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Good job. I can't wait to see them start their game night and their lives together. This was a good starting chapter, it set up for what is to come and leaves up eager to see what they will do. I am happy this isn't also going to become a mare 6 story (at least I hope) I think the story is much better with just those 3 being together. I can't wait to see some of the other reveals they will have to share,a family game night at Twi's parents while they sneak fooling around with each other lol or one at the castle with Spike's family (Celestia). Not to mention a date to the arcade (maybe some fooling around in a photobooth and teasing each other as they are playing games). There are a tone of interesting things that can happen with this story and I cant wait.
4353257 Yeah, no, I said it was going to stay just those two, no adding the others and making a herd. I didn't plan to do that.
Nice! I can't wait to see where this goes. I especially can't wait to see Pinkie's reaction
4353338 lol well pinkie is going to lose her shit. The interesting reactions will be rarity and shy. Shy will be happy for dash I would think but rarity might have problems with the relationship. It could be because it is two females and one male and the fact said male is of a different species. But that is if we want that kind of drama. I would enjoy it if it was story with not such heavy drama lol. Just about the ups and downs of their relationship
Well, this is interestin even tho u only just started ; Heh, i did get a chuckle or two out of spike understandable callin his marefriends teases but, at least he handled t risin' problem later . Anyways can't wait to see what happens in t next chappie
4353386 That is true. I think, however, that since they seem to have a herd mentality in this world Rarity won't so much have a problem with two females and a male so much as the male being a different species. I hope she doesn't have such a prejudice but it would make for an interesting conflict. I personally think her initial reaction, she'll faint dead away. Pinkie will most certainly lose her shit spectacularly
One words
MORE
HUZZAH!
4353512 Oh don't worry there will be. Glad to know that this story is getting such a positive reaction like the last one, I look forward to writing this one.
I am intrigued
4356445 I am right along with you, there are so many places these story can go and a ton of nerdy,sexy, and nerdy sexy moments that could come out of this great story.
One word: COSPLAY!!! It would be perfect. Rarity loves to make clothes and would probably get a thrill out of dressing herself and the others into (sexy) clothes from various role playing games. Pinkie Pie would find it fun since it would be like playing make believe. And Fluttershy could imagine herself as a brave and bold heroine instead of a shy and timid one. Rainbow Dash could would probably have to egg Applejack into doing it, but I don't think it would take much effort.
In the image, it looks like Dash is playing Donkey Kong 64 on a Super Famicom with a Nintendo Entertainment System controller...
4380481 My brain just exploded.
4360373 lol right?
where's chapter 2 you must give us chapter 2 please
4444394 I know, I know I'm working on my other story at the moment, but I promise that after the next chapter I will begn work on the next chapter for this one.
Exhibitionist dragon.
Good job with this chapter. Like many others I have been dying to read what happens next. I am happy Spike got to tease them all and the fact his teasing messed with Shy as well made it all the more funnier lol. I wonder how the party will go. I bet Spike's teasing isn't done. Of course it could be the girls turn to tease back lol
4451835 You'd be right, there is still some teasing left, and Rarity isn't and exception.
Spike is such a tease!
4452020 Yes, so much better then reserved Spike if you ask me.
4451980 Oh seeing Rarity get it will be all too funny lol. Hell they could play "Fight Truth" (A game me and me friends made up) It is when you play a fighting game the loser has to answer a question from the winner lol. It is like truth or dare but with video games lol. I want to see how flustered Rar gets. I bet it will be when Spike start to get physical with Twi or Dash as they are playing a game lol
4452122 Good idea, I had something like that planned for the next part. Hopefully it doesn't take to long to get the next part out for this story, 'cause I got a really good idea planned for the next chapter.
4452140 Then start writing now! I am dying to see them start to play and what ever craziness might come up from it. This is why I am not starting more then one story too many things to look forward to from you and not enough time in the day for you to pump them all out.
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I can see this Spike feeling up Twi and Dash while playing games just to get the other girls all hot and bothered, only to tease them further with some sexy flirty words
Such a naughty dragon
4452159 Ya'know it!
Luneth can't wait for the next chapter
4455197 ARE YOU HAPPY NOW! HUH!? ARE YOU!? lol jk anyway thanks for liking me story and it hopefully won't take too long for the next chapter.
I was reading though, and it seems you replace "and" for "any" and "an" a lot, you also do it in your comments. Places I noticed where; "Rarity isn't and exception." Should be an "an" or "any"; same with "thy could have their party without and interruptions." "They" should also have an 'e'. Sorry if this comes off as being rude. There also a few other errors, "be" being used in place of "me" and such.
4456964 Bot being rude, you being helpful. I get those things corrected.
Spikes got game
4462505 I love Spike like that, sounds better than Spike being more reserved.
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Party time ehh? I like party time.
~OreoKookie
4506559 currently at a anime con right now, I'll be back on Sunday and back to writing.
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Dude, sweet, have fun there and do me a favor and high-five someone there and say, "I did for the noms!"
~OreoKookie
4507078 'Imma find a deadpool cosplayer and have them say it.
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Did anyone do it?
~OreoKookie
4508576 Naw not right now, I'll look for one tomorrow. I damn near lost my shit when I found a Celestia and Luna cosplayers, there was also a flash sentry with them.
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A knight with the Princesses seems rather fitting. Please get someone to do that, it would make everyone's day!
~OreoKookie
4508629 I got there picture. And it was the EQG flash sentry.
4508692 their. Lol
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Dude you have to show me! PM me if you must but I must see this!
~OreoKookie
i want to see more of Spike's innuendos, the girls should be flustered all night long
dead space.... yes just yes! cant wait for the screams *laguhs evily*
dead space eaghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh
4525649 What? What's the matter don't like it...well I like it, in fact it's one of the very few games I can play more than once.
4525561 flustered??? More like they'll be dripping wet and ready to go at it on the floor... in front of everyone else. At least Twilight and Rainbow will
4525732 Fable III is better than dead space yes I actually Like that game
4525749 Hey no problem with that, I played a couple of fables, they just weren't the kind of game I liked. Just my opinion, not hatin' on it though.