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Derpy, Pinkie Pie, Sweetie Belle, Chrysalis. Myself, summed up in four MLP characters. I'm a deeply flawed individual, but if you can get past that, I'm sure we can be the best of friends.

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What happens when a pony wakes up and finds that no one can hear or see her? Is it what she thinks it is... or are things the way that no one can see?

Rejected by Equestria Daily on 3 January 2013.

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... I could see what was coming as soon as Rarity had her part. But how you ended it... You can have all my :fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry::fluttercry: Well done.

Sometimes, only Pinkie has the answer.

This is indeed sad. It's not depressing -- yet. :pinkiesad2:

I believe there is a way to add a source link below a cover image.

The ending was rather sudden and confusing, but it was also pretty cool once I figured it out. :twilightsmile:

This was really great, tracking! But I just want to say that you say the title just a little too much.

The rest of this was golden, I can't wait to see what happens next.

I liked the ending, and the build up, very well done, have a mustache :moustache:

Well, frankly, I really enjoyed the build-up of the story of Fluttershy finally figuring out what was wrong and it seemed ironic, Pinkie Pie's last line. I really like the bait and switch you had at the ending. You had Fluttershy's flighty personality down pat and was a nice to follow her train of thought. Though I am curious about a one thing. Did the mention of Gilda have a particular purpose?

I really loved this work, and I so far don't see anything that I could even begin to dislike, I feel as though it clearly shows a good tone, as well as the mood that it portrays to the audience, and now I think I see why the nurse had said a re-imagining of memories when I put together Flutters seeing Gilda, it seems that this story has so many ways it cn play out, I'm sure that you've already thought of how it plays out, but it sames as though to me that those can be two completely different realities and she could have slipped inn between, but it's just a speculation or possibility, I can't wait to see what you have in-store for us. OH and reader if you guys have any other speculations then plz come-fourth, I would love to hear them.

All in all, it's a wonderful story to me, and I would Watch you as well, but that button don't seem to be doing good for me, hmmm, let me try my other Browser and see if it works, Oh and I give you 20/10 stars in my opinion for this is the type of story that I've been waiting on for a while.


-Flutterstrucked:heart:

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wow... such kind words. thank you so much. you really just made my night.

No prob, I get that from alot of people, and I'll reply to anything sent to me in a positive gesture, have a nice day!:pinkiehappy:

Wow! I love what you did with the ending! Cant wait to see what happens next!

I really shouldn't have listened to music with this, jesus christ, this is all too much...:fluttercry:

Excellently written, Kudos to you good sir

Some parts have confused me... first pinkie tells how fluttershy died, then this other part comes near the end of the chapter telling another story that ends with her in a coma. So, is all of this a coma dream? or what is it?
clarification please?

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the first part of the story is a coma dream, yes. it's kind of explained when Nurse Redheart makes the comment on how she could be dreaming about events that are twisted from how they actually happened in real life. Comaception, you can call it.

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THANK YOU FOR THE CLARIFICATION!!!!!
ALSO: GIANT RED TEXT IS AWSOME!!!

I've been reading over the comments as of late, and I've realized that some of you think that there'll be more to this story. As of right now, I have no plans to continue this. It was only going to be a one-shot to begin with. Maybe I'll get up the desire to do more, but for now it's Complete.

Wow...
So wait...
If the Mane 6 are all dead but Flutters and RD, why are they at her FUNERAL, but she's not dead, and they are? :rainbowhuh::fluttershysad:
Beside some minor confusion, I :heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: this fic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Very sad, I actually almost cried. :fluttercry:
Also, RD was thinking 'Her lover', right? Not sure if I actually read that right...:unsuresweetie:

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maybe I can clear some of that confusion up for you. the reality is that Rainbow Dash and Fluttershy are the only surviving Mane 6 members. the others died in the explosion. the first part of the story (up until the italics) is a coma-dream that Fluttershy is having. that's kind of explained in fourth-wall-breaking style when Nurse Redheart explains that she might be having dreams that are twisted versions of real-life events (which is, of course, exactly what's happening).

and yes, in the end, this was a Flutterdash fic.

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Ah. Good, I'm slightly less insane then they say I am. :pinkiecrazy:
Well, very sad.
Hats off to you...Sir?...Ma'am?
Meh. Online, it doesn't matter! :trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia::trollestia:

1661645
I'll give you a hint: I have a penis.

1895813
well you were indecisive about whether I was a male or female. I let you know.

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What you did there; I see it. :rainbowlaugh::rainbowwild:

I found this story to be sweet and sad at the same time, a mixture of emotions that left me fulfilled.

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well I'm glad it was to your satisfaction :pinkiesmile:

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