Page generated in 0.031 seconds
Total duration
794 users online
1,133,257 hits today, 2,244,100 yesterday
My Little Pony: Friendship is Magic Fanfiction
Designed and coded by knighty & Xaquseg - © 2011-2024
Support us
SubStar
Chat!
Discord
Follow us
Twitter
MLP: Friendship is Magic® - © 2024 Hasbro Inc.®
Fimfiction is in no way affiliated with or endorsed by Hasbro Inc.®
Aww... No bat pony cuddles. Also, I think the only one who can say they really do deserve Nav in Canterlot currently is Blossom. Not just because bat pony cuddles and sex, but because she bothered to learn about Nav as a person, rather than go by rumors and try and use her/him for something. The most manipulative thing Blossom has done to Nav, he asked for (if I am remembering it right...), and even then all she did was drink a little blood. Meanwhile, Fleur tried to have Nav break one of his few tenets, Celestia uses him regularly, and Luna... yeah. Honestly, if Nav doesn't find some one else besides Taya and Doppel then I suspect he is going to start unraveling in the centuries ahead.
Oh my God! Another great addition to the story! I've finally been able to catch up with reading this, and a new update comes out! Truly amazing! But I have without a doubt that Nav would've fucked those 3 ponies up without a doubt. Nonetheless, great story, great writer, can't wait for more! Also, Celestia's a selfish cock-block
7633489
Does it really count as clam jamming if she fucked Nav's brains out instead?
7633499 You make a fair point. You almost hit 2 million words. Doing anything special, or no?
Man, do I love when this story gets updated. WhatmustIdo, you're one of, if not my favorite pone fanfiction writer. Like, fuck man! Keep up the good work.
7633511
No.
Man, this is the only story that I will always open immediately when I see a new chapter. I just shut down my game to read it. I just loaded that game up.
What happened to Luna again.
7633529
I was gonna go to sleep, but then i saw that his story updated so
yeah
7633539
I think she got banished
You know, after being a lunatic
I had to make the pun, and im not sorry
7633583
Heh. I remember when I first found it. It was... oh, a good 60 or 70 chapters long at that point, I think. That was two very, very long days and I didn't regret it for a moment.
7633539 eh, locked in prison, kinda. in some sort of solitary. after the incident of luna telling canterlot what she did to nav she sorta just disappeared
Reform the nobles? After what we just read? Fleur's got her work cut out for her.
Damnit. Bat-blocked.
7633499 yes. yes it does. clam jamming blossom is just not okay.
The Bat must be pet. I demand it!
It's always an exciting time to read an update of yours.
7633525 the one time I start to reread the story, then you tack on another wonderful chapter. The rereading is just to recall what has been forgotten, but your story is just as alive now as it was then, and for that I am thankful.
5/5
Flee Blossom FLEEEEEE.
7633630 the Void hungers for words.
Only 4K words to the big 2 Million! Congratulations!
Did you mean to strike through the jealous?
Jesus christ, bitch probably felt that burn on the fucking moon.
Oh, you brilliant son of a-- it just occurred to me while I was making dinner that the nobles at the party represented the seven deadly sins.
Sloth -- the lazy nobles in the dark room.
Greed -- the destitute noble looking to marry her family into his money.
Gluttony -- the nobles with whom they discussed diets at the food table.
Wrath -- the vengeful noble mares.
Pride -- The snotty noble on the balcony.
Lust -- the douchebro pone.
Envy -- either the first pair of nobles or Celestia. I'm torn on that one.
7633951
Nav met them in the order Fancy Pants named them in his speech, Gluttony, lust, greed, laziness, pride, wrath, envy, lying.
First he met the the hungry nobles in the at the diner table, after that the sleazy noble who lusted to have sex with both of them, the Everglot-noble who just wanted to marry her for the money, the lazy nobles in the dark room, the prideful noble on the balcony, the vengeful widows and envy is surprisingly Blossom who said “I envy that mare.” about Fleur. But the lying is luckily over, on the stage the truth was said and a lot of other people also began showing their true selves.
7633994
Ah. Good catch with Blossom. That's the only one that I couldn't really place.
Huh, I was expecting this to take longer, like an extra month.
I'm very pleasantly surprised, to say the least.
I actually jumped with joy, but let's pretend I didn't.And I love that ending you put out. I assume Midnight didn't know about Nav's and Celestia's relationship? If no, then that must've come as quite a surprise.
Gotta ask, is him explaining his relationship to Midnight gonna be something to look forward to?
