Yeah so, I'm following this now.

Poor Twilight, she's scared as hell. I'm wondering what Sombra'll do once he notices that his captive has been rescued

This went about how I expected it to and I love it and await the part where sombra is beaten to within an inch of his life then healed then beaten again until the end of time

Poor twi great chapter bro!!

2447122Me too bro

This is definitely worth following, the only thing which bothers me is that there are a few grammar errors such as misplacing TOO and TWO, I suggest to either find someone to edit your chapters before you release them or just give them a more thorough look over before you post.

2447104 get beat and suffer like a bitch

Ima kill sombra

Following.

Hmm... I wonder where Sombra even is...

I mean, what would he be doing that would distract him so much?

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I think this was actually his plan all along.

2449352
Im hopin that he fell in a pit in the everfree and is slowly blooding out from his broken horn and utterly decimated body

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The guys made of shadow. As happy as I would be to let that happen, it probably wont.

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I operate under the assumption that the being made of shadows is magic and thus no horn renders that moot

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In the episode he had his horn chopped off by the shield and that didn't stop him. So, I figure we are gonna have to try something else... he technically is a gas... fire?

me hope more comes soon

Great chapter! Though I wish you'd make them longer. Poor Twi.
2454692 I solved it in my fic by launching his horn into space. That way, he'll just die if he reforms again.

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In stead of fire lets go with cold. That way he freezes and has a solid form to give to cupcakes pinkie
on second thought that would be a mercy, so how about we just cripple the bastard and toss him in to the worst prison in the multiverse and leave after turning off the cameras

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Better idea... He spends eternity in a teenagers underwear draw who masturbates a lot.

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just remembered the ultimate torture from anime

essentially your trapped in your mind and the torture is supposed to last for a set amount of time but your pereption of time slows to a trickle so that your trapped in your mind waiting to die and begging for death

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Now THAT, is something I can get behind. Though, if they were to survive that, I wonder if it would be better to let them live the rest of their lives, stuck in a madness only those thousands of years old can obtain?

Why do i have the horrible feeling that Twilight is going to die giving birth to his foal?
dammit why is it that stories about the mane 6 having foals pulls so hard at my feels

this story is just too short for impact, there is no build here...

aww I hope twilight doesnt end up dying giving birth! are there any pairings in this

She might not even want to leave. Stockhome syndrome?
But who is the daddy?
It doesn't have to be Sombra, no time line has been established for pregantcy or even how long Twilight was even gone.
And yes I agree the chapters are too short. Thrilling but short

2427670 i totally agree that we need more

2475733 she's been gone a year. I think that makes it concrete that Sombra is the dad.

2447104 But what if he wanted his captive to be rescued...?

I was trying to find a meme to express my displeasure. Instead I came across these:

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I've gotta say that I am a sucker for mental trauma in stories and for that reason this story is tied for first in my favorite trauma stories with the foal in the basket by pony blue and the broken mare by darkangel_31314

Please continue this

Update Please

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Immortality, itself, will drive you mad from all the loss you endure, and believe me, I'm dealing with that same problem, right now.
But... if you thrive on loss, anger, depression, and pain, like Sombra, then being trapped within your mind for the rest of eternity will basically be his version of heaven. Might I suggest we pack Sombra in an airtight crate and send him to the Island from LOST. There, he can live out the rest of his pitiful existence trying to escape and seek revenge, but the chances of him leaving the Island without help are slim to none. Now, THAT would drive Sombra insane.

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Hmm... why not just trap him in /mlp/? Hell, any website that is made to similar design! The only reason we aren't mad from the internet is because we grew up with it.

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*snaps* We trap him in 4chan!

MOAR!

more please.

2850025
Your working theory is that sombra likes pain but sombra, at least this version, sounds like a sadist, one who gets off on inflicting pain, not a masochist I.e. one who gets off on feeling pain in the circumstances I put forward sombra would be trapped in eternal torture just him and pain. so sombra wouldn't enjoy the pain thusly revenge for twilight is achieved

2853613 NO we TRAP HIM IN MY HAPPY HELL! ITS FILLED WITH NICE SMELLING FLOWERS, AND RANBOWS, ANDBUTTERFLIES,ANDSMILESANDCHOCOLATE i go there a lot then my friends go i be like