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I was just thinking of posting a general request for MOAR and this chapter suddenly appeared.
You read my mind...
...wait a minute...
AHHH!!! GET OUT OF MY HEAD!
no
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Why not?
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But if I'm not in your head, how am I supposed to know what you want?
3743327 him being a girl will ad lots of drama
Well, shit.
Also Spike. Ouch.
rip in pieces nav's penis 2012-2014 ;_;
Oh that ending. Poor Navarone, and I love how everyone around him is just patting him on the back and giggling to themselves.
usually i don't like seeing Nav suffer a lot (which is odd that i'm still here considering the things that have happened to him) but this was just hilarious. that title on the book though, god that would suck.
THIS. This is why "Keep Calm And Flutter On" wouldn't have worked. It's nice to see someone actually point this shit out.
That ending.
:D
That...was unexpected, but I think that's the point. Good job at fucking with everyones heads.
NOOOO! What have you done
AAaaahhaaaahaahahahahahaha!
I will never finish reading this story
Dear God. Discord may be immortal, but I'm afraid to think what Nav will do next time he sees him. Probably castrate him with a cheese grater.
But on the case of permanent female hood. It may not be the greatest change, but this is Nav we're talking about, so we'll have to see where this all goes.
Call me Sexist, but only THE MAN can be a Big Hero. Its historically accurate fact.
So now Nav doesnt fit into this.
But his tranformation was proved under sentence of good morale lesson. This is why i dont have anything against your decision to make him female.
In don't know what to say...
I can't decide if I want to kiss you or slap you... So in the interest of retaining my sanity ill do both!
But seriously you a wonderful wonderful man/women/ gender nonspecific human and I love you!
After reading this story I fell into the same trap that Nav did, that being taking the stones for granted. As such that plot twist blew my mind.
Love the story and with a burning desire in my heart I shall send out a call for MOAR!!!!
Oh, man. Poor, poor Nav.
... I had to laugh at Athena's little prank, though. Does that make me a horrible person?
3743404 fun fact, my current writing
Project (first ill be uploading to Fimfiction) is based on the fact that episode wouldn't work :)
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Because the ride will never end.
Alright, fuck you. THIS IS ONE OF THE WORSE POSSIBLE ENDINGS YOU'VE EVER HAD! ESPECIALLY BECAUSE YOU AREN'T CHANGING HIM - HER! - BACK!
I never imagined the ending to be this, even after reading the authors note...
FUCKFuCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCKFUCK
Whelp I'm calling it spike ends up with nav since its permanent.
First thing I thought of when reading that note at the top was somebody was about to bite it.
I think he is taking it rather well. On another note, please not have this be actually permanent. I am not sure i would be able to take it
lol
I knew those stones were cursed for a reason.
Now I'm terrified to imagine what the curse from the key will be or that the curse of the ring would end up being total immunity to all magic or no immunity to magic.
Honestly...
I'm not sure what i'm supposed to feel, I know Discord's suicidal and all that but... Annihilate isn't a strong enough word to express what Nav will do to him.
Btw, why can't Flo just stop his period the same way she heals his body / give him insta-orgasms/whatever?
I bet she's trolling him.
Edit: Now Nav x Spike shipping won't be as weird, yay!
(I just had to point that out.)
3743454 "Only The MAN can be the big hero"
I stopped reading there and just disliked your comment.
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I talked to a chick that's training to be a nurse about this. Long story short, if Nav lost the hormones to have his period, he probably would have no sex drive at all.
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Pinkie already answered that question.
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It's definitely not the worst possible ending. Or rather, it's the worst possible ending so far.
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Yes.
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The only one of the episodes that actually pissed me off.
Congratulations, you mother bucker. Featured!
him ok whit this!!
I know I made a comment on this chapter earlier, but I'm doing it again.
You took a good idea. You took it so very, very far. It got dark, it got sad, it got funny, and it got long. And it never, ever stopped being GOOD.
But THIS... THIS just turned it from my favorite fanfic's of all time... to one of my favorite STORIES of all time. Maybe it's just my hidden desire to see Nav suffer or my countless hours reading forced tg on bigcloset topshelf, but ever since he got the gender stones I had been secretly wanting something like this to happen and see how he would deal with it.
I guess we'll see more of it next chapter. You are an utterly fantastic writer. Keep doing well, stay safe, and write on.
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Flame more
...So when do we meet the three-eyed genie who turns Nav back to male, AKA the "kind of person he really is." Am I at least close to the ballpark here?
After reading the message i panicked a little but after i guess't what you would do somewhere in the middle of the chapter i was totally down with it
It is Navaron after all no mater the gender and let's face it it is kinda hilarious
3743567 Just have Flo toggle the hormones when he needs the damn things
3743609 Nah, that wasn't flaming.
3743567 Yeah... If Flo were to present this scenario to Nav he would probably go with no sex drive, or he could just ask her to toggle it unless you got some bullshit way to make that impossible.
(The fucker allows him to BREATH underwater, which is about as much against human biology as I can think right now.)
You just made my horrible day so much better. My computer is fried but there is a new chapter for here, waiting to bring me out of the pool of depression
kinda surprised nav didnt flip shit when celestia tried to say she "loved" him, also fuck those stones
Meh saw it cumming since day one the stones made an appearance. What will happen next? will she get cat ears?
Spike is love, Spike is life.
Y u do dis?
Nice twist, kinda saw that one coming though. I mean swapping your gender for too long knowing full well the item is cursed. Have fun being a woman Nav
http://static2.fjcdn.com/comments/I+m+all+for+the+occasional+pony+but+that+s+just+not+_4c0c2ae3b6065655e776c458056a731a.jpg
Pretty much my only espression for the ending.
Definitely caught me off guard, and will provide some ample conflict in the future. Mainly since I have always (even recently oh) had hard time picturing what Nav would look like, so this just blows the borders.
Anyways, I'll wait for the next chapter and hopefully get a better image then, keep on feeding my addiction
Excellent plot twist, but I agree, I hope this isn't permanent, just sorta permanent (as in, it will be this way for a while, but will be fixed). There are more people Nav can hit up for help. Brook knows about humans, probably knows their physiology, Flo knows everything about humans that was on that computer, Celestia and Chrysalis made him the way he currently is, and they both owe him, with some co-operation amongst these parties, it can probably be fixed.
3743793 Water is a mixture of Hydrogen and Oxygen. All you need to do to get the Oxygen out of the water is run a bit of electricity through it, in a process called Elecrolysis.
Based on your comment of people not being happy, I figured out what would happen half way through. Now I'm just curious what the other artifacts do? Permanent inability to use magic/have it affect him? I have no idea about they key. All doors are locked for him?
Holy Shieet, That's Some Shit Right There.
3743868 Nah, he's stuck with the curses of what they do, permanent immunity against magic would make his wings useless, which would force him to learn real magic since that works outside of the ring's zone, and the key would probably grant him the ability to read minds (Discord's got it, and he didn't take it into consideration when he gave it to Nav that he/she would turn on him.)