Sgt Maj Ezra Smith was one of the best the year is 2157 and in the aftermath of World War Four. The World is a wasteland filled with mutants and bandits. Raditation sickness is as common as the cold. While on a mission in what was Washington D.C. compilations happen. The result stranded in Equestria. How will he be adept? Will he return home? What is Celestia's plan for him? Will Pinkie Pie drive him crazy?
This is my first fic so go easy on me. Also this is not a self insert all the human character name's not based off of real people. Lastly this takes place before Magic Mystery Cure. Note the sex tag is because there will be some dirty jokes.
Chapters (8)
Only about a quarter
I like it,I think its inspired from Metro 2033.
Moar please.
Wow.The last part was just awsome,I cant wait for more. :)
Why would thou trip over balls?xD
Moar :)
This is awesome.
Twilight :)
And for that OC :
ScareCrow (Fuck me i cant find a better name)
Unicorn
Male (or stalion)
I cant explain how it looks but i got an image of him :The pony
20 years old
A "man" ready for action expecting anything anytime and the sort of guy who likes to hit on womans (preferable innocent and smart XD),in shape,having shitty humor
Ex soldier,banned from royal army because he lost it and beat up a guy wtih the victim's penis.(If you want you can say he's some sort of mercenary re-hired by princess or something,and i support you 100% if you want to change the name)
And yeah,great story :)
Flutters
I say zecora....... haha I have broken the rules!
I think it would be funny if he stayed with either rarity and her OCD about fasion or fluttershy with her animal loving wishy washy logic.
but seriously
ps. Why is spike a bullheaded douche?
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To answer your question Spike is a douche for several reasons. First Ezra taught him fuck, which got him in trouble with Twilight. Second he is protective of her and since Ezra is a killer in his mind (because Equestria is so peaceful) he thinks that want Ezra does is unheard of and wrong no matter what. Another the reason I made Spike like this was to follow one of the themes of the story, is it right to take a life if it is to save another one.
2525556 thanks for the info and I have wondered if it was right to kill to save another for a while now that question is a real head turner
hmmm... I sense a shit storm coming.
My OC is not good enogh? :(
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Don't worry your OC is getting used it's just I need five different OCs and I currently have only three.
Well. Let's see the next chapter!
IF Fluttershy dies then who will be the new element of kindness? No she won't die she can't.
Sir, this story is going places. BRAVO
this story is getting good very good,keep it up.
i love you, pls have my bby's
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Umm... I have no idea on how to respond to that.
Yay....An update.......I tought you were dead...or something.
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Well since I guess you don't know my user page has the amount I wrote of the next chapter and if I'm away or not I tell you guys so you don't freak out if I was gone a week.
2523274 hell yeah flutters!
*Reads*
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I can understand how dyslexia makes it hard to read and right, so, you should try to get someone as a proofreader/editor. Just a suggestion.
15 years old and in the army wtf!!!?
not to be an ass but putting a block of c4 on a nuke and detonating it would not make the nuke go off only make a dirty bomb a nuke needs equal compression on all sides to detonate
there hasnt been an update in a while........did you die......
4292735 he is dead.
Just wondering, do u need any more OC's? Cus I have a few (about 6 counting the half pony)
If you do just pm me and I'll send you the list.
-Blaze
(Ps: loving the story so far keep up the good work)
Fuck shouldn't be used a whole lot.
Well every story has her a little too animal crazy. This story just teaches her when those who want you safe are telling you bad idea maybe approach with caution and try not to get too close.