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Oh man am i excited! How many years has it been now Whatmustido? 6? I have read and reread this story so many times it has become cannon. This story is literally the only thing tying me to the fandom anymore. Keep doing what you do man, we are all stoked for the final stretch!
Also anyone else think that Nav and Taya just jumped like 5 steps forward in the becoming gods line due to all the magic in there?
This story is so long, and does he ever get his penis back. I had a hard time reading after the whole gender switch thing.
I'm really hoping that you actually have the next few chapters already written or you are in one of those moods where you churn out 3 or 4 chapters in a week, because this forest absolutely astounds me. I probably missed something, but aren't they able to see through the dome? Didn't they cut in at a place where they saw that it was basically a barren cliffside? I'm wondering if they teleported to the part of the dome where the forest is.
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Currently as of chapter 178, no. He still is a she, but she's much more comfortable with being female and only really complains bad about it during period cramps.
Finally! Thank you! Love the story.
9209537
Same here, this is literally the only thing that keeps me reading.
Finally some action it feels like I have waited three lifetimes for another chapter. That said Do take your time and make them the best you can or want to.
Awesome as always. Looking forward to more.
Keep up the great work. Deus tecum.
I love this story :D
this was...very interesting, looking forward to whatever creative idea you have for getting rid of Aqua
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the best villains are the ones you can respect
Oh you tease! I'd kill for more chapters! Keep em coming, you glorious bastard.
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into a larger pouch — into larger pouches
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Awesome chapter, very excited
9209537
Honestly, ditto here as well, his story is the only favorited story of mine I really look forward to, save only the Dadonequus series.
Which sucks because he, understandably, takes time to produce this art.
The chapter Aqua gets absolutely fucked is the high point I'm waiting for right now, second only to Nav getting his dick back.
The repeat "ages" feels a little clumsy. Maybe replace Watcher's instance with “The greatest orator of our time!”?
This was a fun chapter, nice to see the expedition start at last. I am seriously questioning most of Nav's relationship decisions, as usual.
I'm thinking if he turns anymore plantlike he won't have to worry about his pe**s he'll grow both parts ... he just needs to get acid or fire thrown on her crotch so when it grows back hell grow the male portion of the flower .... the stamen i thinks it's called .....since flowers have ovaries too bamn he/she is all set .. nav the hermaphrodite ... just think of all the crap he could get upto.
Bring my baby for back. She belongs in that fucked up head. Not aqua. But I feel like her arc will come after this
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Not just that but think of all the stuff that is still coming!
-the coma
-dealing with Celestia
-the beauty pageant is gonna be hilarious
-Tartarus
-Finding Slab the earth elemental (from Nav's acid trip we know he's under a mountain. Maybe he's in the bunker?)
-who the fuck is Red?? Nav mentions her during the drug trip but since it was implied that she replaced someone who died i dont think we will see her till after Tartarus.
-i can't wait for the fight with Nestorats that we got a glimpse of in the Russian bunker.
He has done so much foreshadowing and we are finally answering questions and moving toward the payoff for all this stuff.
That filly seriously needs a therapist.
Getting to see Flo bitch slap Aqua was great. Nav even managed to drop a couple hints that a really clever elemental might manage to pick up on. Excited to see where that and the rest of the mission goes. I think the last time we got to see Excalibur in action was... what, the island with the Kobolds?
*at final security checkpoint, strangely akin to a TSA checkpoint*
Security Guard: Only Nav may enter.
*rest of group hangs back*
*Nav walks forward, setting off the metal detector thingy*
Security Guard: *sigh* I said, only Nav may enter.
*everyone visibly confused*
*Aqua’s sweating bullets*
This story gives me life.
I wonder what effects that accelerated growth will bring. I'm thinking it's only a temporary thing.
Kat is so cute. Wanting to be useful.
I'm so excited.
I await more, eagerly.
It feels weird to finally get to this point.
Deus Rectum
Perhaps nav will fill out a little since young trees have the tendency to be thin, and if this is accelerated growth well... no more bony body
I don't know what it is but I really don't like Taya
Question: Whatever happened to that flame enchanted axe he got from that kobold priest?
In the Diaries of a Madman, according to Navarone
And she said unto Aqua:
Hallelujah
Amen
Always happy to see an update
Yaaaaaassss! More Flo interaction! Can't wait to see what else you have in store. What secrets have been left behind? Did Anonymous leave anything useful behind in case nav never turned up, like a backup plan? Or maybe something more personal for nav? I can't even begin to express how much I've wanted to see the relationship between Flo and nav fixed, if previous conversations have told anything, it's that I can finally see more positive interactions between the two. It's probably the parts I most look forward, even more than the lore or story. Sorry, you made the characters far too enticing!
