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Where am I? Who are all these creatures calling themselves ponies? Why are they calling me Spike? Most importantly, how do I get home?

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Well, this is a nice twist on Ponyearthverse.

Over all a great story, maybe hoping you can read mine it's called my day in ponyville, after all you seem to have a lot of likes

I blame passing out on the toilet whilst high on cocaine and waking up as a small purple lizard!

Max

You got my attention, go on. Also Rainbow dash is going to get traumatized for life :rainbowlaugh:

Oh yeah, Spike's da man! Slapping those flanks! Or rather Sean, heh :rainbowlaugh:

ENGAGE THE BENNY HILL THEME MUSIC!

Also, I'm very disappointed for not taking advantage of a perfect opportunity to reference Pulp Fiction.

You know, this is one of two Spike HiE fics in the popular stories bar. I guess they'll both go on my read later list. Note to self: Stop reading so much fanfiction, it's not good for you.

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The weird thing is that we both posted our stories on the same day.

1719530 Does this mean that you actually like a ponyearthverse story? :twilightoops:

I'll tell you what i've seen in this story that's just perfect and you deserve my like because of it.

1- Your main character is a smart person whom takes upon himself to deduce his situation and don't panic initially, but realistically shouts because of his ridiculous situation in a lapse of a minutes, making him not seem overly implausible human being.

2- Have this person try to reason with "creatures" he has never seen before in a civil matter, using a obviously advance lexic, in a body of what we and the "creatures" consider a child.

3- Intelligently plaing each situation in a deep description that seems to try and put the situation in a serious matter but eventually finishing with said situation in a comical conclution, at least up to this chapter withought disappointment.

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It's called They call me...Spike? It's a good story so far.

I love this story. Will you be updating more frequently?

Okay not bad lol, even if you making fun of the world :P still funny.

love this story :heart: keep up the good work, hope to see more soon!:rainbowkiss:

This updated but I couldn't read because of college prime time.

I'M SO SORRY!!!:raritydespair:

That poor man... I would rather face the force of an entire army of Orks than have to deal with the CMC without foreknowledge of their shenanigans.

2039810 Really? I'd rather go face to face with the entire Reaper fleet using only an early 90s Macbook. Hah! I got in two references! Double-Reference-Hoof!

Actually, that was a reference too, so make it a Triple-Reference-Hoof! /)

Here are all of my approvals, take them!
I do wish for longer chapters though. Then of course, no pressure, write at your own pace :scootangel:

"Where the junk did you get a whip?!"

"My room of course."

I was not reassured in the slightest by that answer. Why would a child who wore bows in her hair have a whip in her room?

Apple Bloom is a very...adventurous little filly...

...OK, Applebloom, I am now disturbed.

“Who's Rainbow Dash?”

Hmm, I guess it might be the one with a pile of offensively bright rainbow-colored hair/mane on her head. But I could be wrong.

Just kidding. I still enjoy this story a lot on my re-read.

Burn it! Burn the heretic (weapon)!

I really liked your Doctor Who reference in this chapter, and your Princess Bride reference in the last chapter.

Looks like a typical smart-ass!human in Equestria fic, but seems entertaining so far, and him being in Spike's body is fairly original. Added to Twilight's Library.

I can totally imagine Rainbow Dash's thought processes here:
"Spike doesn't know who I am?... How can anypony...forget the awesomeness that is Rainbow Dash?!?!...ERROR, ERROR, DOES NOT COMPUTE, SHUTTING DOWN HIGHER BRAIN FUNCTIONS TO PROTECT SANITY & EGO."

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I'm interested in reading that story, but it seems to have gone password-protected now. Any idea why, or where I might find a copy to read, or who the author is so I could contact them about it?

Lol fun world run. New spike time to train. Lesson one don't tell Twilight stupid!

This story died, and right when it was getting interesting.

*Sigh*

Well, so much for that. :ajsleepy:

Well this is the kind of story I was looking for and what makes this a little better is that he's not a brony so he really has no idea on what's going on. Also I really like the fact that he tried to remain as logical as he can. The only thing that can make this worse is if they lost their memories or swapped with someone else in that time.

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Oh Good another guy in Spike's body story that I've been looking for.... well hopefully I didn't fave that one already. ^^;

Geez, it's like Twilight CANNOT get her head around that the guy in Spike's body is not Spike.

I really like this guy, he seems to be taken this in stride. If I was him I would be looking for a way out of here, but then again, who could pass up a chance to explore a really interesting world.

Since it stopped right there this story is in the same boat as me, darn it, oh well it was definitely a fun story to read for a little bit even if it is a bit short lived.

OH FOR THE LOVE OF- I thought mine was original! Well, that idea is dead and buried! Sweet CELESTIA there are a lot of these "human finds themselves in (insert character here)'s body" stories out there.

Haven't seen anything like this before. Which is a good thing. Shame it's not finished.

haha , I love this guy jsut so witty in hsi remarks. hope it ne day get epnded.

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