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Hmm. Could use some work in the length department and potentially the backstory, but otherwise im intrigued. Please, do go on.
Indeed 2424290 It could be longer. I too, am interested to see where this goes.
As others may have said, things could be a bit more fleshed out. Nonetheless, this is interesting and I await the next chapter
Your story has interested me.... I like it.
*takes off shades* my god
One word Twilight. RUN!
I'm not even going to try and imagine what the baby would look like...
No! Not gonna think about it...
No no no, not thinking about it...
( image pops in head )
DANMIT!!
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I like it! I hope to read more from you soon. Ima keep an eye on this one.
Wow, this concept is great.
ive seen it once before but that was with a complete failure in the empire.
I want to read, more.
bravo, bravo.
also from one author to another I suggest you read The Broken Mare by darkangel_31314 for inspiration
Needs more chapters.
NOW!
If Twilight was in such a state of malnutrition, I am pretty sure her body would have just aborted the foal. No sense in energy going to a growing fetus when the mother is starving.
Hmm... interesting, interesting. Let us see what we can develop, shall we?
Well, lets see where this goes...
FAVED AND LIKED
Interesting concept!!!Lookin forward, you have my fav...By the way, Lady Sparkle or Lord Armor sounds a little bit weird, but its your story
Now this is interesting, it has the same kind of aspect of "A Broken Mare" about it which makes me want to watch it to see where it goes.
...Well, damn. This was quite intriguing. Can't wait for more. Liked and faved, don't screw it up now.
ME WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2428898 Are you aware that The story you have made reference to has a sequel out with about 5 chapters released?
It is very good and is titled The Rouge Stallion. If you are aware, my apologies in assuming you weren't.
All credit for the stories go to darkangel_31314.
2427778no offense, but im fairly certain that the answer is magic.
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Damn you magic and your ability to circumvent all the inconsistencies I see!
This can only end one way...
Now, I need a gun and some rope. Anyone else up for a demonic-king hunt?
2434995 i got a rope, a magic inhibitor a rusty knife and a blow torch.
Do the math
2434177 I know about that, I've been tracking it since it came out.
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K I'm just ensuring that no one misses out on an amazing story in the making
WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE????
Yeah so, I'm following this now.
Poor Twilight, she's scared as hell. I'm wondering what Sombra'll do once he notices that his captive has been rescued
This went about how I expected it to and I love it and await the part where sombra is beaten to within an inch of his life then healed then beaten again until the end of time
Poor twi
great chapter bro!!
2447122Me too bro
This is definitely worth following, the only thing which bothers me is that there are a few grammar errors such as misplacing TOO and TWO, I suggest to either find someone to edit your chapters before you release them or just give them a more thorough look over before you post.
2447104 get beat and suffer like a bitch
Ima kill sombra
Following.
Hmm... I wonder where Sombra even is...
I mean, what would he be doing that would distract him so much?
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I think this was actually his plan all along.
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Im hopin that he fell in a pit in the everfree and is slowly blooding out from his broken horn and utterly decimated body
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The guys made of shadow. As happy as I would be to let that happen, it probably wont.
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I operate under the assumption that the being made of shadows is magic and thus no horn renders that moot
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In the episode he had his horn chopped off by the shield and that didn't stop him. So, I figure we are gonna have to try something else... he technically is a gas... fire?
me hope more comes soon
Great chapter! Though I wish you'd make them longer. Poor Twi.
2454692 I solved it in my fic by launching his horn into space. That way, he'll just die if he reforms again.
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In stead of fire lets go with cold. That way he freezes and has a solid form to give to cupcakes pinkie
on second thought that would be a mercy, so how about we just cripple the bastard and toss him in to the worst prison in the multiverse and leave after turning off the cameras
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Better idea... He spends eternity in a teenagers underwear draw who masturbates a lot.
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just remembered the ultimate torture from anime
essentially your trapped in your mind and the torture is supposed to last for a set amount of time but your pereption of time slows to a trickle so that your trapped in your mind waiting to die and begging for death
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Now THAT, is something I can get behind. Though, if they were to survive that, I wonder if it would be better to let them live the rest of their lives, stuck in a madness only those thousands of years old can obtain?
Why do i have the horrible feeling that Twilight is going to die giving birth to his foal?
dammit why is it that stories about the mane 6 having foals pulls so hard at my feels
this story is just too short for impact, there is no build here...