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Thank god it's here!
Hahaha AWESOME update. I loved every bit of it.
OMG ANOTHER chapter these ARE VERY RARE these days... Im just joking good chapter......Needs to be updated a tiny bit faster as people properly forget what happend in the last chapter :/
Flo, never change. Never ever change.
Oh my... this chapter was like a surprise sex you get as a present from your gf/bf in your birthday after all other gifts you already received.
First in the morning (in my country) isn't the best time for reading, but I just couldn't stop myself.
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If I had a hermaphroditic girlfriend/boyfriend, I'm not sure I'd really want sex...
That was fun, may I have another? Looking forward to more.
Keep up the good work. Deus tecum.
why can't we upvote chapters :'(
Zebra Shamans have a countrywide crystaline magic jammer system set up, if it wasnt for the water elemental there, Id have though it was due to a whole cluster of a given type, say fire elementals and radiations and signalling etc.
When Zecora finally gets back home, is Nav going to end up with the long delayed cant get this hot zebra princess out of his bed problem? Or will it be a prince, to keep Taya distracted by how far she can throw him?
Will Chrysy be giving her tech crews a seperate production facility for dealing with the extreme magic restrictions of Africa and other regions, even to working on analyzing the effect and applying it to their own magitech for stealth, shielding and abilities?
This is why I love this story.
... You know, this might be one of the more... interesting stories I've read. Every time I see it in the unread box, I always have to come to answer the same question I've answered thousands of times over: Is it worth it? Is having a chuckle or two worth having to see the same subplots resurfacing again and again? Is figuring out the mystery to something you've already solved worth it when you have to reflect on basic notions of morality after every third line of dialogue? Is watching the character you initially liked be awesome worth seeing that same character slowly warp into something you wish you hadn't? Every time, I've answered with the same morbid determination I always have: sure. However, I think it's time to face the facts. Sometimes, you just have to realize that reading a story might just be holding you back. Some people say it's better to love and have lost than to never have loved at all... but sometimes you forget just how much heartache came with that love, and you wish that you hadn't met in the first place. I'm sorry to say, but I'm afraid that this story is filled with heartache that I can no longer bare to stomach. I honestly thought that I could read this story to its completion, to have an actual, complete opinion on how I thought of this story as a whole... but it looks like I simply wasn't strong enough. To the fans of this, I say that I wish you well in reading this story; perhaps you have gleamed that which I could not perceive. To whatmustido, I say that I'm sorry for not being able to read it, but... there are simply too many subjective fallacies to ignore it any longer. To every person who's ever given up on a story because of reasons like "There's OOC, there's character assassination, and then there's this story", or "This is the dumbest OC main character I've ever READ!!!", I apologize for ever thinking you were petty in some form or another. And so, I say to whoever felt like reading this comment for whatever reason, "Farewell."
P.S. So after so many references to the Heart of Darkness, you not only go there, but there's also a subplot akin to Kurtz' ambition?... I'd be intrigued, except I can't. That is pretty clever, however.
I hope Fleur doesn't develop a vampire fetish from the Twilight books Nav said he would write. Otherwise, Blossom might have to kill Navi.
Nav and Flo are happily terrible people. There are worse things to be. One of them is an unhappy terrible being. Also, poor Pointy Hat the prick. May he soon discover the joys of that in the waking world. Also, return of best night guard, captain Midnight Blossom! Also, more proof that your Fleur is almost a female Fancy Pants. All for the good!
Woooo yay Nav.
6503143 *reads some of your comment*
Well clearly you enjoy the story and you will continue to read it, since everybody finishes what they're saying halfway through their comment and doesn't change their opinion (does what I said make any sense? idk)... jk lol but it's nice to see someone who isn't yelling at the author without giving a reason why. I think the internet needs more people like you
10/10 would read again -IGN
Kappa
I'd really like to know how the meeting between celestia and flo went if you can somehow fit it in.
If you can, thank you with all the powers of the endless devourer
If not... You might see me at you house plotting to... Wait what do you mean I'm not supposed to make threats when asking for something
Well I've just been advised that I can't threaten you to make this happen so I guess I'll just be sad...
The Flovarone is strong in this one. Too bad it'll never happen.
I kept expecting Flo to try to play homemaker and burn herself on a stove or something. Er, boil herself.
Weirdly heartwarming.
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Do you really want to go through a recoding the site again?
Oh boy, I sure hope nothing goes wrong with Blossom....cdn.someecards.com/someecards/usercards/MjAxMy1lZjc3N2MzZTNjYTUwNjZj.png
Woo! A Diaries of a Madman update on my birthday, yay!
6502775 Just do what I do: Read the story over and over again while waiting on new chapters. This may sound like it gets old or boring but I find something that I missed with every read through.
I absolutely loved this chapter. It is one of my favorite chapters.
This story here is my #1 reason by far for coming back to this site
Think I'm going to re-read it again too, been awhile
I just got off a 4 hour Ark Survival Evolved fest, it was 4 am, i was tired AF. I needed to go to bed.
Then i saw i had another chapter available on my favorites.
