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After Twilight's coronation as a Princess, she receives a package from a mysterious admirer. In it is a note with what appears to be a small crystal. She meets the sender in her dreams. Will she be able to keep him away, or will she be corrupted by his influence?

Inspired by A Somber Meeting by Omny87. Used with permission.

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Comments ( 15 )

I remember reading this! :pinkiehappy: It was a nice read, and I like how the author (a tip of the hat to him/her) pointed out the whole 'not so different' trope. THAT made it for me. And now, it'll be adapted into a full story? Sign me up!

Very nice! Yes, a lot of this came from that comic, but you did a good job adding Twilight's POV, and you depicted the scene in a way that made it clear what was happening even if one hadn't seen the comic. I hope you continue this one!

Good. Good. I can feel your anger. Take your weapon! Strike me down with all your hatred, and your journey towards the dark side will be complete. *Insert evil villain Emperor from Star Wars here*

-Anyways... just continue this story... if you don't mind that is... :fluttershbad:

really cood, since it's only a readaptation of an existing story, i'm waiting before liking it or not.
but it's a good job so far, and a story with potential :rainbowdetermined2:

Can you continue your story

Are you going to make a new chapter soon

You MUST continue this story...:twilightsmile:

Somene else hase already done this...

I've read the comic to the dream part but i am curious with how you'll continue the story.

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