Cheese Sandwich has a relationship question. Prince Rutherford, of all creatures, has an answer.
Written for the A Thousand Words Contest II in the comedy category. Find the other entries here!
Edited by the amazing Arkadios! Inspired by the Horslips song Mad Pat.
5 stories in a month? I wish I was as fast as you. if I try hard maybe I can get to at least five chapters, I don't know, I never counted how much I wrote especially when I do different fanfics.
And I also heard "You no make Pink pony happy Yak SMASH"
Wow
He's also moderately sized
Spike...
Engaged and having a foal... Am I missing something?
Marria g e...
I do Spike Yes yes yes yes
I got em two too.
Discord stop making the candy dance!
Yes dancing candy mmmmmmmm
Hee, so adorable!
So what you're saying is Cheese loves the rocky road?
"Let Prince Rutherford try a different way. Is Yellow Pony's relationship with Pink Pony not perfect? Because if not, then Yellow Pony smash Pink Pony! Metaphorically."
"I do," Cheese said. "Every night. Not metaphorically, though."
Well this was a pretty interesting and pretty nice conversation between cheese sandwich and Prince Rutherford which he has some pretty good points about relationship with never expected that from him but cheese sandwich would do anything for Pinkie Pie and what a way to drop the bomb for Pinkie Pie to tell this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work
Super cute! You really capture their voices well. n_n
hehe yeah, Pinkie sure has done a lot in her life hasn’t she
hahaha
ah, stock phrases are so easily lost in the language barrier
pfft
aww, that is good advice!
well, that is certainly a way to find that out from your fiancée!
delightful character writing, and a fun story. thank you for writing!
Excellent use of Pinkie-adjacent characters getting a chance to talk to one another (and yeah, too much information, Cheese, even if it’s technically foreshadowing.) It’s not laugh-out-loud hilarious, but it is a pleasant, lighthearted meditation on the nature of healthy relationships. I imagine Rutherford’s had several discussions with Cadence on the topic.
In all, a lovely meditation on the conflicting drives at the core of Cheese’s character by the end of the series. Thank you for it.