I a human modern nomad, with a backpack full of gear and sporting a styling suit, wake up to find myself with a headache in a world full of ponies. With no way back I am forced to live here for a bit. I've seen a lot of strange things but this takes the cake!
***In the nomad's world MLP does not exist.
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This is the my first story, any and all feed back that can be used will be appreciated.
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I'm feeling awesome.
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I randomly came across this, and I'm a fan of human in Equestria stories, and I'm intrigued as to how this will come out. I found a couple of spelling errors (...string a large pot in the middle of the room.) But it is good otherwise. Keep up the good work!
This is pretty good for a first story
801533 Ursäkta mig?
803372 Jag är från överallt.
who could it be hmmmmm??
aww now i got to wait for the rest
Might be a little loner before I can release another one. sorry
I have a bit of a family problem. the problem being that I have a family
everything should be back to normal by latest Tuesday but I intend to release a new chapter before then.
819128 You sir, are very much correct.
BOOM, pinkie pied....... all up in the face!!!
854672 Yes, but he said wasn't going to attack anything.
man, he just cant catch a break can he?
854785 I can assure you that if he feels his life is in danger he will fight back.
But he doesn't want to get the whole town to turn against him, and he is not in the best condition for a fight, due to his recent river ride.
Jag kan försäkra er att om han känner hans liv är i fara att han kommer att slå tillbaka.
Men han vill inte få hela staden att vända sig mot honom, och han är inte i bästa skick för en kamp på grund av hans senaste floden rida.
854790 My life in a nutshell.
Although he goes though a lot more physical punishment.
today has been kinda slow on the writing. I ran out of prewritten chapters and I have the digimon theme stuck in my head.
I need coffee! 
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For convincing some, and for my own personal kicks I have translated the incorrect words of Applejack to English and Swedish.
AJ English Svenska
ahm I'm jag är
fer for för
durin during under
er are är
ya you ni
bout about ca
cha you ni
Can't work today, too much Pewdiepie to watch.
This is a short chapter and it's not really funny but it's important to the story line. The next chapter will have jokes and happy all that good stuff. I promise.
Oh god, Rarity is going to have a heart attack when she sees him.
801533WHAT THE FUCK ARE YOU PEOPLE SAYING!?!
-sigh- I like the story but there are way too many spelling and grammar mistakes it sometimes makes it confusing.
0.0 ur a bro? Gimme a brofist. Pewdiepie demands it!
ok... i believe you.
876004 Jag gör också!
876037 tell me the mistakes so I can fix them. Bro-fist and Bro-hoof!
Faster! Write faster.
So... many... grammar errors. One that stuck out in my mind was "I raped my arm around her..."
I'm having massive problems with 502 errors on this site, if anyone could tell me a way around them please PM me. It would be a great help to Lost in Equestria and it would be a good way to get on my good side.
P.S. I already tried deleting system32. Doing so only help slightly.
920471 I upgraded that mistake to "I rapped my arm around her..." that way it's still wrong but it isn't as wrong.
As a sign of good faith here is a image that I pulled off the internet that i find funny
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929387lol, hey i don;t suppose you could take a look at my story could you? I just finished writing chapter one and I'm kind of nervous/excited at the same time for finally managing to start.
I'm have less and less free time to write the chapters, So sorry that they are only bite sized.
I wish I could make more but there is to much to do.
damn, just dont stop writing now........ i might lose my mind.
I eagerly await the next chapter.
Hrmm... I wonder how many hippos CAN fit into the White House...
956661 Why?
957072 I'm still working on finding out.
959444 why i would go crazy is cause i want to know what happens next..... like all your readers. why you shouldn't quit writing is ..... well lets face it, time gets took up , then before you know it its been 3 months and you just remember you had some thin to do..... well at least that's what happens to me.
959672 Great pep talk. I need stuff like that stuff, especially now that the only friends that I have are the pictures on this deck of cards that my college room mate ordered from playgirl magazine as a gag gift.
I felt we needed more .gif and David Tennant around these pats.
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I love how Carrot Top thinks he's evil.
the next time i would have seen rarity i would have worn my most clashing clothes.
Well atleast you don't have to live with Rarity.
Yes he did just open the door to hell.
996698 I like the way you think
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996535 to match your profile pic here is something similar.
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that is all.
I'm always amused that people will thumbs down a story but never say why.
I understand that my story isn't the best but I need to know why it's not, So that I might not make the same mistakes twice. Is it really so hard to tell me why you didn't like it? So I ask you if you are going to thumbs down the story go ahead, i'm not going to stop you, but please leave a comment of why you did that.