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Yea this has Trixie written all over it.
Oh and thanks again for writing out the clop scene in my story. I hope we can work together some time in the future. thanks again.
2186841 Not a problem. How is that comming, by the way?
2186885 Slow to say the least I've only got seven thousand words to show for a months time I feel so bad because I haven't produced a proper finished chapter in over a month. and the other story doesn't count because it is actually finite's piece, I just edit the crap out of it... literally. though if you want to check it out I can send you the link. It has some pretty interesting elements added in. sadly no clop yet maybe in a few chapters once I have the main group together.
Indeed, my dear Twilight. Alicorns everywhere.
now thats something to remember and sexually
Heh, kinda wish this wasn't just a one-shot, Alicorn Trixie would be an interesting story.
“Trixie truly is the top talented thaumaturgist in the totality of this territory.”
Soon, Trixie’s supple silky snatch slathered its secretions onto the clone’s slick sensually stroking tongue.
Trixter’s perfectly positioned penis plunged promptly into Trixie’s puffy procreative passage, parting her pussy and presenting his purple python to her plump placenta.
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Edit: As a side note, I love how this story has something to do with the mirror pond...and the banner for me at the top is Pinkie Pie pulling out another Pinkie from the mirror pond
Ah, alliteration. Truly the greatest tool in the writer's toolbox.
2189416 Indeed it is, if you can pull it off well.
I still need more practice before I feel really comfortable using it
It's OK Twilight, you'll get your chance.
“Trixie truly is the top talented thaumaturgist in the totality of this territory.”
Soon, Trixie’s supple silky snatch slathered its secretions onto the clone’s slick sensually stroking tongue.
Trixter’s perfectly positioned penis plunged promptly into Trixie’s puffy procreative passage, parting her pussy and presenting his purple python to her plump placenta.
I'm not mad at you but I did try to reread that and I failed each time lol.
2200808 It helps if you read alliteration aloud so you can get the rhythm of the words.
2200944 And for some reason made me think about Codename Kids Next Door lol.
The clop was good. This selfcest genre is perfect for Trixie. Also good play on the clones' names. Bonus point for the alliteration; although I had to read it a few times and it made my brain scream. My feelings for the alicorn ending were exactly the same for the one in the finale. I'll just leave it at that.
2270000 I debated about putting in an alternative ending that didn't feature Alicorn Trixie but never got around to it.
Originally I had Brixie called Trixie B, but changed it on suggestions from pre readers. Trixter is the correct r63 name for Trixie. The Alliteration took a while to add in.
Thanks for having a look though. I saw that yours reached the feature box, so you may have this one in the bag already.
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>Trickster is the correct r63 name for Trixie.
Since when? I've only ever seen it as Presto!
2398614 According to the first result when the string 'mlp fim rule 63 names' is entered into google. This page here.
Presto is a musical term more than it is a magical word for stage magicians, used either as the title for a section of a piece or as a tempo marking. Either way it means 'very fast' and it didn't feel appropriate for Trixie's R63
Found it the source for the cover:
http://shrineheart.deviantart.com/art/Commission-Narcissism-Never-Looked-So-Good-366471000
shrineheart.deviantart.com
http://www.reddit.com/r/mylittlepony/comments/1cpgqk/narcissism_never_looked_so_good/c9j12mt
2456809 Yea. That is the cover that I had commissioned specifically for this story. The original one was placeholder until this new comission was finished.
Should really go back and change the description now.
this is the greatest clop fic ever
2503459 Danke
Glad you enjoyed it
I want a sequel to this with or without clop I want it!
If anything is done about about a change or sequel, I like this fic a lot but the near constant alliteration lessens the fun a tiny bit.
3045502 There was only three lines of deliberate alliteration through out the story, but if that isn't your thing, I can't stop you.
3046707 Sorry it just grabbed hold of me a bit, I focus differently in different states of mind, but I really this fic just the same, and I'm sure Trixie would to. Unless of course this fic has a corresponding reality, then I wonder how The Great and Powerful Alicorn Trixie would react?
Fun story, nice clean clop. The ending really surprised me (but positively); given the foreshadowing from the book, I feared it'd end in some nasty way. Glad to see it ended well. (For Trixie, anyway. Twilight might be in trouble.)
I can only assume that the griffon author lacked the requisite inner harmony (read: narcissism) to truly love herself enough that her clones would work properly. Or maybe the pool just don't work properly on griffons.
4355327 Mostly the first option. Trixie is too deeply in love with Trixie to ever even consider harming Trixie.
yeah alicorn trixie will kick twilights flank
Nice alliteration!
That ending was hilarious!
We need moar Trixie selfcest!! <3
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that it does. 171 times, to be exact.