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Cheese Sandwich has a relationship question. Prince Rutherford, of all creatures, has an answer.

Written for the A Thousand Words Contest II in the comedy category. Find the other entries here!

Edited by the amazing Arkadios! Inspired by the Horslips song Mad Pat.

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5 stories in a month? I wish I was as fast as you. if I try hard maybe I can get to at least five chapters, I don't know, I never counted how much I wrote especially when I do different fanfics.

:moustache: And I also heard "You no make Pink pony happy Yak SMASH"
:twilightoops: Wow
:moustache: He's also moderately sized
:facehoof: Spike...
:duck: Engaged and having a foal... Am I missing something?
:moustache: Marria g e...
:raritycry: I do Spike Yes yes yes yes
:pinkiehappy: I got em two too.
:flutterrage: Discord stop making the candy dance!
:pinkiesmile: Yes dancing candy mmmmmmmm

Hee, so adorable!

So what you're saying is Cheese loves the rocky road?

"Let Prince Rutherford try a different way. Is Yellow Pony's relationship with Pink Pony not perfect? Because if not, then Yellow Pony smash Pink Pony! Metaphorically."

"I do," Cheese said. "Every night. Not metaphorically, though."

Well this was a pretty interesting and pretty nice conversation between cheese sandwich and Prince Rutherford which he has some pretty good points about relationship with never expected that from him but cheese sandwich would do anything for Pinkie Pie and what a way to drop the bomb for Pinkie Pie to tell this was a pretty nice story keep up the good work

Super cute! You really capture their voices well. n_n

"Wow!" Cheese said, mentally adding another tally to the 'amazing things Pinkie Pie has done but never told me' list.

hehe yeah, Pinkie sure has done a lot in her life hasn’t she

"Why thank you, big guy!"

"Prince Ruthorford is moderately-sized."

hahaha

"Prince Rutherford not want to feel Yellow Pony." Rutherford tapped his hairy chin with a cloven hoof. "But Prince Rutherford kind of understand."

ah, stock phrases are so easily lost in the language barrier

"Let Prince Rutherford try a different way. Is Yellow Pony's relationship with Pink Pony not perfect? Because if not, then Yellow Pony smash Pink Pony! Metaphorically."

"I do," Cheese said. "Every night. Not metaphorically, though."

"Yellow Pony give too much information."

pfft

"Then Pink Pony will do anything to make Yellow Pony happy. If Yellow Pony need to travel sometimes to be happy, then Pink Pony should go with Yellow Pony!"

"...Huh," Cheese said. "That seems so simple, so obvious, so... right!"

aww, that is good advice!

"Oh boy," he said. "Looks like that trip's going to have to wait!"

well, that is certainly a way to find that out from your fiancée!


delightful character writing, and a fun story. thank you for writing!

Excellent use of Pinkie-adjacent characters getting a chance to talk to one another (and yeah, too much information, Cheese, even if it’s technically foreshadowing.) It’s not laugh-out-loud hilarious, but it is a pleasant, lighthearted meditation on the nature of healthy relationships. I imagine Rutherford’s had several discussions with Cadence on the topic.

In all, a lovely meditation on the conflicting drives at the core of Cheese’s character by the end of the series. Thank you for it.

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