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The Dragon Warlock


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This interests me... (Click read later) :twilightsmile:

1850660
I know I did. :moustache:

1850719 Cool. Though I'm surprised anypony is seeing this considering it hasn't been approved yet.

Sparity is one of my favorite pairing period. Plus this site needs more Sparity clopfics as well. Really looking foward anymore Sparity fics you write.

Truly an joyful one- shot. Glad I read it all. :moustache:

Do keep up the good work upon future stories like this one.:raritywink:

lol! Get caught banging a mare on your first day on the job?:rainbowderp: Instant promotion! :moustache:

Nice story though. I have to wonder what if birth control could happen in the real world like Equestria...

"Honey, I've got to tell you something.... I'm pregnant."
"What? I thought you did the sterilization thing?!"
"Oops... Guess I didn't concentrate hard enough..." :rainbowlaugh:

1850660 Well, I read it, and I can fully say that I really enjoyed this story. It's exactly what I like in a clop-fic, a good mixture of story and clop. Thx for the great Christmas present :twilightsmile: Hope you and everyone else have a great holiday and a happy new year.

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Awesome story bro!

Commence read.

Nice story.

Had to read it after the description. Very good job as always.:eeyup:

Good exposition, Made me laugh, and the sex scenes are well written. (I was just a little upset about how cool fluttershy and lotus were about walking in on spike climaxing inside rarity. I mean... they are anthromorphitized after all. Shouldn't there be a liiiittle more awkwardness between the two sides?)

Either way, you sir have earned a mustache from me for this glorious fanfic!!! keep it up!!!

:moustache:

Ooh, a new Sparit... right.

That was a good read, some grammer errors, but nice job all the same.:moustache:
Glad to see after all the stories I've read that mention that Spike should get a job as a masseur at the Spa, that someone made a story around the idea. With it being Anthro or not, you can't really go wrong.

But if it was the original character design, Spike would still be the best if not the only masseur, lol.:raritywink:
Good Job, Merry Christmas, Happy Hearth Warming and A Happy New Year!

First of all, I’m way too old for Fancy Pants.

I think you meant young. Rarity is defiantly younger than Fanypants.

Okay, it was really good, but you had a lot of repetition in the sex scenes. Never use moist cave or sack either, seriously mood killing. You use -hood a lot, not that I have any room to talk. Remember, alluding is usually your best answer.

It was very sweet.

:yay: for :moustache::heart::raritywink:

So much win!!!

I would like to see more of this however, but I can see that it is a one-shot. Well done, friend!!

Also, interesting how Rarity used a birth control spell to not get pregnant from Spike. That confirmed 2 things to me: Dragons have to be the most virile creatures ever to even have Rarity consider it with Spike her partner, and that (at least according to this story) the possibilty of a kirin could be possible. I kinda wished that her time with her loving dragon would have added like a epilogue where her special massage led to Rarity being pregnant, but that is a bit of fat that ultimately did not need. I really did love this story.

Just one little thing, since Pinkie has already (amazingly...how does that mare do it in such a little amount of time, we will never know :pinkiehappy:) got out to know that Spike and Rarity are a couple now, and that now Fluttershy intimately knows as well, what will the others know? Oh wait, everypony already knows about Spike's love for Rarity (it ain't a crush anymore)

Ok, I'm gonna stop now....I really enjoyed this story. FAVED!!:yay::yay:

That happened. And I'm glad it did.

1850830 Well now it's published so everypony can see it. :pinkiehappy:
1850844 Thanks! I hope to write more in the future. :twilightsmile:
1850869 Thanks for reading. :ajsmug:
1850917 I actually got this idea from a friend I did some RP'ing with.
1850938 I'm really glad you enjoyed the story as a whole. Hope you have a Merry Christmas and a Happy New Year as well.

1850954 Glad you enjoyed it FFB!
1850955 Thanks!
1851012 Thank you!
1851065 Thank you!
1851114 I'm really glad you enjoyed it. And remember, Lotus did in some way help set up the two together.

1851191 Yes, remember.
1851296 Wow! Somepony thought of doing something similar with my story? That's quite interesting. You should tell that pony about this story. And I'm glad you loved it.
1851947 Damn, thanks for pointing that out. Well TBH, I was doing my best to avoid using vulgar words and whatnot. If you have a list of words, I'll gladly take them. Just PM them to me please.
1852002 Oh, you're funny. :rainbowlaugh:
1852306 Maybe I will create a sequel one day where Spike and Rarity prepare for a foal of their own.
1852486 Yup. :twilightsmile:

“My name is . . . Hand Cream,”

. . .

.....like somepony kicked him lightly in the dragonballs.

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I'm sorry I just lost my s*** right there . . . .:rainbowlaugh:

But then . . .
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1852920 I was actually hoping somepony would catch that. I'm glad you enjoyed the story overall.

AWESOME... but I should really stop reading clopfics, but thankyou for the best clopfic I have EVER read... Period.:twilightsmile:

1853479 Wow! You're welcome! I didn't think somepony would find it THIS good. I'm honored. :twilightblush:

1853662
Your welcome after all it was AMAZING

so you get this (Its not mine)
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Well the idea was amazing. lol I'm thinking of how the pegasi and earth ponies will go about this now.

Also, merry Christmas!:twilightsmile:

1853881 They probably still use regular condoms. And Merry Christmas to you as well. :pinkiehappy:

1852612 .........touche. lol still good job!

1852618 Go with your instincts man. Obviously something things sound sensual and hot, and others like moist cave sound like a bad porno.

1854748 I'm just sorry it really wasn't what you were hoping. I'll gladly take any other words that I can use for future clop fics.

Interesting. I kinda wanted them to have kids. Weird. Maybe a non-clop sequel? You write romance well.

1855252 Well, I look forward to that day.

1854805 Oh, don't be. I enjoyed it just fine :raritywink:

1855327 Thanks mate. It means a lot from a talented Sparity writer such as yourself.

I really liked this. It was really romantic. I'm writing a short about Rarity/Spike myself, and I can say, I really leaned a lot. Thumbs up!!!:heart:

Well written, and the clop actually seemed (for the most part) to be rolling along with the storu. For a rating, how about 8.4? Not too shabby.

1859648 Thanks! I know this isn't a perfect 10, but as long as it's good, I'll take it!

This is simply beautiful. Pure perfection. I would gladly take Spike's place any day :raritywink:

I find that Sparity is my fav and i an a huge fan of anthro so this story satisfied both of those and for that i say thank you. Keep on keepn' on.:duck::moustache:

........I have no words to say how great this story is..other than to mark you as watched and thumbs up

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Keep up the great work

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