Apple Fritter finds a mysterious piece of paper, instructing her to go on a scavenger hunt. She does so. Other stuff happens, but you'll have to read the story to find out what those things are.
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Derpy, Pinkie Pie, Sweetie Belle, Chrysalis. Myself, summed up in four MLP characters. I'm a deeply flawed individual, but if you can get past that, I'm sure we can be the best of friends.
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FIRST~!
Also: Dawwww, that's a cute piece of work. :3 I didn't spot any typos, but then, I wasn't actively hunting 'em. Great Story, IMHO. Take an upthumb and a fave from me. :P
I get a feelng inside me when I see or read something cute (And when I ultra Daww), and it make me feel all warm and tingly in my chest, I LOVE that feeling
, So thankyou for letting me feel that feeling again 
Well done on this great story.
Wait what? This story was already posted...And I favorited it...Why is it showing up in my alerts again as just being posted?
This story was altogether quite stellar. Now normally, I don't have to squint to see errors in the writing of the fine fellows that populate this site. I noticed a handful of small technical errors in your writing, but nothing that detracts from the story. I may suggest using more synonyms to prevent the conversations and actions from sounding repetitive, though, but you have already done so more than most writers I have seen. The fact that I have to struggle to find anything to critique you on is a compliment in itself, I think. My proverbial hat is off to you. Keep up the good work.
Apple Fritter! Dawwwwww.
This is a great piece of work. Very good on you!
Reading this just because of Dat Pic.
Well, the idea here was to post them altogether as one item, but it's your story of course. But if you want it to be part of The Album project, please PM me the GDocs link so I can edit it and add it with the others.
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I'll PM it to you. I just wanted it to be visible to people who might not have the chance to read The Album.
Yay Apple Fritter! The Apple family never gets enough limelight from the fans, three clues seems like a pretty short scavenger hunt it would have been nice if it had been drawn out more, still this is a great story.
Bon Bon said after she’d made sure the box was strapped securely to Apple Bloom’s back.
I think you mean Apple Fritter unless she;s a changeling
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nope.avi that's just a "whoops... my bad..." I'll fix it post haste.
1942883 Lol, no worries!
Umm... I don't think she should know about Earth.
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eeurgh thanks for catching that! good thing nopony ever looks at this story anymore... lol I'll fix that right away.
Cute but strange that you had this character be Apple Blooms older sister and AJ younger sister