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Navi levels up! Does he get upgrades every time he finds an elemental spirit? Also was she talking about Naga that worshiped her? That might be important to share with his reptilian friends.
Cool, Elementals... On a side note nav should probably confront Celestia about the changes to his body.
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That would probably be a bad idea. The naga are pretty independent, or at least Nav thinks they are. First, they would have no reason to believe him. Second, he would have no reason to tell them. Third, if he did tell them and they believed him, what would that change?
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Which changes? The wings? She would deny it.
Added another species he had sex with I see.
1.pony 2.naga 3.cat 4.dragon 5.griffin 6.water element
did I miss any?
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Changeling and human.
1383472if she denies it I guess he could chop em off and get flo to heal him
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Why would he do that? He's grown to find the wings tolerable, if nothing else.
Although the whole elemental species came out of nowhere, I like Flo. Never being alone and having someone that respects your boundaries. Hell, she is the best candidate for any kind of friendship or relationship. And the things he could learn, its like having a library or even something like the internet in your head. New powers and someone to watch you back, literally. I am guessing that the quest she asks of him will take some years latter. Chrysalis is no longer in the potential girlfriend list. Does Flo give some kind of magic resistance or other benefits? Because he could really use it.
Fun fact about Flo: Her name was originally Siri. I changed it a few days ago, so if you downloaded the version I have on pastebin it's still Siri.
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She could force the princesses out of his head. She can also take control of some parts of his body if he lets her. She gets really tired from doing that, though, so she'll go inactive for some time after doing it. And Chrysalis is still on the list; just because she's currently in a relationship doesn't mean she'll stay that way. Mainly, Flo acts as his conscience, since the princesses killed his.
Oh, and we're nearing the end of the material I have prewritten. We have about three or four more updates before I stop updating for some time.
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Those benefits are rather useful. And I meant that in the context where Nav says he wont consider dating her. Personally, I think she is one of the best candidates.
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Navarone knows full and well that Chrysalis only keeps him around and is so nice around him because she needs him, or at least he's useful to her. She likes him, of course, but if he stopped being useful she would likely kick him to the curb. Like, he knows that she's evil. She might have been doing what she was doing in Canterlot to help her people, but she could have went about it in a way that didn't make her out to be such a bitch.
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Its always the evil girls that are the hottest, mostly. She was once nice, maybe she is trying to regain her formal self. So Nav has conscience now, that will be interesting to see how it will turn out. And the name Siri, did you mean the greek root meaning "lord"? If Flo is old and wise, than perhaps she may know how to free Nav from the bitch princesses?
It is sad to know that your story will come to short halt soon, however it is nice of you to give the heads up. Thank you.
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No, I just liked the name Siri. Then I remembered the Apple Siri and I realized how well it fit, since she lived in his head and helped him out with things.
Flo may be old, but that doesn't mean she's wise. She is completely alien to Navarone. She isn't even a living thing. When it comes to her morals, I wouldn't expect much. However, she can look through Nav's memories and tell him how he should act based on that. We'll see some of that soon. How he interprets her advice is not always best, though.
And it's not that the story will come to a halt, it's just that I won't be updating every day anymore. Since I've been doing that almost perfectly consistently for fifty-three chapters now, I think it's fair.
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In some other language I cant recall now, Siri means secret. I guess having a voice in your head can only do so much to help you out. An all access pass to your memories is still a really good deal.
Now you have a break from having to update every day and you will hove some time off.
1383682*shrugs*
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Updating every day is relatively easy. I just throw a few chapters up when I have spare time, spend about an hour reformatting them, and then post them every twenty-four hours and one minute. That way I get the max amount of front page time.
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On a completely different subject, will we as the readers find out Nav's real name? And why did he pick Navarone? Was it taken from the movie or something else?
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We will find out his name. Navarone was from the movie Guns of Navarone and it was a cheat code in GTA II. It's just a random thing I pulled from my memory because it sounded cool. When you learn his real name, you might understand why he used a fake name.
Sweet... hate for Discord a nice trait. I'm guessing flo does nothing against Discords control? But otherwise, awesome chapter; finally some Discord hating, and powerful allies. Makes me somewhat sad to think about when Nav's gonna betray them hardcore.
I really hope that Flo doesnt end up hurting Nav in some way, but knowing this story its bound to happen. I wonder if this story will still be going on come November and if it is, will the new material introduced in Season 3 be added?
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If season three stuff is added, it will probably be offscreen. I don't know anything about the plot of Season three, as I've kept myself in the dark, but I don't think it would work with my story.
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I CAME!
1383516 I wonder what is left for him to fuck...
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You'll find out next chapter.
1386046 He needs to keep a damned checklist for this kind of things, that and a counter for how many times he almost died.
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Who says he doesn't? He just doesn't keep it anywhere we can see it.
1386075 It would be funny at the back of his journal was a counter for everything he has done, how many times he got a pony drunk, how many times he got laid, how many times he lied, near death, and his kill count.
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I could probably do some of that. But the number of lies? I'd need a lot of help counting that up.
LET THE HUNT BEGIN!!! hope Nav gets more awsome powers from the other elements
that would AWSOME!!!!
more please
Okay, this was a damn good chapter. I love the idea of Flo helping him ease his mind, and being there to help guide him along his path.
Why do i have a feeling flo is going to be discovered by someone then it will all go to shit...?
Once, there was a time of peace. But that all changed when the fire nation attacked.
I think this is one of my favorite chapters. I fully stand behind the thought that if it wasn't for the ring and Flo, Nav would have (logically) gone full on insane.
Multi-layered plot devices are best plot devices
This chapter was awesome. I can't wait for the elements story arc. This is going to be awesome. I like flo too. Seems like a very nice girl. Wonder if she can hide herself from Celestia and Luna?
Flo mentioned something about the place she was in like being completely safe and cut off
Does that mean that only Navarone was there? Should I still be looking at this like Nav is a real made person by Discord? Discord is just riding inside and controlling a little here and there? It been proven he controls Nav to a point with him getting hurt and etc but I kinda want to know how much
Wonder if Flo managed to drive some kinda wedge between Discord and Nav, she did mention abilities to protect ones mind from intrusion
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The way I see it, Discord just made Twilight muck up a spell and bring a particularly reclusive human to Equestria and in the process set up a tiny invisible fort within his mind. From there Discord starts well... You've read the story up to now.
2598328 i no this comment is old but its just PERFECT
also im lovin Flo
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Hands down best chapter for me
Finally things are looking up for Navaron
Is this chapter an excuse to make bad Avatar references later?
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There are no giant blue cat-people in my story, no.
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I think he meant AVATAR: The last Airbender
"Water. Earth. Fire. Air. Long ago, the four nations lived together in harmony. Then, everything changed when the Fire Nation attacked. Only the Avatar, master of all four elements, could stop them, but when the world needed him most, he vanished. A hundred years passed and my brother and I discovered the new Avatar, an airbender named Aang. And although his airbending skills are great, he has a lot to learn before he's ready to save anyone. But I believe Aang can save the world."
Thoughts of Nav's sword
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How close am I? :D
Rune? Futhark or is it in ogham?
QUESTION!
are there others???
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Yeah. Chaos.
It should be asked shouldn't it?
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Slang. http://www.urbandictionary.com/define.php?term=assed
Second definition on there.
3667486 Ok, I thought it might be something like that. But I figured I'd mention it in case it wasn't.
Chapter 55, or "Fifty three" "Thank god for human insurance"
You said that Changelings blushed green when Chryalis was at the castle.