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Gonna work on that Kingdom Hearts fic at some point

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Rarity thought that just finding a strange colt bleeding on her floor was out out of the ordinary. Despite that, she offers to take care of the colt as he get back on his hooves, taking sympathy on him.

Little does she know that this act of kindness will lead her down a path of adventure and danger. The colt's arrival is just the beginning, as Rarity and her friends soon find themselves swept up in a century-old war. Finding out the colt having strange powers were just the tip of the iceberg after all.

So...rewriting my Wakfu Story. Didn't quite like how it was turning out before after all.

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Comments ( 43 )

Hmmm. Entertaining. I am keeping a eye on this

Interesting. Eager to see where this goes. I am sure the rewrite will be worth it

Ooh something to read while we wait for the final season

Been a while since I've seen Wakfu content 👀

HOOOLY-

this is the first wakfu story I have found!

Gona give this a try

Wakfu ando MLP...





ALL OF MY YES!!!!

Interesting. Though wings on the head, must be akward

Ah, another one of those stories that i wish i discovered later to avoid the wait for new chapters. This looks really interesting so far. Keep up the good work.

Woohoo, Wakfu! I love Wakfu! An instantaneous favorite from me.

I wonder how Yugo is gonna react to being in magical ponyland?

more of that !

Interesting name for a nurse and he speaks french, eh?

Can't wait for Hugo's friends to show up

Did Discord brake free again? The mare thought to herself. No...this is too much, even for him

How could I not darling?" Rarity replied, sighing softly as she placed her cup of coffee down on the table. "He was just a foal, Twilight. And I saw him...bleeding in my hooves. He looked so small...and tiny. And..." She sighed again, looking towards her friend. "I'm doing my best but it feels like I can brake down any second just thinking about it."

They should be break.

Well this is good already but we all know any and to do Wakfu, must have a good villain. But keep on doing a good job

Yugo should be an Alicorn he's canonically immortal and has incredible magic also he's a king/prince and by the time of season 4 at least has two different sets of wings

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wakfu the game (yes it was a game first) was developed in french and the game's primary language is french

hmm, a male villain with a good heart but willing to kill, Yugo's clone? Gally's eldest son? or Yugo's dragon bother?

Nox or Qilby who will it be ! I hope for Nox!

Nicely done and loved the interaction with the cmc. I wonder how it would go with other foals.

Also, little error i noticed

Don't worry. I'm not judging you. The priciness did mention that she scared you when it happened so there were faults all around." Rarity placed a hoof on Yugo's shoulder, giving him a comforting smile. "But unicorn or not, your powers are not to be used recklessly. You will need to learn to control yourself. I can only imagine what such power was used for before, but here, in Equestira...in Ponyville, and in my home, such things are rarely needed."

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I would love to see it but realistically no one would be able to stop him. Other than his totally broken ability to control time. He would kill the main six in the heartbeat. No setting up friendship laser. Out of everybody who can fight knocks is one of the best.

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Being honest, I thought the main character was Hugo's clone because he came here so injured. With the loss of his memories he would think he is the original. And it seems like a perfect setup.

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Yeah. Yugo pretty much lost the battle against him despite the kid winning in the end

Yugo learns about his powers while cooking ? haha

Looks fun so far. I like your portrayal of Celestia here. She's very much kind and generally competent, but in no way perfect.

Poor Twilight Velvet!

Hopefully there isn't a fragment among the orphanage!

I'm looking forward to his first cooking experience! or Spike Magi lessons! haha:pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy::pinkiehappy:

Turning back to face the fillies, he nodded. "Guess so. If you help then I'll accept it."

The answer is beating the brakes off of people

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There's a long list of people he has beaten the brakes off. We have to remember the show was about him fighting pretty much to become the strongest god. So I would assume his cutie mark would have to be something with throwing hooves

Well so far, this story has been delightful to read! You've really got me hooked!

nicely done. though, if its okay, something i noticed

I'm getting ahead of myself though. First I'll need to seed a letter to Canterlot. I have a few books here I'll need for Yugo but the best ones are in the Princess's personal library. I'll also need extra papers and school supples. Just because he isn't in school now doesn't mean he shouldn't get an early start on how to prepare for it. I'll will also need training dummies and protection wards and...

Seed?

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youre welcome, just trying to help

Hmmm, not that I mind, but what's with the Daring Do portions? Something for later down the road?

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