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Sorry if I did a bad job it's difficult using a phone to write a story.

oh i really hope they did that shit at the base that is about to be carpet bombed

This is pretty good, and very well done considering it's written with a phone. You get a fav from me. :raritywink:

I have to ask does the story feel a bit rushed?

Hmm, first chapter was nice, but the Celestia part of chapter two could use more description. I cant wait for chapter 3 :pinkiesmile:

I'm liking this! Looking forward to more! :pinkiehappy:

all i can say is don't use I use she... so like "she gave Luna a simple nod and with a little force the horn on my head glowed in it's beautiful golden aura and with little effort she raise the sun over the horizon giving my little ponies another beautiful day"

all i can say is don't use I use she... so like "she gave Luna a simple nod and with a little force the horn on her head glowed in it's beautiful golden aura and with little effort she raise the sun over the horizon giving my little ponies another beautiful day"

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Not really.

You get a like and a fav from me.

I would like thank you all for the favs and upvotes it really means alot to me. FLUTTERYAY!

AAAAWWWWWWWW SHEEEEIIIIIIIIT!:rainbowlaugh:
Nice story!

yea shit is hitting the fan

Oh shit. This does not look good.

SWEEEEEEEEET MOAR NOW:flutterrage: thatis if you don't mind of course:fluttershyouch:

Oh no! :pinkiegasp: Lets hope that they can explain themselves before they get beaten to hell!

Hi

Strange turn of events...

and no one has mentioned this?

"Two unknown creatures have heart my little ponies

I think you mean

"Two unknown creatures have hurt my little ponies

Haven't played cod in months everything is just rolling off the top of my head.

Just a quick question, since it's a bit unclear, does Ben still have his tattoos?

Ben hasn't taken off his shirt yet so I don't know it has only been a few hours since they woke up.

I know I have lots spelling error so I I'll do my best to fix them.

Are the characters African Americans, or was the black man comant a joke?

Then celestia shows up and ruins the moment, at the same time as ending her 'no-armor' spree. :rainbowwild:

Older brother is black younger is hispanic

Great story! NEEDS MORE UPDATES!!! :pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Hi

Love endings like that were they say it like its nothing and the others faint

This is going to get quite awkward when Celestia and her guards show up.

.... well I see that cupcakes was basicly repeated in this fic....I like it can't wait for more my good man.:twilightsmile:

I can't wait to see what happens next. Hey I was wondering if you wanted a proofreader and/or want help with writeing this fic. Just asking is all.:twilightsmile:

Shit is going to get real soon

Lol "where the blood come from"
"Oh that well you know how it is when you get your head cut off, ya know? Been there done that."
Lol

Uh oh.....Now he's done it. :ajbemused:

Tracking, This story's brilliant. The gore scene made me a bit squeamish :pinkiesick:

i pissed my self when you showed celestia you dont fuck around

I hope its a changeling other wise THEY FUCKED.

It's a changling that was spying on them.

Once you join the Seal's your training is never over.

please tell me he hit a changling midflight

If it ends up being a bird or something then shit will go down. Oh and good luck in Buds training....crap I forgot what that meant.

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