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When a dangerous mission to the Tidal Islands fails, Twilight and Spike are stranded permanently. Perhaps it is not bad as previously thought, but there may be more to the islands than conceived. Contains TwiSpike. Art by Fortheloveofwalrus, Edited by Muffinpatrol.
(Author's note: I will not continue this until a lot of changes are made to the first two chapters i.e. grammar)
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I as the editor inform you that this is a good story, and you most likely will like it (or your money back guaranteed!). If you are scared from the fact that it has five thousand words for one chapter, I'm very sorry.
Trust me, read this.
And if you don't trust me, than look at this GIF. It holds all of my serious in it.
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~Muffinpatrol
Interesting and it's one of my favorite ships.
Faved.
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I can't thank you enough
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Thank you, glad to see you're into cool things
I don't want to be negative but...some parts feel slightly rushed. Though over all a very enjoyable story, please keep up the good work
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Could you be a tad specific? I tend to get loose with paragraphs when it comes to dialogue heavy stuff, which I suspect might be your caveat.
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The setting of where spike is doing his best to comfort a breaking twilight on their apparently first night int he new island home. I see many possible things happening in the setting of the islands. Though it is highly likely that the settings are being controlled, and thus Twilight and Spike might be under some form of magic, charm, or enchantment given the nature of the islands. Though it could also be the fact that she is going to be with spike for the rest of her life and I rather not make it sound as if she is grabbing at straws for dear life, but the idea that she so quickly accepted his declaration of love is the part that makes it feel a little rushed. Though given the earlier parts int he second chapter, namely the two unknown voices, anything is possible.
I will be brutally honest: I don't care about Rarity's insanity or what it's doing to AJ/PP/ex any more than how Spike and Twilight are going to be actually rescued... other than that, I'm only here to read about a Spike shipping, which is done fairly well...
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Interesting, will definitely examine.
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Glad you enjoyed it.
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That all being said I love your story, I love castaway type stories. I blame playing Lost In Blue too much in collage
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Those games. I love those games.
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I wish they would make more games like that...I just love the ones where you have to gather your supplies and make your tools
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Its so addicting.
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Yeah, I always want to find a fitting GIF or picture, but it doesn't always work. So have this picture instead.
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hehe good one
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I was debating between that one and this one.
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ohhh that's a tough one....though sombra looks pretty stoned don't he?.....stone... crystal...hah!
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The funny thing is I almost didn't even catch that myself
A SpiLight full of SCIENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
I like it!
TOO MUCH SCIENCE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Well still good thought!
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What did you expect? Hahaha.
Glad you enjoyed it, hope you stick around for parts 3 and 4 if I haven't science-d you out too much
My favorite pairing in a very well written story? You have my full attention
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Bless you sir, you've made my evening awesome
Rather seriously impressive though Rarity was so OOC it's not even funny, luckly she's my least favorite pony so I could care less
, though the Spilight really felt a bit rushed, might want to slow down on that or slightly re-do their speech, crazy that Pinkie Pie was lost hope she is okay. Though I have a feeling the five with get in very much trouble for what they did to Spitfire and Soarin, shit this is getting good though.
Wonder what was the creatures in the darkness speaking, huh. And what of Peewee? Everyone forgets the poor guy
Really enjoying this so far and is your profile pic of Avarice (Element of Wealth, dark half of Rarity and member of the Elements of Disharmony)?
If so very bad ass
I'll be awaiting more of this
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I think I have reasons for most of your caveats, so stay tuned
My profile is Princess Platinum I think, but it's not particularly decided, it's just Rarity and sexy faces she makes.
Hmmm, time for a Peewee arc then. I'm glad it made you think, as I hoped it might, but thank you kindly. My tearing down at EqD has certainly made an attitude turn in my writing, but now I feel a ton better
Hope you enjoy more! I'm definitely going to be reading your stuff, you seem like an interesting person.
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Hi, saw your fic is a TwiSpike one. I love that one.. Can you answer these 2 question ?
1. Why are they going to Tidal Island ?
2. Why are they wearing suits ?
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The Tidal Islands aren't something anyone can get to. There's a great many storms that blanket the island, so nobody can get in by land, sea, or air. So, the reason they go is because they have modern sciences to provide a way there, and they can discover more things. The other thing about the suits is that the winds are insane, and it's blindingly cold there, at least until the next day anyway.
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Needs update.
sounds awesome
cant wait for it to be finished
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When can we read the next chapter ?
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Working on it. I'm pretty troubled by what I set up in the story, but I think I figured out how to end it.
The shitstorm is here.
Is this story still online??? or is it already in the bin???
This story is very good. Is there any way that I could help speed up the process for another chapter?
