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Cheese Sandwich knows there’s no mare more fun-fun-fun than Pinkie Pie, and there’s nothing he’d like more than a Hearts and Hooves Day party at which they’re the only guests. But she’s the super-duper-iest party pony of them all, and everypony in Ponyville is her best friend, and they all seem determined to invite themselves along. What’s a colt to do?
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Hmm... I'm a bit weary about reading this story. As the name is awfully close to the name of Part of One. Which I think started the whole 'Cupcakes' thing. *Shutters thinking about it* I haven't read it but from what I heard I don't wanna.
4030540 Actually, Cupcakes came far before Party of One. Plus it's rated E, so it's obviously not a gorefic.
But I'm off-topic. I liked this story, myself. I recommend it enthusiastically.
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Huh??? Ooooooh. Your talking about this story not 'Cupcakes'. Yeah... I don't always pay much attention to stuff.
4030694 This honestly has nothing to do with that other fic. It's completely different. I've never written grimdark or gluefic in my life! Anyhoo, I do keep to proper warnings and labeling, so if it's rated E, I guarantee it's an E.
4030675 Thank you! I'm very glad you liked it.
Truth.
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Really we need more cheesepie pronto!
This was super sweet!
There needs to be more CheesePie.
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Thanks, guys! Well, that's the current plan. I know Equestria Girls isn't everyone's dish, but I thought that I'd try it, just to see if I can. I'm sketching out the details right now and making sure I have a good sense of where I'm going, but teenaged Pinkie and Cheese trying to negotiate a parallel universe strikes me as an interesting fit for a lot of reasons.
4032849 Speaking of EqG, I think I read your post about EqG and shipping in your livejournal I found through your tumblr (and how I found your page here), that got me thinking, if the humanize fanarts gave Hasbro the idea for EqG, then I'm a little bit scared if they do want to put shipping in there as well (heck I'm still hoping for the key givers to appear in the finale)
4032911 I'm almost positive there will be shipping in EG2. As for the main show--it crossed that line with Simple Ways. It may have been mild, and no business may have resulted, but the crushes, etc., seemed like it to me.
Now, I don't know to what extent it'll be involved in the show. It hasn't escaped my notice that three major candidates, Flash Sentry, Soarin', and Cheese, aren't there all the time. It's like Babs in Manehattan. It's enough to know they exist and can be brought in when necessary. As for Equestria Girls--I don't think they can dodge that bullet forever. It might be as mild as the guy they're shown dancing with at the end of the movie. But the magic eight ball says yes, that's what going to happen.
Awww that was so cute! I loved it, especially the ending.
It's a pity that it wasn't more about some romantic stuff between those two but still I enjoyed it so much! You're a very good writer, you know? I hope to read more of your work soon! 
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You are on tumblr arent ya? i think thats how i found your swear on Camembert fanfic.i think the name was professor something right?
4037140 Yeppers! Professor Daring Do. I know, I know, but I love Daring, and I figure she's the most likely character actually to be a professor.
But hey, I'm working on something. I didn't even know I was going to do this one. I'm sort of developing ideas about how they work as I go along, like the nearly constant radio-like signal that Cheese sends out without really knowing about it. This is why she doesn't have constant abandonment meltdowns about him. That kind of thing. Anyway, I am very glad you liked it and followed from over on Tumblr! I'm kind of spread out all over the place.
4033502 Thank you! Well-- like Cheese, I'm a weeny bit shy, I guess.
4033452 Quite possible now that I think about it, Hasbro wanted it to rival Monster High (or so I heard, from random source a long time ago) Only a few of the characters there have boyfriends, they also get a toy lol but I doubt EqG will go that far, if shipping is going to happen there, I imagine a short cameo of the chosen girls dancing with said boys (like at the end of Canterlot Wedding) At least with Cheese and Soarin I don't think they'll get as much hate as Flash for 'stealing their waifus'
4033452 Or perhaps in the third EqG
OMGOMGOMG this is made of SQUEE! Cute, in character, and your jokes made me grin. Magnificent. I can't praise this enough.
I will read your other fics for them eventually (also, not big on EQG, but I'm totally down with reading about teen Pinkie and Cheese.)
