King Sombra was defeated, but he escaped by kidnapping Twilight. A year goes by until they catch wind of where she is. She is found in her weakest moment, but her defence is high. Only Shining Armor and Cadence can calm her down enough to help.
I'm not even going to try and imagine what the baby would look like... No! Not gonna think about it... No no no, not thinking about it... ( image pops in head )
If Twilight was in such a state of malnutrition, I am pretty sure her body would have just aborted the foal. No sense in energy going to a growing fetus when the mother is starving.
2428898 Are you aware that The story you have made reference to has a sequel out with about 5 chapters released? It is very good and is titled The Rouge Stallion. If you are aware, my apologies in assuming you weren't. All credit for the stories go to darkangel_31314.
Hey! What's with taking Shining's title of prince away and just replacing it with lord? The dude married a princess. He's a prince now! don't put him lower of the ladder than Blueblood
Hmm. Could use some work in the length department and potentially the backstory, but otherwise im intrigued. Please, do go on.
Indeed 2424290 It could be longer. I too, am interested to see where this goes.
As others may have said, things could be a bit more fleshed out. Nonetheless, this is interesting and I await the next chapter
*takes off shades* my god
I'm not even going to try and imagine what the baby would look like...
No! Not gonna think about it...
No no no, not thinking about it...
( image pops in head )
DANMIT!!
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well that's horrifying!
I like it! I hope to read more from you soon. Ima keep an eye on this one.
Wow, this concept is great.
ive seen it once before but that was with a complete failure in the empire.
I want to read, more.
bravo, bravo.
also from one author to another I suggest you read The Broken Mare by darkangel_31314 for inspiration
Needs more chapters.
NOW!
If Twilight was in such a state of malnutrition, I am pretty sure her body would have just aborted the foal. No sense in energy going to a growing fetus when the mother is starving.
Hmm... interesting, interesting. Let us see what we can develop, shall we?
Well, lets see where this goes...
FAVED AND LIKED
Interesting concept!!!Lookin forward, you have my fav...By the way, Lady Sparkle or Lord Armor sounds a little bit weird, but its your story
Now this is interesting, it has the same kind of aspect of "A Broken Mare" about it which makes me want to watch it to see where it goes.
...Well, damn. This was quite intriguing. Can't wait for more. Liked and faved, don't screw it up now.
ME WANT MORE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
2428898 Are you aware that The story you have made reference to has a sequel out with about 5 chapters released?
It is very good and is titled The Rouge Stallion. If you are aware, my apologies in assuming you weren't.
All credit for the stories go to darkangel_31314.
2427778no offense, but im fairly certain that the answer is magic.
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Damn you magic and your ability to circumvent all the inconsistencies I see!
This can only end one way...
Now, I need a gun and some rope. Anyone else up for a demonic-king hunt?
2434995 i got a rope, a magic inhibitor a rusty knife and a blow torch.
Do the math
2434177 I know about that, I've been tracking it since it came out.
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K I'm just ensuring that no one misses out on an amazing story in the making
WHEN WILL THERE BE MORE????
Hey! What's with taking Shining's title of prince away and just replacing it with lord? The dude married a princess. He's a prince now! don't put him lower of the ladder than Blueblood