Deliberate irony is deliberate.
Now, i'm probably wrong on this. Actually i'm pretty sure i'm wrong, but was that a euphemism for a low end prostitute?
Somehow i doubt that.
Unless you'r Pertz, then it gets you railed by the law.
7633951 Dude, you need to 're-read this story if you just now got that. It's everywhere.
7633487
I like to think Nav's family line will extend through mostly adoptions, and that Taya will purge any chance of having a child through magical means, because she always will want to be in top condition to protect Nav.
And that this family line will constantly shower Nav with banter and love and such, giving his life more meaning other than just survival.
I like to think even farther that anyone she adopts she's going to train in both true magic and ordinary magic, and Navarone is eventually going to have an extensive family of true mages, all swearing an oath to protect him.
And it'd make me laugh if Celestia and Luna take that very same oath as well in time.
Just cause of the irony of it all, to go from rulers with guards and guardians, to guards of a guardian.
7634040
I'm not just now noticing that the ponies are imperfect. I merely noticed a short while after reading this chapter that it was purposefully showcasing the seven deadly sins in its guests.
So, are regular updates back or is this a small sprinkle in the middle of the drought?
Either way, great chapter as always. Although I thought that Blossom was also going to come out at this party... I suppose I misinterpreted something.
Ah, nobility.
Ah, the usual results of nobility.
Hmm, when'd that happen? It's been a long ride.
I love this story as always. I did enjoy the clop scenes, but since
Nav stopped going down a checklistCelestia, that was unkind. They were a different kind of enjoyment. But, the epic is…well, an epic, that has held up at every point.7633487
Well, on the plus side, Blossom's gonna be around, so…
7634040
Oh dear. Seems I'll have to reread to find all the SLAG PEW.
That will be a fun few days of escape.
Found a few spelling errors this chapter:
dominant
imminent
make do
God dammit. Why can't Nav just have some fun with Blossom? It doesn't even have to be sex! A kiss would be enough for me. Stupid Celestia, always ruining my fun. >.>
Oh, Fancy Pants.
7633597
I think i found it around the same time, actually
no, i found it when it was made, i read it around that time
and then i forgot about it for a while, and then proceaded to reread it, and now im here
funfunfunfunfun
7633588
You should be.
7633630
I'm sure I could find other things to fill your gaping hole...
7633775
Nah man, she should join them!
7633915
I keep forgetting that strikethroughs don't transfer over well.
7634039
Corpse Bride.
7634121
Hopefully the drought is over. My trip to Savannah is over and my drug-induced trip to Auschwitz is also over, though I'm still mentally recovering from it.
7634228
After Luna's weird dream party where she tried raping him again, Nav told Celestia he quit.
I see what you did there! When I read this and it clicked, oh man...
This is one of the longest fic's on the site , almost 2 million words, amazing.
Yaah! Another chapter down! Feel bad for blossom at the end tho, hope she gets something good in the end
7634228 Exactly. Plus, Luna is going to be in time out for a while...
Thank you Whatmustido, you made my day a lot better just by releasing this chapter. With this chapter and the new Super Best Friendcast (166) It's going to be a good day.
[https://youtu.be/h4UqMyldS7Q]
Damn straight!
Big Sexy waiting in the dark for Naverone like some kind of drunk stalker murderer rapist pedophile. I feel sorry for/envious of Naverone.
This chapter was awesome. My only complaint is that I wish it was longer.
The next chapter is the one that will put you over the top. You are just three thousand six hundred ninety-four words away from two million.
I look forward to seeing what your brain meat has in store for us next time.
~KBO.
Not so much the Grand Galloping Gala, but the Freindly Feelup Fair?
If Fancy is really, really, good, thn tomorrow he will be walking as funny as Nav?
In the UK you released this chapter in the early hours of National Coming Out Day, very fitting. I feel like every possible romantic interest that comes up suddenly comes to the front of the list of characters I want to ship Nav with, it changes all the damn time. I want Spike and Nav, then Celestia and Nav, then Twilight and Nav, then Blossom and Nav, and now I want Fleur and Nav... it's very strange.
7634470
Ah, movie reference. I liked that movie too.....
I like the deadly sins each of the nobles represented. I'm a bit slow :( I only noticed it when the sloth ponies got introduced.
Looking forward to next chapter. Sounds like shit is about to go down
Nice meme
Seeing an update for this story in my feed is pure orgasmic
7635434
I wish I could make bitches cum that easily. Then maybe I wouldn't be five-ever alone.