Oh my gosh! I officially dub you my favourite writer at the moment! This made me giggle, it's so cute!
I cannot WAIT for your future fics! 
Please don't ever stop writing!
4042448 Thank you! I'm actually working on something right now.
4037707 That's kind of what I'm thinking. I don't know if full-out romance would ever happen in the main show, and honestly, I'd rather it didn't. With Equestria Girls, that ship has sailed. (Ba-dump-BSSH!) So I think we're probably looking at background cameos or dancing or something like that.
4040718 Teen Pinkie and Cheese--well, we'll see whether you like them or not, but it's definitely something I'm picking at right now.
*bows down* I am not worthy to write fluff anymore 'cause you aced it, my dear.
4066348 A girl could retire on a compliment like that. Unluckily, fluff's practically all I can do. You'll notice a disappointing lack of aliens and tentacles. But thanks!
What if Pinkie Pie introduced her boyfriend Cheese Sandwich to her parents?
4069074 We'll probably know more about her relationship with her family after Saturday, but here's the real $64,000 question: is he? If he can't spit it out for just Hearts and Hooves Day, how's he going to manage it for something more permanent? Does she actually get it? Does she understand what a boyfriend is? Pinkie probably understands everything important about this anyway. Maybe. I don't know if it would even occur to her to make any kind of special announcement, but if it came up, it would be about as tactful as yelling that this donkey is seriously bald. Like, she might mention that they had triplets last week when she invites everypony to the weekaversary party, but kind of leave out the bit about how they got married last year.
But they aren't anywhere near that bit, and who knows if they'll ever get there. They're very young and very goofy.
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Pinkie might lose track of what's important, but Cheese is going to be compelled to throw the craziest wedding party ever. Unless he's so nervous and terrified that even Cheesy Sense can't make him plan for that.
Pinkie Pie: Don't worry! I've planned a wedding before! It's easy-peasy-weasy!
I love you. 
Cheese Sandwich: You-You have? Phew! *wipes sweat off his brow*
Pinkie Pie: Yup! Hopefully this one won't get invaded. By changelings.
Cheese Sandwich: ...Invaded?
Pinkie Pie: *shoves her face up against his, staring* Don't worry! I'll keep you safe! No one will capture you and pretend to be you and try to take over all of Equestria or just Ponyville. Not on my watch!
Cheese Sandwich: *gulps* Oh. *understood enough to faint, ala Mr. Cake*
Rainbow Dash: What about that time you couldn't guard the MMMM?
Pinkie Pie:
*grabs Cheese by the shirt and shakes him* I won't fail you!
Cheese Sandwich: *still unconscious*
Rainbow Dash: *puts her hooves to her ears and cringes* Ow... great. Now I'm deaf.
4089622 Hey! He was ready to plan a wedding, too! He did his bit! It's not his fault that Braeburn fell in love with a cougar by mail!
===>>> still totally does not get what exactly was wrong with Cherry Jubilee, who is rounded and even kind of pink in bits.
Thing is, do party ponies plan their own parties? Pinkie didn't even bother throwing her own birthday party. Maybe it wasn't just that she forgot. Maybe it's the one thing that doesn't show up on the radar, since it's about making other ponies smile.
Oh, Cheese may basically understand how she thinks, and she might be the one pony he totally gets, but that doesn't mean that he necessarily knows about all the stuff she's been up to. The idea of twenty Pinkie Pies, in particular, would probably make him crash to desktop for all kinds of reasons.
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Cheese: *helping Brae's unsteady and heavily salted butt home by shoving him*
*stops pushing... begins to laugh* Do you even know what love is? 
... Don't lie to me. 
Then why did you ask? 
Braeburn: ... I'm sorry.
Cheese: Why are you telling me that?
Braeburn: Yer bein' nice and all. I appreciate it, after I had to call off the weddin' and you came all this way...
Cheese: ...
Braeburn: I think so...
*long awkward pause: Cheese waiting for Brae to get the idea of what he did wrong but Brae just keeps staring at him until he thinks Cheese is trying to boost his confidence*
Braeburn: ... Yeah, I do.
Cheese: You...
Braeburn:
Cheese: Ha ha I was hoping you'd prove me wrong. Ahhhh, I need more sarsaparilla.