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I agree with you completely, can't wait for it to happen. Might be a while now because he said he wasn't gonna allow an elemental in until he has had his coma, so it might be a while till we finally see that happen.
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But didn't aqua say she was gonna stop him from doing that?
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Well i suppose that depends on her. I mean I'm pretty sure Auqa's reign of terror will end in this adventure, though I don't have any ideas as to how, I'm sure she will be found out sooner or later, seeing as Nav has been dropping hints throughout the chapter. Though I might not be correct, and could be later on, the coma will happen, being an important and integral part of the story. Because, it will basically deep cleanse Nav and make sure all her decisions are her own, and whatever else that needed fixing in her head.
Who is the partner-to-be Aqua is referring to?
Can't wait for Flo to fuckin die horribly and also quick question, can anyone tell me again the chapter she first took him over so I can re read it?
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Not all plants are hermaphrodites. Even so, Nav’s DNA now is female thanks to the stones
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My thoughts are that he will keep aqua unwillingly, head to Australia and get the other fire elemental, and take it. Remember back when he was hallucinating while he was with the dragoness? He said a name. Like an elemental name, and I THINK the name is the same as the demon fire elemental
Actually, it is "disembark." Embark means to board a vehicle like a bus, or a boat, or a plane.
I am amazed Aqua actually allowed Navarone to say this.
Taya's Screwball is showing.
Nope.
They are actually finally on their way to the bunker. This is officially faster than Attack on Titan.
~KBO.
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If that's so, why hasn't Flo picked up on it? She knows Nav better than anyone.
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They cut a hole through the rock and skipped the forest. They're inside the dome now.
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Why would you ever hate Aqua? She's so nice!
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It's fun to write sometimes.
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Fixed.
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You're only questioning her relationship decisions? Most of the decisions Nav makes are terrible.
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Why wouldn't pet Kat?
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Taya did nothing wrong.
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She meant embarking on the journey INTO THE DOME!
Aqua didn't just break in and steal shit, she moved in like she owned the place.
Don't be silly, Taya is adorable!
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Oh, okay, that makes sense.
Oh, no question she is adorable. Being borderline insane makes her even more adorable.
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Hymn true about the plant but I can hope he/she is one of those types that do have both. The stones had a middle ground too making him assexual I'm hoping he can dupe the curse by being both sexes at the same time instead of losing both sexes at the same time. Yah he can't be a man but you take what you can get.
I feel the mother of all shit storms is coming, I can feel it in my bones...
I'm hoping for something to happen to aqua inside nav's head when she enters the crater, like turning off for some reason
That would give him a chance to do something about his situation, leaving a message, telling someone nearby, etc.
Even if it means he could kill himself and the tree-him would sprout, its something to think about.
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So many of us are just hoping for SOMETHING to completely fuck up Aqua in there, but Aqua getting fucked, though I'm looking forward to it, will still be third to the reaction everyone has when they realize Nav's head was being fucked with during most of his more intimate decisions.
I forgot to mention how much I was looking forward to that as well, because the fact they believed he was just finally coming around, after years of him staunchly refusing to do so, should've raised red flags, and it didn't.
Gonna feel fucking great when they get hit by the, "Not everything good for you is good for everyone else." feeling.
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I feel like winding up a hermaphrodite would be worse than being stuck a female. At this point, Nav’s accepted his condition, so to drive himself even further away from who he was would be torturous. Plus he’d still be visually female, the only difference being he would have a dick and vagina
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Maybe she has ...
Reading Harry Potter books 1-7 two times then read first three books and most of the fourth, would be the same as reading DoaM once. As it is now.
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That makes sense. My thoughts are currently wishful thinking at the moment, I can't wait for Flo to return, I missed their interactions too much, this thing with Aqua is getting old and I just want something to happen for it to end, even if it means one of the other elementals gets intrusive.
You have my utmost respect for Aqua. It has been a long time since i hated a fictional character so, so very much.
By this point, she easily passed Discord and all his fuckery thanks to making it all so personal.
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Nothing in the story suggests that she has, but that might be because of Nav's pov. If she has and is thinking of a way to help Nav while still being inconspicuous, now would be the time while she is close to Nav and far enough away from Aqua's main body. I don't think it will happen in the the next two chapters, but maybe at the end of this arc? If not, like I have talked about in another comment, Nav could end Aqua's control over her by trying to get the third fire elemental to host her, burning Aqua in the process.