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Yes, more whatmustido scripture.
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all hail whatmustido, all hail whatmustido.
Also Great Chapter
Another flawless chapter. I eagerly await the next instalment.
This feels like one of the early chapters. Like, somewhere in the 20s or so. Way before stuff got really complicated.
The lord has sent down more of his holy scripture, and with this he has appeased his followers for another generation, and so his followers shall wait with abated breath for the next of his divine scriptures, for there is little else in this world to look forward to.
I really love these slice of life chapters.
Also, calling it now, not having an elemental in his head is going to let him finally hear the ghost.
First date for who?! Nav and Twilight? Yeah, prolly them.
This story is so thrilling.
Near the beginning of the chapter I genuinely do not remember what the water’s, the fire’s, and the air’s plans were. What were they again?
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The fire's plan was fighting, the air's plan was working with Discord, and the waters haven't revealed any plan yet.
*reads ending*
static.tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pub/images/jaw_drop.jpg
I...um...uh...what?
Here's to hoping it's out of context.
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Remember my name, for I am calling it now. The Earth Elemental's plan, when they hear it, is going to be the one they go with, and it's going to more or less be the one that works. Calling it now, and I'm so going to point out I was right when/if it happens! This I swear!!!
Mwahahahahahahahahaha!!!!
congrats on the feature
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Well, apart from wanting to free each other's kind IE waters freeing waters, air freeing air etc, I don't think their plans were ever stated. If I'm wrong, someone please post the chapter with the correct response.
Also another excellent chapter whatmustido. Hope to see the next one soon.
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you mean animals
159 chapters.
Ha...haha...haha...ha...
Fuck, I've got a lot to read.
Whelp, better get started.
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I believe in you.
Just when I was gonna sleep for once....
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It’s worth it. Just know you will be here for a long while.
Do you wanna know something funny? You update about 10x more often than drnkntst, who has 2 stories, but they each only have 1000-3000 words per chapter... Also, have some items and characters from newer episodes, and make sure Nav gets other him to send Ryan and Cici to the future when Nav decides to bring humans to the future, and Nav owes a fashion stallion living in Germaneigh a date.
YEEEES
Damn, when a water says you're evil, with it being true, then you know you're definitely fucked in the head
Bacon.
was just about to sleep when I saw this go up, oh well theres a hour gone to more awesome story
I've only really noticed it now, but how come nav is up to date on modern speech patterns. like calling everyone "fam" and all that. It seems out of place for someone who has been in ponyland for more then 8 years. Minor gripe sure, but it does pull me out of the story.
Also thanks a lot for releasing this the first day of the month. Was definitely a nice change in pace form the hsit im goin through
Aw. Here I was hoping it’d be a Friendship Festival. With some uninvited guests Nav could royally fuck with. Do you plan on incorporating that into the story at some point?
Anyway, awesome chapter as always. Loving the release schedule.
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Considering all the comments in the docs and here about not incorporating anything more from the show beyond the 40% or so of season 2 that's already in there, it's a good bet that whatmustido doesn't know what you're talking about. There's plenty of stuff in The Movie that contradicts this story, anyway.
I felt like suggesting an Alternate Universe tag, but realized it probably wouldn't do anything about these kinds of comments.
Huh, you know, that thing with Kat bothers me as much as it does Nav. Like what the fuck. How can someone want to be a slave blindly following someone without questioning anything they say or do in any capacity. Really hope Nav talks to her about this, but I'm not sure if he can change her mind without her turning on him, and trying to make him hers.
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Ah. I don’t read the comments much and I don’t check out the docs, so I missed those bits. No matter, story’s awesome as it is.
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Most people don't, and I should stop honestly. I anticipate there to be at least 2 more comments in this chapter chain asking for characters like Tempest and Somnambula to be included, just in this chapter. Along with 4 more people who just realized the pattern of extra body parts Nav is picking up and 8-12 who still think Nav is Discord.
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To be fair, I have no clue what “pattern” Nav’s bodily transformations are following – I thought he might’ve been turning into Discord at first, but the changes don’t all seem to fit. If it’s something from the show, I don’t recognize it, and if he’s turning into something out of mythology, well, I know even less about that.
Poor (ex) dude, always the last one to find out. I kinda wonder if Twilight will be so eager once he finaly finishes turning into new chaos.
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Discord's wings are swapped, yes, but it's close enough for government work. Ch 136 was obviously vague, but it seems likely that the ring's curse will apply more transformative effects to Nav including a griffon arm (again opposite Discord's griffon arm, and Nav always wears the ring on his right hand). It could be another taloned creature, as there was no budget to give alphyns unique arm models, but given the pattern...
The possibility of Nav letting someone else be cursed by the ring at this point seems minuscule, though, and I am salty about the latest addition seeming to be on rails.
I just had a tought... Is Navarone going to replace Discord? He will live for thousand of years, he is part changeling, part tree, have one feather wing, one demon wing and a dragon tail and is posessed by spirits... Not to say Navarone changed sex and her mind was semi-broken a couple of times.
Yay more Taya, I was beginning to think you just didn't like writing her.
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I mean, TECHNICALLY it never says what year Nav left his time in. It could have been in 2020 for all we know.
So much shopping, so much planning. So many shout outs close enough to whats happened over the seasons. StormView, the Storm Kings mansion, Kat, Cappers cousin, Kumani as Ember, all we need is Doppel to get Rainbowd to be one of Thoraxs crew? Wonder if that could be a Rainbow Sauce with Poison Joke prank?
