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Dude, I was gonna write a story with this excat same title!! About Rarity and Sweetie-Belle becoming better sisters though. Too bad that was a flop, would've been much more awkward. :rainbowlaugh:

Another day another collab. Pleasure partying with you, Bob.

Edit: Oh no I'm on Reddit and got le downboated for my comment. DDDDD:

Looks like I got here just in time!
Now then...there's no time to explain...
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DAMNIT, IT ALREADY FEATURED

dayum. Nice romance.

Oh dear... poor Spike... he has NO idea what he's gotten into... also ManiacPaint... one of the few artists that makes me think it's okay to look at cartoon horses and think 'I'd sleep with it.' (though I do think the hips are a bit wide.)

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It's RainbowBob, of course it's already featured!

Yes, a new story about best pony with best tits.

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Applejack

Odd way to spell Cup Cake.

No offense, but this feels like it was written by a virgin. Most of the dialogue during the sex was very unrealistic and the sex scene itself felt rushed. The pacing changes quite radically once they step through Rarity's doorway.

3476260 I noticed that as well. :trixieshiftright:
Oh well. :rainbowlaugh:

Great Story, made me think of this pic almost instantly.
deviantart.com/art/Commission-Delicious-Date-391985444 .

yeah! spike got some!

Well...

WATCHER! AWAY!

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That's the most beautiful thing I've seen all day.

That ending... :heart:

This story pissed me off. Not because it was badly written or anything like that. Just the opposite: it was very well done. Perhaps too well done. I have a seriously bad taste in my mouth now.

I'm favoriting it.

Nice take on the Sparity ship, dude.

You certainly picked a perfect partner for it.

~Skeeter The Lurker

Well, well, well. That was one of the best Sparity stories. But I was startled more than once due to some grammatical errors. Don't want to sound as a grammar Nazi or something, but I think it would be much more enjoyable once you correct these mistakes. But it was great, I enjoyed it very, very much.

“Just to you.” He grinned. “Everyone else thinks I’m kind of a jerk.”

This might be the most accurate depiction of me with someone ever...

Absolutely excellent. A few minor errors, and some word choice I personally don't like, but over all a simply marvelous piece of work. Might be one of my favorite clop stories to date. Very realistic, very true to the characters. And, you did something I've never seen, you made grown Spike short. Mind boggling.

I'm not all into clop fics or anything, but when it comes to shipping, you fucking nailed it on the head!

another favorite! :twilightsmile:

thinking this a way spike is going to breeze through the guard
:moustache: :duck:

That was a nice story, it had what I was looking for, small romance.:moustache:

The ending scared me. 18 hours is a long time for ANYONE! Btw nice story:moustache:

nice, always room for a great sparity fic. Kinda iffy on the twilight/AJ but still acceptable pairing.

Is the name of this story a reference to The Velveteen Rabbit? Or perhaps Pinocchio?

I give myself +10 Awesome Points just for referencing that first one.

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You know what? Your profile picture... Scary.
Uhm, if that's alright with you.

That "Man not a boy" speech Spike did was incredible and a perfect image of Spike's true dreams and feelings are. At least to me. 5 outta 5!

“Good,” Rarity spoke, her long locks of purple hair flowing like a waterfall down her head. “Because when I’m done with you, Spikey Wikey, guard training is going to look easy.”

Whelp, Spike's in for it now. Literally.

Great story! This is my new favorite Fanfic! You rock Dude, you rock:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

8 hours ohhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh

awesomely written 10 out of 10

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That about sums it up.

“I’m not asking you for just my benefit,” he replied, carefully considering his words. “I mean, be honest with me here, you don’t think there’s even a glimmer of potential…” He gestured at his chest. “You know, inside? I mean, I’m not exactly your usual fare, I understand that. But…” Spike swallowed, staring hard at her eyes. “I think, deep down, if I turn and leave this kitchen and drop it, you might have regrets that you didn’t at least try us.”

Well played, Spike, well played :trixieshiftright:

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