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I remember you. You were one of the first clopfics I every read. Nice to see your here.
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Well that was kinda funny, then it was nice and sad. Pinkie saves Equestria. Poor Celestia, that's what she gets for trolling I guess!
O pinkie your so random
570613 The firs for me. It has a very special place in my heart.
Pardon the delay, but e-mail notifications were shut off or stopped working a few weeks ago.
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Ah, thanks. Was it this story or one of the better (happier/juicer) stories? Either way I think I owe this site a couple of the latter.
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I'll gladly take that. :)
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A story that has just enough bad stuff to get every negative tag possible (on AFFn) yet so little of each that people who are really into that sort of stuff may be disappointed.
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(So Scootaloo, bury Rainbow Dash in a cave the first chance you get.)
It's a warning to keep your bad sister locked up FOR-EVERRR...
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I hope contrast of moods between the story and Pinkie's telling was okay. Just because it's horrific doesn't mean there can't have a few laughs along the way. The only hard question is whether or not to write the side-story where Rarity and Fluttershy become so competitive over Spike that they give him a three-way just before he's let out of the hospital.
If had been Trollestia then it wouldn't be such a bad thing I guess. However, if it'd been Molestia she'd have been so into it that Luna would have given up in disgust: "Stick that spreader bar inside! And don't take off the chain first!"
(What? No Luna icons here?
)
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But she gets the job done where others fail.
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I'll try to come up with something a little happier and cloppier soon (or just post more of my older happy clopfics).
A good place in your heart, or the attack kind of place in your heart?
577399 Nice place.
577399 I'd like to read that three-way part.... yes... I would.
Dang, thought she was gonna shove it some place else
, would have really perfected the black comedy. Otherwise though, I do like how it sort of cements the seriousness in the fic instead and doesn't make it seem like gore for the sake of gore. I liked how you wrapped up the story to not make it a complete horrendous-tragedy-happens-please-feel-bad fic, I guess I should have seen it coming but it really does add more layers to Pinkie Pie's character. All in all, pretty good grimdark IMO. I personally enjoy grimdarks with more phycological elements, but this one was pretty fine without the mind breaks, etc. The gore here seems like it tries a bit too hard to reach for the shock factor though, there's a difference between cringing from reading something because you can literally imagine the pain the character is in, and cringing from just how disgusting the torture is. I really love it in the sense that its torture with symbolic meaning which makes it different then just plain glass shard up the marehood (Ehhhh? Good reference, anyone? No? I'll just, go home..,then....), but I dunno, I just didn't feel that "breeze between the legs", ya know? Maybe because I'm not a girl though, 
. The story started off as (black) comedic, then got 10x darker, then became weirdly somewhat wholesome? Was a strange rollercoaster but I enjoyed it. Don't stop writing grizzly fics dude.
Of course, I'm just an amateur reader, so do take my thoughts with a grain of salt
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Heh, maybe you're right and Pinkie should have put that horn in Princess Luna's unsavory place, but I think she was in a hurry. I'm glad you enjoyed it for the most part, and your critique is fair. A few readers mentioned that certain parts took them out of the moment. Basically I was inspired by Sgt. Sprinkles' "Cupcakes" but wanted to set things askew by doing it in the voice of the ultimate optimist, which I may have let restrict me more than it should have.
Same thing with my endings always having a cool-down to them. Perhaps I could have insinuated that Pinkie had gone a bit made and/or become host to the dark forces. Though later on I thought it would be hilarious to have the ending fade out to a campfire scene, focusing on Pinkie Pie's face as she says the final words. Then as she puts down the flashlight we slowly pan to the various reactions of the mane six… and then the CMC… and finally to the princesses, who awkwardly agree that maybe they should all get to bed.
Anyway, if any dark ideas come to me I'll at least take notes, but I've been pretty dead in the water for the past lustrum or so. Thanks for chiming in and making my day.