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I don't normally read clop, but when I do I don't read it for the clop factor. The writing was solid, if a little sparse for my taste, but besides that I thought it was rather well written.
Not too bad. A few punctuation errors here and there, but it was pretty solid.
I read the description and I'm all:
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...while I can't bring myself to approve of the subject matter (not clop but filly..."stuff"), I applaud your execution of this little story. I'll give it a like!
This is so well done! I mglad to see that little cunt get taught a lesson!
Hey, FairySlayer, are you going make that sequel you were talking about a while back? The one about Big Mac punishing Scootaloo? Just wondering.
Who thinks like that?
(THAT ASSHOLE!!! I'M GOING TO MOLEST THE SHIT OUT OF THAT MOTHERFUCKER!!!)
Take Some Facial Hair.
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Thank you.
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Thanks. My "editor" has been scarcely available for a year or so, and you know what it's like trying to find proofreaders who are just perfectly pedantic enough...
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Then again, maybe all the way home Diamond Tiara was all smug about not having to pay for it this time.
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That's why I left this marked as incomplete. The right (or very wrong) ideas started coming to mind.
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IRL it makes a lot more sense than you'd think. Humans are way more fucked up than ponies.
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Now I have to wonder what dm29 actually saw to inspire such a great response. I could only dream of inspiring such revulsion.
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This makes me more excited than I probably should be.
Well. This happened.
I'm not sure why I decided to read this, or how I even found it, but it was interesting, and enjoyable in a sense. Only thing I didn't "like" (a loose term, I suppose) is the implication of Big Macintosh as a foal-fiddler (buh-dum tsh).
Either way, you earned a fave and a thumbs up.
Most alarming thing was that I could picture this without much OOCness...
It was very well written
AAAAND.... LIFT OFF!
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Anticipation can be half the fun.
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Aww, thanks. Others have mentioned that they prefer that Big Macintosh remain innocent in all of this. I guess he already has all his sister's friends to play with (at the very least).
As for being in-character... Nah, the writers will never have to stoop to that.
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Thank you. I did my best at the time.
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Is that a good thing or a bad thing?
"special grownup stuff, if you know what I mean."
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"St. Gluis". Jesus.
Hell of a story in it's own creepy way. I like how much respect Scootaloo has for Big Macintosh, usually it's Applejack they admire. Even if the reasons are not entirely "wholesome", I can see how Mac would easily settle into a big brother role for just about anypony who needed it. I'll just assume some childhood play got out of hand and besides, it's fictional anyway.
Haven't read the story, but:
Bring what about?