Ohhhh... that's a good point! What if Pinkie helps remember all of these occasions with the help of her Pinkie Sense? She has photographic memory but the Pinkie Sense is what gives her the nudge.
Yeah. That makes perfect sense. Awww... that means Cheese probably hasn't had a birthday party of his own in a long time.
What if a party pony just fizzles if they try to plan their own party? Like, it's technically possible, but it's so hard that they might as well give up?
Yeah, I have it in my head that he only knows the Smile song because it was hilarious and at that time he was in Ponyville, where it had happened. But otherwise he may have only heard of her exploits and not necessarily known she had anything to do with them, if he's heard of them at all. It seems as if Equestria doesn't really know who any of them are in general, other than maaaybe Twilight. But Princesses are normal so you just mostly react like they're any other pony because if they're just talking to you like it's normal then it's normal.
Ponies detect normal.
As for the twenty Pinkie Pies... yes he would. One of which being his imagination gets carried away: he imagines all twenty of them fighting over him, and he crashes because that is a combination of greatest fear ever and best fantasy ever. Also made of major WTF.
Yeah, you know what? Maybe I'm crazy, but I think he'd actually be horrified if he ever ended up in a genuine love triangle or dodecahedron. He loves attention but he wouldn't want to make so many ponies unhappy because of it. He would be really upset. I think he may be somewhat oblivious in certain areas, but I'm pretty sure he'd recognize the signs of discontent, and depending on what sort of set-up it was, he'd eventually try running away from the problem entirely or be really insistent about not being put in such an awkward position, even if it hurt their feelings... but then he'd try to cheer them up and it would get worse. Possibly hilarious.
And well, I don't think he has Pinkie's emotional juggling skills. She's the only one I could see potentially working a true multiple romance and keeping everyone happy. Like, Pinkie could probably marry more than one pony (ignoring legality at the moment) and make it work. Well, plausibly. That's not a definite. But she's the only one I would ever be able to believe that reasonably could, without the author having to put in the effort for me to buy it. I'm not saying it would be perfect, because it wouldn't, but she could juggle it and she might not have jealousy in that regard, though that isn't at all certain.
You give me so many ideas... I need to dedicate myself to writing some of them but waaaugh... I have too many ideas and WIP as it is. FML.
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Forgot to add, I bet Cheese loves the Smile song and hums it to himself sometimes. I think he had the whole thing memorized after he left Ponyville. I refuse to accept anything less.
Even if technically they don't sing all of these songs and most of them are "musical logic", I'm pretty sure party ponies go beyond that. Even if he isn't entirely aware of where it came from, Cheese clearly knows that it exists, as does Pinkie, and that's all they need for it to be real.
It's like when you remember a dream and never forget it, those rare ones that stick with you. I'm betting that's what it was like for Cheese. It just came to him, like he'd always known it, and he had a fuzzy memory of what it was about, but he caught the lyrics and now they'll always be with him, as long as he is trying to keep them safe and sound in his heart.
Random Tangent Time! I've seen a handful of stories where Pinkie dies and Cheese is sad or has to plan her funeral. What if he has to plan her wedding to someone else? I think that's a much, much better tearjerker but I don't think I've seen that yet.
Thing with emoticons -- I'm confused.
Who said anything about fighting over him? Hey, every single one of them is only trying to 1) have fun and 2) make you smile.
Cheese is kind of cruddy at friendship. This is why Pinkie is good for him, even as a distant influence.
4091083 Well, of course, I did the funeral thing, but slightly differently. Should I avoid spoilers in the comments? Not sure. Thing is, I don't know why she'd be getting married, or to whom. They've already got the basics for conflict in that he has to go back to Ponyville for a recharge once in a while, whether he likes it or not, whether she likes it or not. Mix that with overwhelming Cheesy Sense that a big party was in the offing, and you'd have the recipe for a disaster (and maybe the ending of The Graduate.)
Still, I think if I were to try it out, it would be better to do something less obvious, because if you're down, nothing is worse than someone else's wedding, especially when your ex is there. Plus, the way I write Cheesy Sense, all he knows is that there is a party, not necessarily whose or what kind.
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Oh. Never mind. It was dumb anyways.