I still think meanest curst that Nav could end up with isnt that of sterility, but absolute pan fertility, abusing the omnicellular capabiliites of many plants, any cell can grow a whole new clone, but plants also have suckers and flowers and seeds and bananas etc. Of course, thrown in fungi and slime moulds, and Nav pretty much becomes a Goo or Gel Girl, essentially taking no damage from psysical attacks, no matter how deformed or dissipated?
Even nastier with the omnifertility, is the aphrodisiac body perfume pollen spores etc possible. Or even ifs germ line infused.
Nav might not be turning into Discord. He might be turning into Eris, and Discord is just looking to get laid?
Hymn .... if we are taking bets on what's gonna change on nav next I say ........ he will get a horn on his forehead probably due to the rings curse.... the reason I think this is nav has a fear of magic which is why he wanted something to stop it so whats a proper curse for someone who wants nothing to do with it and has had alot of bad experiences with it but by forcing magic on nav. Plus his magic might turn on him if he can't learn control which will make him fear it more leading to a vicious cycle. Also he can't use true magic because he believes humans don't have magic and belief is what 95% of what true magic is so by giving magic to nav he won't have the humans don't have magic excuse preventing him from learning true magic.
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Some people are just more comfortable with others making decisions for them it's sad but true. I think we call people who behave like this sheep. Kat being raised the way she was is more comfortable being a sheep then making her own choices. Better for the shepard ...nav....to lead the flock in the right direction then having to make choices she finds to hard to make for herself.
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My ship predictions ....
Twi-nav .... it's been a long time coming ...she practically treats Taya like her student/daughter and she's done alot for him.
Flutter/dash .... someone flutters is comfortable with and dash is a softie on the inside no matter the tough girl attitude she potrays plus maybe we'll see some flutterbat they are heading to tarturus after all be a dom for dash.
Spike-rarity ..... I see him learning to forgive her if nav can forgive luna he can forgive rarity and she's had time to look back on her mistakes and feel bad about them ......plus his time with gilda means he's probably a beast in bed. I see him Doming rarity spanking the marshmellow.
Applejack and pinkie are hard ....pinkie i dont see her settling down with one person she's a party girl and applejack hasn't been given enough airtime so to speak to make a call. She as far as I recall in the story hasn't shown any interest male or female. Maybe she'll find someone in tarturus or a guard.
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I believe he leaves when the story was first posted, roughly.
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Because having someone else make decisions for you and absolve you of having to think of the moral ramifications is easy. When you have trauma from something you have done in the past the easiest way to free yourself of having to make moral decisions is to completely put your faith in someone else's judgments. Religion works the same way. Stone the homosexual because our all knowing and benevolent god told us to, so I'm sure he had a good reason. And if you really buy into what you are peddling and have a good work ethic it really does make everything easier in life.
has anyone notice he is slowly turning into a version of discord but female?
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that's not the issue. more towards the beginning he had speech patterns 2012-15. my issue is that his language is evolving with the real world.
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Literally everybody
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By the time you've reached chapter fifty, you're not going to be wishing for that. That's all I'm going to say on the matter.
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*cynically laughs internally*
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In fairness to Whatmustido, how hard do you think it is to transport your lexicon back to 2012 on a whim?
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Right. It's only a herd if it's society-wide. In a story like this, it's called a "Harem Ending." It's what everyone is secretly shooting for, whether they know it or not.
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I don't, he'll be dead from the assassins in a week.
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I've read it twice. I know it might look like a monumental task but the story is good enough you won't care.
Is that we're calling chapters now? Scriptures of a holy book? I am surprisingly OK with this.
Anyway, I'm trying to figure out why exactly Celestia isn't telling Spike the truth. It feels like Nav believes that she's just trying to own him and she believes telling him the truth will make him leave. It seems like Celestia is saying she straight up loves him as a son, which implies she doesn't want him the be hurt by the truth. It also seemed like she knew Nav told Spike the truth purely because she said Navarone, "Poisoned his mind with honesty" (May be gotten the quote wrong) But that wouldn't explain why she doesn't outright tell the truth.
I'm also looking forward to all the future Navarone and Celestia interactions thanks to all this drama built between them, and even more so his upcoming conversations with the ponies and the press, been too long since we've had
a good bandit raidsome normal human worship. Also with the whole "overthrow" plot, every paragraph I'm gonna worry about Celestia catching wind somehow. Maybe slip of the tongue, maybe Luna catches wind via someone's dream, who knows?Oh yea, and the Luna interactions to come in either a long time when they start the tartarus trip, or soon via dream pep talks....
also, is it just me, or are the chapter uploads slowly increasing in speed? I feel like they're shortening by a day with each new chapter released, but I've yet to check the actual release dates. Feels like you are uploading very quickly Mr. Author.... Or my time perception is royally fucked, which is more likely considering what I've....
No opinion on the Kumani situation, honestly getting some hardcore sacrificial pawn vibes from her at this point, so there's that. As for the Kat interaction, I heavily enjoyed it because it fleshed out more of her character and thoughts. Looking forward to the arc where they take down the assassins.
Also, I'm seeing him having more feminine thoughts influence his head after the elemental left, maybe he'll start to handle his possession situation without conan the barbarian or whatever his name was.... Grogart? Groger?.... George? Whatever the necromancers name was, totally slipped my mind. I wonder if Athena would be able to assist in removing it, although at a steep price most likely.
And that about sums everything up. Looking forward to more.