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The Presence

A spell gone wrong leaves an evil presence in control of Twilight's body...and her magic's growing stronger by the minute. Can her friends band together to stop this monster and get their Twilight back?

Chapters (3)

Horribly Wrong · 4th Jul 2012 · 765 words
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Rarity · 4th Jul 2012 · 893 words
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Morning · 24th Jul 2012 · 1,311 words
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Tealove

Tealove #1 · Jul 5th, 2012 · · · Rarity ·

Interesting start. I am going to have to keep an eye on this one.

xDan

xDan #2 · Jul 5th, 2012 · · · Horribly Wrong ·

That was unexpectedly short.

Relevant Heavy Metal

Relevant Heavy Metal #3 · Jul 5th, 2012 · · · Rarity ·

Aggressive Perfector - Slayer

Lunar Specter

Lunar Specter #4 · Jul 24th, 2012 · · · Morning ·

Hey guys! I'm sorry the other chapters were so short, this one is a tad longer and is about the length my chapters normally are. I'm new to writing MLP fanfics so let me know if you feel I didn't portray any characters correctly and how to get them right.

Also, constructive criticism is always welcome.