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Matthais Unidostres


I am Matthais Unidostres, I'm a Christian and I love FanFiction!

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Since birth, Spike had been a deep cover operative for the dragon kingdom. His egg was infused with ancient dragon magic to allow secret transmissions between him the dragon kingdom, as well as siphonize pony magic. His egg was planted in Celestia's School for Gifted Unicorns in order gain access to the highest of powers, and he has succeeded in his mission. that is, until Luna caught wind of his plans. . .

Chapters (15)
Comments ( 22 )

I plan on writing just one more chapter: an epilogue.

i demand moar! :moustache:

Please hurry. I really wish to read the epilogue! Hopefully, it'll be a long chapter.

Also, given the reasoning on how all the Dragons want is simply a ruler that's magically powerful and completely competent, I really can't blame them.

This is awsome. Wont be my head cannon but

I wouldn't be surprised if Celestia pardons him or the dragons name him there ruler or they were using him. any would be cool

I really can't help but hope Spike comes out of this okay.

for rarity all that 'no don't hurt him' shit is out the window

Even though I'm not fond of how this story was excuted, I still freakin' love this story. This is just too original and an excellent premise!

Personally I'm thinking the reasons why Spike wasn't nervous during the trial are the following:
1) He is already more powerful that Celestia and is just biding his time until they rule him guilty before breaking out of there.

2) An army of dragons are all outside, ready to strike.

I'm really curious to see how this goes down in the end. Next chapter please. :twilightsmile:

Like the second one better, made more sense.

The second epilogue should be the official one. All the Dragon ruler wants is to have a civilized ruler who can unite the Dragons and build up a whole kingdom. The best way to do this is to keep good tidings with every other nation using non violent means.

Please make this the official one. And if you are going to do a sequel, (which you most probably will after that ending) you should use this one as the basis to continue the story arc.

I'm not gonna lie, you did a great job. I enjoyed this every step of the way, and I really hope for the sequel soon.

second one was better by far It actually fit spike

The 2nd one makes spike still spike

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Lol, thanks! Those were just some lucky guesses.

And I agree with everyone else, Epilogue #2 is better. Wouldn't make sense to put in all that work for a decent dragon ruler just to muck things up with Equestria after everything is said and done.

And will there be a sequel? I can't wait if there is. There's too much hard feelings between the Mane 6 and Spike, plus the Princesses are definitely going to be sore...

Hot damn!!! Bucking awesome!!! I want more!!!!

My avatar is spike... So that is me being Bad-ass.
Edit: now im Alex mercer, and im even more bad-ass.

3116332 Bah I am Ezio auditore de firenze and I say BRING IT!

Lol but being serious for a moment I loved the story.

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