nevermind my message, i see it now

I apologize to all about that. My internet acted pretty stupid when it was publishing the story. And I fixed the problem with the Italics that was covering half the story. Hopefully it turned out right this time.

“Damnit I already told the first bitch ‘no’!” Spike remarked angrily.

"Dynamite! Dynamite!"

Wow. This is a really nice ending to the story...
...but why did you leave it so open ended?
We don't know if Spike is right about not being able to have kids with ponies. We don't know what Celestia wants to talk to him about specifically. We know that Spike and Rarity are in a committed relationship, but that Rarity's okay with sharing...but too many questions!

Of course, I did think of one ending you could have given it that would have been really strange and horrid.
Spike wakes up after making love to Rarity, and he's a kid again. It turns out that everyone he slept with is pregnant.

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Like I said in the notes of the chapter, there will be more stories to this 'universe', so everything is not really on a cliff hanger as this 'universe' (of this story) will continue on in another form with Spike. Right now, the story between his first sexual experiences and his love confession is over~ Now on to the future~

I can promise you that~

I would enjoy a sequel to this....plsss...
LOVED IT!!!!

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In that case, I look forward to what you produce.

“Oh um…about that…” he started. When there was awkward silence, “I love you Rarity! Be with me and MOTHER MY CHILDREN!”

Classic lines that have been mentioned in many different anime. Also:

“Hmmm yes dear~ Before I kicked your dragon balls~” she smiled with eyes fluttering at him. “Which I would assume is quite large no?”

Yes, they are. He also has seven of them, and if she rubs them right, Spike will be able to grant her any 3 wishes!

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"Mother my children" is pretty mainstream~

And I couldn't resist the Dragonballs pun~

dang was actualy interested to see if he could get anal out of AJ or fluttershy.

Really good chapter.

Now for the sequel!

OH FUCK NO ( puts a gun to the writers head )you are going to make a sequel got it

Writer:*gulp*yes

good

The Princesses wants a piece of dragon.

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there has to be a sequel to this awesome story, spike still has to have sex with two(possible) three alicorns plus have a 7-way with the mane 6.

2602490 dynamite don't got shit on me!!! right Zalgos

Zalgos: word

.....don't you ever do that again everyone was like what fuck was that

Zalgos: sorry

This needs a continuation. There is so much more that could happen and it would be glorious to see a sequel to this. Other than that, I think this chapter was the best of the story. Not just because of Sparity (Though that's part of it), but because of how kinky it was and how sexy it was. It had a lot of funny moments and it was awesome to see Spike and Rarity finally get together as a couple. Overall, excellent story and one of my all time favorite stories. Hope to see a sequel soon.

Why isn't this showing up on my unread favorites?

More fucking now mochacho

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Nigga, he got shit on your daddy!

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Well like I said in the author notes of the last chapter, there are obvious hints to what will happen in the future~

You seem to have a preference for the word thus... That is all...

Oh no you don't! You better Epilogue this story!
Do you know how few stories out there have Spike bucking Celestia and/or Luna? NOT ENOUGH! Especially in Anthro form.

Also liked the Black Dynamite reference.

Great story! But you owe it to your reader's again yourself to do one more chapter. Please!

Yeeap!
Oh, Luna.

Now, ONE SEQUEL!
Use "Hearth's Warming Eve", or the letter of Luna and Celestia.

2602783 say that again and I will kill like killed you got me i'm not playing ether I will find you and when I do i'll make the devil look like a saint do you got me because i'm not fucking kidding here i'll make look like she an sane do you get

There's a un-capped Spike.

Her flower mess a clear mess... first one should be made instead of mess

man up. Doesn't work for this, I think you want dragon or drake perhaps.

A most favorable ending! A little repetitive in some places, but I did enjoy this quite a bit.

The end? B-but what about muh SpikexLuna?

Seriously though, this was very satisfying reading. You write really hot smut and I do hope you write more stories in the future.

2602786 Well hope to see that soon then.

Sounds like Luna and Celestia both want a piece of Spike as well. Really hope to see more chapters soon.

Spike (to Rarity):

(hope to you that you all know the song, or at least the melody/music, otherwise go to YouTube!!)

These are my confessions
When I got with you
Yesterday I did our 5 best pony friends too.
Yes, these are my confessions.
I'm still sad for what I cannot do
Which is to give a child to you.
(These are my confessions)
Now Twilight's told me Celestia's made us a call
I think Mom might put my scales up on her wall
Man, I'm terrified!! I don't know what to do,
But Rarity, I still LOVE YOU
So these are my confessions..

And I do assure you that she WILL be disciplined for her actions…

Giggity?

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Thanks for pointing those out~

Glad you liked it~

Loved it, great job.

2604503 Happy to help. You've done some nice work here

please tell me there is a sequel, there NEEDS to be a sequel, with Spike, the Mane 6 and the Princesses

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In the future, yes.

Bravo sir. You have a gift!
Got a real long laugh at the 'dream within a dream within a dream within a dream' part. And then sandvich joke.

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PRICELESS!!!

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Holy Inception, Luna! What the fuck?!

Oh, this was a great ending to a great story. I'll probably find myself going back and re-reading most or all it in the near future. I liked Spike's explanation for getting his wings a lot, loved Rarity's reaction to him suddenly being sexist, and found both Sweetie Belle's presence and the Princesses letters to be quite entertaining.

There seemed like there were a fair amount of grammatical errors and such this chapter, though. I can point them out if no one else has.

All in all i can sum up my thoughts on this fic with two words: Most Excellent.

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Feel free to PM me~

yea I am hooked on this AWSOME story dude keep it up.

2604623 Kufufufufu~ Very good. Kufufufufu~

'Disciplined'?

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Yeah...Princess Luna put some really screwed-up dreams in Spike's subconscious while he was resting from post-coital sex with Rarity. If I remembered correctly, they were as followed:

1/ Twilight catches up to Spike and tells him that Celestia knows that Spike got intimate with all of their friends, and discovered that all the Mane 6 (including Rarity) ended up pregnant with Spike's foals, proving that dragons and ponies are compatible {that was a dream}
2/ Spike wakes up from dream #1, with Rarity on his side, both naked from sex, and then one at a time, each of the remaining Mane 6 started popping up all over the bedroom, waiting for round 2 (or in Twi's case, round 3)....and then Big Mac came in for some fun {that was a dream, too}
3/ Spike wakes up from dream #2 and realized that he got down with Granny Smith..... There is not enough brain bleach to wipe that out {thank Celestia that was a dream, what a horrible nightmare}
4/ Spike wakes up again, this time from dream#3, with no Rarity in the bed, but Princess Luna appears from under the covers, naked as the day she was born. At that point, Celestia showed up and dragged Luna by her mane away from Spike {yep, it was Inception to the 4th degree here}

Finally Spike woke up, in bed, Rarity dozing on top of him, both of them naked in Rarity's bedroom. 5th times' the charm as this was him returning to consciousness.

I hope that's everything....

2601801 This was a awesome story.
I loved the Black Dynamite reference.

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I know that, silly filly. I read it. Way to make somepony look stupid!

What I meant by "''Disciplined'? " was that I thought Celestia might try...some...'things'...to Luna...if ya know what I mean

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....I didn't mean to make anyone think they looked stupid...

I just thought they were a little confused...I'm sorry....

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I-i'm sorry...