you have read!
i liked the chapter but i think he needs to get some serious payback whether it be violent,sexual or he just plan humiliates them
Mmhmmm... This chapter seems to be getting only hate...
I honestly liked this chapter if you remove the rape.
I'm going to consider rape the non-canon part of this story and was just there for the cloppers.
Rape. Rape. Rape.
I. Love. Rape.
Thank you, author. Not even 1/10 of the way done with the story and I already got off once. I would offer you sexual favors if I weren't blatantly lesbian.
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Not a rapefic... Although I'm tempted to read that part now... A rapefic is purely about rape. In here it was merely an intriguing filler. So.... Get a life.
I have a feeling the rape will play some part in the story later on.
And now I got even more motivation to torch two certain Some-ponies in my story...
Nav seems like a pretty forgiving guy, if I was there instead of him I would've beaten Rarity to a bloody pulp though I probably wouldn't have been so reluctant to do something with a pony.
Them two days.... wat?
No seriously..... WAAAT?
That went out of the blue sky, here's hoping Pinkie and Rarity got discorded or something, otherwise it's disturbing as allmighty fuck.
If what happened to Nav happened to me, I would have made Rarity disintegrate and force-feed the ashes to Pinkie Pie. Then I would have cut off her tail, mane, and carved the word rapist into her forehead. With a rusty knife.