Then i saw this and i was like OH HELL NO I'M NOT PUTTING THIS OFF
And then as i started reading i was all kinds of
6503143 This comment confused me.
while i'm not here to make fun of your jumping ship, but i am curious as to what exactly your disappointed in. You mention sub plots but never go into WHICH sub plots. You mention the character being hated then loves or i dunno, but don't actually put out examples. I can say that you made sense and then you didn't all i want, but whether or not you did comes when i actually reference words you've written.
6502815 What?! No! Bad! We want change! If she never changed, she would be a prude like in the beginning of the story! We want her to change and evolve and learn and to spank Navi!
I'm still reading this, bro. Keep up the good work! Never a dull chapter!
When Nav gets his balls back, will he slap a bitch in celebration?
6504073 Happy birthday friend!
Oh my potatoes! Good job Flo with threatening. Smiles with rape!
If you change Flo, I will be very displeased. Great job yet again, keep it up!
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I meant it in the best way possible, as in I hope she never changes from how she is now. Though to be honest that feels a little inaccurate- I love watching characters change and grow over time. Watching Flo grow over the hundreds of thousands of words since her addition to the cast has been great to read and reread, since it's been realistic and small developments over a very long time instead of a sudden face-heel turn. I definitely like the Flo we have now more than the one we first had in chapter 53, she's got a lot more depth, no pun intended.
6504584 Well, it's like this. I could very well reference which subplots get rehashed for the 47th time, and I could explain why I feel as though Navarone seems to be... ant-developing as a character, or why I feel as though the characters seem to be a touch unbalanced, but... I don't want to get into debates over semantics. I could talk about how it's inane why we're revisiting something that happened 110 chapters ago, ignored 100 chapters ago, and resolved 50-70 chapters ago, but then I'll probably get 10 dislikes for that comment while some person replies with "But Flo was well within her rights to do something that could potentially scar Kat for life over that was already taken care of literally years ago". And frankly, I don't really want to get into a controversial topic specifically because it's controversial. Both sides are right, and both sides are wrong, so there's really no point in talking about Id's and Superego's when the fact of the matter is, no one cares. Maybe the story will get better, maybe it won't. Maybe Navarone does something that'd make me forgive him for pulling a Makoto Itou on Fluttershy, maybe it won't. Maybe Discord will just end the story on an ambiguous note and the answer will be lost forever, or maybe Navarone dies like Light Yagami did. Whichever the case may be, I no longer have the drive to wait and find out... and that's coming from the guy who can honestly say that the Thousand Year Blood War arc is OK.
Gugh, I think you've traumatized me just as much with the Bunker as you did Nav, since I genuinely had flashbacks when you mentioned it, and suddenly the whole scene became a lot tenser.
Nav/Flo interaction is freaking adorable, i just can't get enough of those two.
You sir, are a freaking master of words. Writing such a longass fic and keeping people interested without pause.
They should tots lift the ban of sentient undead. Seriously, why is that even a thing?
6504905 huh.... i usually write walls of text that are twice as long and i have no clue what you just said.
THAT said, again, not making fun of you. Interesting viewpoint you have, while yes, revisiting topics can be dry, i don't really think that we have in this story. If we did, they are so minor that it doesn't matter.
But that's just my opinion. Enjoy your day ^_^
6505195 If there's anything on the Internet that I've learned, it's that there's a time and a place to be direct. Being direct here... may or may not turn out so well. So for now, I'm going to be ambiguous about it.
6503452 Huh, well thanks. It's nice to know that I can be somewhat serious for some points in my life. However, I still don't think I'll continue reading. 'Cause like I said... every third line of dialogue. Then you start thinking about the implications of what was said, what it means according to modern philosophy, and then juggle it between being a fact or an opinion. However, sometimes you just want to read a story about a person going through an adventure to defeat (Or maybe not, who knows other than the author?) a guy who's threatening the world with their presence, you know? Sometimes you just want to believe that there's a way to do the right thing without many negative consequences simply by thinking it through, and all doing the wrong thing does is make things MORE complicated down the line, simply because life is a poker game: you got to know when to hold 'em and know when to fold 'em... know when to walk away; know when to- OK, I'm done.
I almost feel bad for Pointy Hat.... Almost.
Mistah Kurtz is dead. A penny for the old guy.
The size of these chapters always makes me salivate. I wonder what exactly went on between Celestia and Flo. I suppose we will never know. Soon we will be on our way to Africa, the last Water Elemental, and Zecora's hometown. I cannot wait to see what hardships waylay them on their way there.
~KBO.
Finally a day off to just sit back, read a good story and drink coffee. Later it'll be beer and rum.
lol'd
Sometimes I remember earlier chapters and think they are part of some old and long dead story...
Almost 2 million words, how did it ever get this long?
The only thing missing now are some dank memes.
6506758 But the dank memes are everywhere, you just need to look
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This is what happens when a story that is usually split into several books (as seen by the much shorter Harry Potter series) but stays a single story. I know that there are a lot of people that actively look for stories with this kind of length and it helps reel them in. Though I wonder if keeping the story all in one spot helps the author keep it going seeing as so many people love it though the likes, favorites, and comments. It may also help that the author's head seems to be filled with all sorts of awesome things.
I have no idea how any of this comment will sound to others.
This is wonderful.
This will always be wonderful.
I still remember when I discovered this story, like 10 chapters ago, and marathon read over a million fucking words in a week.
I worry about you like I worry about George RR Martin.