I'm just your average extremely muscular fan of Friendship is Magic. I watch the show and read the fanfiction whenever I'm not lifting weights.
Mark Mentz was walking home late one night, when he got his throat cut by a hood. He died, but was given another chance. Unfortunately, due to the seriousness of his injury, he wasn't healed fully. Being unable to form any coherent speech, he is not regarded as an equal. How will the Mane Six deal with what they consider to be nothing more than an animal? And how will Mark deal with being marginalized?
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WOOHOO! Stuff about being excited goes here.
2258241
So how do you feel this chapter compares to the previous way it was written, if you remember?
And thanks for the comment
2258253 It looks pretty much the same to me. I never really saw a problem with the first edition of this story.
Wait, this isn't cancelled? That's good.
YOU BROUGHT IT BACK, I WILL HAVE YOUR BABIES.
2260642
That's right, this story was un-cancelled! Thanks for commenting, and I would appreciate your thoughts on the first chapter.
2261317
Thanks, but that's unnecessary. I would really appreciate it if you had any suggestions for the future of this story.
2262075 T'was a joke.
2262075
It's good; it seems to be somewhat more believable that the first version. If you can keep to the standards set by this chapter, this could turn into a story that is superior to the original. However, that being said, I did very much enjoy the original version of this story; I just found certain elements unbelievable (like Mark breaking his hand slapping Fluttershy's hoof away).
2266645
Thanks. Glad to have you back too. Now, not to give anything away, he can write, but the ponies and him do not share the same writing system. Not that he won't try anyways.
Is the storyline gonna be the same as the old one or is that being reworked? Either way I'm glad to see this again.
2371364
It will have the same basic premise, but no, it will not follow the same storyline as the initial version (although I feel that the word "storyline" is too generous for that pile of randomness).
almost as big as big mac... is he a miget?
2373987
well, in my headcanon, the average pony's shoulder would come up to an average person's waist, and so Big Mac's shoulder would be at the average person's chest level. So he would be slightly shorter than the average person, but much larger, because by comparison a human is a stick.
I hope that explains my reasoning.
2377818 She knows he's sentient alright. As for being sapient, well, that's a different story
2377818
I update whenever I feel like it. Which is less and less the less reviews I get. I wonder if I'm wasting my time, and I feel sad. (Oops, realized the sadness was because I forgot my Prozac this morning, not due to lack of reviews)
2382824 So... Shit happens whenever you feel like it? Cause that's what it seems like... Anyways, here's my review... THIS IS A SACK-O-CRAP AND YOU SHOULD GO KILL YOURSELF FOR BEING A SACK-O-CRAP!
(P.S. Not really, I just like to fuck with people. It worked didn't it?)
2395776
you are why i haven't updated
2484212 I regret nothing.
2484228
hurtful.
2504808 You can't make me apologize.
2504809
Ooh, you're such a badass, and definitely not a complete piece of shit. Look, why don't you go take your thumbs and jam them so far up your ass you can taste your nail polish. Ah who am I kidding, you were probably already going to do that, fag. Seriously, you're such a piece of shit that cats bury you in their litter box. Whenever you leave a room, people high five. You have the amazing power to act like an autistic sack of crap, but probably not be autistic. See, normally I'd think you're funny, but you made the mistake of going full retard, and you should never go full retard. You are so damn stupid that you make Patch Adams look like a masterpiece.You are such a waste of space that your life would be more fulfilling if you played World of Warcraft. But, on a more positive note, I'm genuinely impressed that a yeast infection can learn how to post comments.
Fuck you.
2504847 Well then, aren't you just a bundle of sunshine.
2504856
Yeah, I'm not the asshole randomly shitting on other people. So what, do you just go around randomly trolling on stories? Cause, and I'm leveling here, that's sort of funny on one hand, but sort of sad on the other. It makes me sad to think of someone who literally has so little going on for them that they would rather have the hate of a bunch of strangers, because at least then someone is paying attention to you. Seriously, start a new profile. I’m sure you can find some friends. Then you can get positive attention, which, trust me, is so much better than negative. You can do it.
2504882 Hey, man calm the hell down. I was joking. I genuinely like your story, but with the way this is going... I don't know man. Take a few deep breaths.
(Also, if you're going to call someone gay as an insult, you need better material)
P.S. I do have friends. About four of them. Happy?
I like this story. This sort of thing has always interested me. I would love it if you updated soon :)
5529752
While I had hoped to ignore this story forever, if you really want me to I can do my best to continue.
5532527 that would be great. If you need any help with it, I'll be glad to help
5532527 if you decide you don't want to finish it though maybe you could transfer it over to me. I really like it, and would be glad to work on it