Two mercenaries with a tragic past find themselves shipwrecked in Equestria. One is a taciturn and unfeeling swordsman. The other is a happy go lucky thief. They find themselves in a land under siege by slavers, and must balance combat, with overcoming the ghosts of their pasts.
Nice story bro
Let's see where this goes, shall we?
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Indeed, let's see where this goes.
thumbs up. nice one.
YEAH!
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NUUU! ESCAPE! There's not that many fanfics where the person escapes after being captured, and instead are like sent to Ponyville or something. I would REALLY suggest that before you do something like that you at least make them escape, and go into the Everfree or something.
Uh, you should probably know that the italics didn't stop properly. They start, and then they're there for the rest of the chapter. All you need to do is type in the letter 'i' after the /.
She's a bitch.
he was turned into a pony!
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What?
1220861 he was turned into a pony
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I'm pretty sure he wasn't.
1226919 well your writing the book