Yes and Cheese is hands down the most fun pony, no matter where he goes, if he does say so himself. They're all barraging him with attempts to be funny and fun and because they're not perfect clones, they're a lot more selfish than Pinkie normally is. So they're not paying any real attention to the other clones unless they get bored, they're all trying to pay attention to Cheese. And they aren't actually concerned with his feelings, just their own. If he's faking a smile, they count that as a win. If he starts to frown, they start trying harder to make him smile. All of them. At once.
Cheese wants Pinkie to pay attention to him and delight him, but I honestly think that too much focused attention like that is going to terrify him. It's different when its him dazzling the townspeople of a given town. They're just in awe of him and he eats up their admiration and anticipation for the best party ever. Plus they're really admiring his work, not him in the strictest sense.
Twenty Pinkie clones will be demanding that he entertain them and determined to directly interact with him for as much intense fun as possible. That is going to freak him out eventually, even if they're just trying to get him to juggle with them for a giant juggling circle. And even if it wasn't him imagining that happening, where basically an amazing situation turns horrible, I'm pretty sure that is what would happen. They'd drive him up the wall. Too much of a good thing.
They may also want to hug him a lot, which could also contribute to crushing him by accident... Which wouldn't kill him but it would be uncomfortable. I think he'd panic and he'd be running like his tail was on fire after awhile.
This is very true.
Your story was more realistic and less melodramatic, which is why it is my favorite revolving around that idea so far.
Sorry, I wasn't really suggesting within your story universe. It was more of a general thought. I know they have plenty of potential for conflict in general, I'm just kind of surprised other people all thought of the funeral but not the wedding? But maybe I'm a dummy. I wasn't necessarily saying it was the best idea ever, since I also have no idea who she'd necessarily be marrying, but it is kind of an interesting idea.
... Yes. Maybe. Eh, sorry I brought it up. I knew it was convoluted but it was oddly fascinating.
Yeah, but he'd find out once he got there. Regardless, it would indeed be insanely sad. It might even be worthy of the tragedy tag.
I swear I'm not trying to pull them apart unnecessarily. I just imagine what sort of horrible things could happen. But I love them because they are mostly warm fuzzies together.
4091212 I AM MOST DEFINITELY NOT "CRUDDY" AT FRIENDSHIP!!
4089622 RD is death.. Reminds me of her astigmatism from FiW lol!
4069074 Oh colt, I might be killed.
I dunno if I should read this... the comments and description suggest two things I hate, shipping and Cheese Sandwich.
4451952 Well, then, don't, because you definitely won't like it. You can see what the story is about and who is in it from the tags and the description. That is what they are for. See where it says "Romance," and "Cheese Sandwich?" That strongly suggests that it may be a shipping story with Cheese Sandwich in it.
4452076 .... Sorry, I'm stupid.
I should have read the tags, but the title was so close to my favorite episode with my favorite pony (
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4452240 I see. Well, there you are. I try to be very careful about tags, because I really don't want readers to be disappointed or to wind up reading something they didn't want to read. I don't even sneak in stealth ships--I think it's cheating.
This was wicked cute and pretty much exactly how a CheesePie romance should go. :) Also, I really dig "rubber-chickened out"--that was an especially nice touch.
5451634 Thank you very much!
Hmm... I'm usually not all that picky about spelling... but I have my critics, too, particularly when I use French (or Prench in the equine realm) and misspell it.
I noticed a teeny tiny mark missing from the title: "Respondez Everypony, S'il Vous Plait" (the Sil needs a S'il.)
Nothing to feel bad about. I usually have to cross-reference with Google or Wikipedia, before I get it right.
Have downloaded story. Will read tonight.
6267682 It's intentional, actually. PInkie's Prench is lousy. "Everypony" isn't right, either. Technically, it should be "Respondez, s'il vous plâit," but you'll never see that.
My OTP chamber has been blown up by CheesePie bombs.
I wuv dis story <3 Good job!
6883814 Thank you!
I just got here from Keyframe's reading of this fic. So worth it!
6960389 Thank you! I didn't even know about it until Sketch-AHolic told me about it. (She writes some pretty mean CheesePie herself).
I don't ship it, but that was cute.
Well, that was adorable