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An Sturmmann


Typical grand strategy fan, looking to write some fantasies of mine and pray they are good stories.

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In this tale, we shall see how our beloved Equestria, and the world it once lived in, is changed forever by the sudden aparition of gigantic landmasses where there once was water and the bad augury of sun and moon refusing to obey their princesses...

The once close kingdoms and countries, are now distant partners... or foes, as the history is forced to change forever when two worlds collide, and many different nations must face each other, will friendship prevail?, or maybe, only maybe, war may be the only way to stop the gathering storm?

Besides, the event did brought a certain creature from another land, a "man" as he calls himself, will this strange alien stallion be able to help Equestria?, or will this country run by mares refuse to listen to this strange, yet curious stallion?


So... in this story, I will try to mix the canon Equestria from FiM, with a whole new world, inhabitated by ponies and many other species we know and love, and many new ones, as if the classic transported fiction, but, instead of humans or human nations being sent to Equestria, Equestria is sent to a brand new world, ruled by other kind of ponies... and with them, comes a lonely guy that knows a bit too much in certain areas. I hope you like it!

English isn't my first languague, so, sorry in advance (This story is RGRE).

Chapters (21)
Comments ( 73 )

11676760

Really?, Thanks a lot!

I hope i can tell a proper tale for this website!

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

11677017

Thanks a lot!

As for the next chapter, I hope to make it somewhat longer!

good concept, remind me of my own story about Equestria teleported to earth

11678502

That does sounds interesting, I have been wanting to read your story for a while but time is quite the bitch with me this season, nevertheless, thanks, and I hope the next chapters can be of your liking.

11678544
Thank you, I hope your story will be successful too. ^^

Besides, the event did brought a certain creature from another land, a "man" as he calls himself, will this strange alien stallion be able to help Equestria?, or will this country run by mares refuse to listen to this strange, yet curious stallion?

Then, they're just going to DOOM themselves if they don't listen then. :unsuresweetie:

11684089

Well, who knows?, maybe yes, maybe no? :ajsmug:

One thing is for sure, Equestria will not be the same either way.

Your story is good, You remind me of myself when I wrote my first page.

Great chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

11690996

Thanks man, hope the next one is of your liking too.

cool chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Both, perhaps.
They go hand in hand.
They influence eachother.

Both both is good

Personally, I would like the story to be political, although the social/military is not bad either.

Political to start then both? It depends on what you did to the planet such as did you have equis show up on earth or something else?

11704007
Thanks for answering, I mean it

11704024
Yes, Indeed, you have a point I kinda forgot, this week really disconnected me from my own plot.

11704051
Thanks for answering, yeah, it sounds good.

11704096
Well, I'll consider that, thanks for answering

11704191
Oh, no, This isn't earth, the next chapters give answers to that question, but Spoiler alert: This isn't an displaced Equestria story, rather Equestria and it's world suffered some changes to accommodate some "new guests"

Quick question for those who read this story, would you prefer a more Political oriented story?, or a more social/militar one?

So which one did you decide on?

awesome chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

11716432

Well, I'm going for a mix of both, with emphasis on the most interesting one for the current plotline.

For instance, if I have a plotline about an elitist imperialistic empire trying to seize some of Equestria territory, it would be more militar, but, if it is about a decadent but powerful republic trying to get one of Equestria's allies into its sphere of influence, then the political one would be more used.

nice chapter mate keep it up can't wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

great chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

I don't understand, was Equestria sent to Earth?, or Earth was sent to Equestria ?

11746294

Neither, it's a brand new world, Equestria was sent to another world, with its own pony cultures, nations and many other species with their own cultures and nations.

In summary, Equestria was "Isekai'ed" to another pony world.

11746384
Oh wow, It reminds me of the concept of the story (I'm abandoned) where Equestria was teleported to Earth in 1917, but instead of Earth being inhabited by humans, it was inhabited by the pony version of us. (No, this isn't Equestria Girls, the ponies here are quadrupels)

11746697
Hey that's a pretty similar concept, the main difference is that I aim for an equivalent of 1820

11746719
Wow, That sounds really good, it means Equestria can catch up with the world in starting industrialization and vise versa, I'm also really glad the Alicorns aren't mary sues here.

11746729
Yup, making the classic "Modern or Sci-fi Humans meet fantasy medieval ponies" is something that while good, has been overdone... on the other hand, making "Medieval ponies meet Victorian/Napoleonic Era ponies" seemed way more interesting, besides, I love the alicorns, and I think that they would make fine leaders and generals, but, i'm damn sure a bullet can kill them.

11746731
Yeah, I hope your story will get the traction and attention it deserves, a concept like this is truly rare, and perhaps the only one of its kind.

Good luck man

11746775
Thank you, ps: I hope ponies on this earth isn't anthro, because that would ruin the story.

11746805

I fail to see the need for anthros, fanservice? well it is already RGRE while i'm just using that because it is a fun idea to me, some people just like RGRE too much, on the other side, ponies got magic and other things so no need for hands, and there is one human character planned so there is even less reasons for it to be anthro.

Hugetiddiesperhapsbutnothisissfw

cool chapter mate keep it up cant wait for the next chapter:pinkiehappy::twilightsmile:

Oh, I wonder who will attack, the pony version of Spanish or British? or maybe the Russians?

11754619
Hmm, Well, the big guys of the Napoleonic/victorian eras aren't the only ones with an interest in Equestria, lets just say, that Equestria had the luck to appear not too far from a place called "Fillyi" but don't be fooled, the empire nearby isn't what you would expect.

I found a few typos:

A dragon lassess!,

Remove the ,

"ENOUGHT!"

Change the ENOUGHT to ENOUGH.

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