The Good Life

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Ellipsis

Ellipsis #1 · Jun 11th, 2013 · 1 · ·

Looking forward to more.

Seether00

Seether00 #2 · Jun 11th, 2013 · · ·

The dialogue is good. Bet there are some thinly veiled barbs coming Spitfire's way.

Skeeter The Lurker

Skeeter The Lurker #3 · Jun 11th, 2013 · · ·

This is interesting.

Don't normally see much in terms of Fleur de Lis.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Axan Zenith

Axan Zenith #4 · Jun 11th, 2013 · · ·

Hmm. Not bad. As a first exploration into clop, you could've done much, much worse. Well done sir.

Fimbulvinter

Fimbulvinter #5 · Jun 12th, 2013 · · ·

I remember reading this back when it was Fleur as a prostitute and I hoped that it would update eventually. Glad to see that it isn't dead and hope to see more of it.

DarthMaul22

DarthMaul22 #6 · Jun 13th, 2013 · · ·

arousement

Just... really?

I think you're looking for 'arousal'.

Serina

Serina #7 · Jun 14th, 2013 · · ·

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I'll be sure to write more!

2705549
Next chapter is definitely going to be... heated.

2705558
Well thanks and yeah it's funny she's so pretty you think there would be more clop to her.

2706373
Well 1st exploration to straight clop at least so thanks.

2713350
Thanks! And yeah I just couldn't go anywhere with the other one unfortunately.

2714308
Thanks! It's all fixed up now.

Dragaen

Dragaen #8 · Jun 15th, 2013 · · ·

seems a certain unicorn mare wasn't exactly satisfied with a certain stallion hmmm?

Serina

Serina #9 · Jul 8th, 2013 · · ·

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Hahahaha sometimes it's a bad addiction and other times its not!
But I do agree I need to go into further detail with the clop. Maybe it's because I'm writing about a girl/mare in a sexy/cloppy way and I've never done that before. I'll try to make it more descriptive in the next chapter though!!!

Seto Kaiba