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Cheese has always loved his friend Pinkie, though in a strange turn of events it seems that Pinkie is the shy one, and she hasn't even noticed his love for her...or so he thought.

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Comments ( 54 )

That was hilarious! :rainbowlaugh:

:heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::pinkiegasp::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart::heart: YAY!!!! Can you guys check out my story??

Aw, thanks so much guys!! :heart:

4007503 *blushes* d'aw thank yeah! :pinkiehappy::heart:

4010109 aw thank you so much! <3 you guys are making my morning! :heart:

this is a new shipping, i literally haven't heard of cheese sandwich. Oh Well, Bye Bye Pokey! it's cheese time :D really enjoyable. loved it! :) :heart:

4014790 The pairing is very new. Cheese was in the episode called 'Pinkie Pride' and he's one of my favourite new characters! He's voiced by Weird Al, so that's a plus! <3 (He's got some funny songs)

Also, I've never liked Pinkie and Pokey. (Idk it just seemed odd.) I love DashPie though, or TwiPie. <3 :twilightsheepish:

This is simpley spectacular!!!!! :pinkiehappy: you must update

Comment posted by poditom199 deleted Mar 1st, 2014

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I Like these pairings;

Rainbow Dash x Soarin

Pinkie Pie x Cheese Sandwich

Applejack x Caramel

Fluttershy x Big Mac

Twilight x Flash

And of course, My favorite,

:heart: Rarity x Spike :heart:

:) these are my favorites.

4017294 Pretty much my faves too! Exepct for TwiLuna and AppleDash. <3
But yeah....these are all my faves as well <3 RariSpike is so cute <3

4016970 Might be a sequel coming soon :raritywink: I'm not sure what to do it about though...heh. Ideas would be nice. :scootangel:

4018174

I Know right? I Hope there is an episode related to them in season 4.

It would be awesome! :D

:moustache: :heart: :raritywink:

4018174 i gotta say that i do support some mare x mare, like for example;

Oh No, i can't say any mare x mare's because almost any of the mane 6 are good with Dashie... like;

TwiDash

PinkieDash

AppleDash

well, basically: Rest of Mane 6 :heart: :rainbowdetermined2:

4018174 Sorry for third Answer, but NO :raritywink: :heart: :rainbowdetermined2: it's not right, Spike belongs with Rarity... :)

It was sooo beautiful! I loved it! Totally awesome! :rainbowkiss:

4033471 I love your profile pic! It totally goes with the story! :pinkiesmile:

4039671 Wow, thanks for all your comments!! :pinkiegasp::pinkiehappy:

4039667 ikr? this is more cuter than Pinkie X Pokey. :heart:

First time i read this story i was like: Who the f*** is cheese sandwich? XD

I love cheese pie shippings :pinkiehappy:

This made my heart ache (in a good way)! Pinkie and Cheese together is just precious, and you did an excellent job. :heart:

I really loved Pinkie's reactions.

Is this story completed? I would love to read more Cheese Pie stories by you. :scootangel:

4088232 aw wow thanks! Yes it is completed, but if more people want another one I will probably do one. :heart:

Surprised so many people like it! I didn't even have an editor! :D Pinkie Pie is the most fun for me to write for though, since I am like her in more ways than I care to explain :pinkiecrazy: (Heh)

4088262 Yay! :pinkiehappy: I love your portrayal of Cheese as well. The passionate side to his personality is interesting. He's pretty daring, kissing her like that! :pinkiegasp:

I myself can relate to Cheese, and it makes this story all the more fun to read.

4088284 Well, I thought he did seem to like her in the episode. MLP isn't really a romantic show though, so they can't really come out and say that straight up. I think 'he idolized her' was a way of saying, he wanted to work with her and then be with her or something...idk.

I find it cute that you relate to Cheese in this! :raritywink:

4042159 U didn't know who I am??? I AM EQUISTRIA'S BEST PARTY PLANNER! HOW DID U NOT KNOW WHO I AM?!?:flutterrage:

4263728 Buckin` darn it, I`m embarressed I never get embarressed. I'm ashamed.:ajsleepy:

It's cute >w<
For some reason, Pinkie Pie not understanding that Cheese Sandwich was in love with her was kind of reminiscent of Phoebe Buffay for me... :rainbowlaugh:

Comment posted by GoldenFlower deleted Jun 26th, 2014

:heart::heart::heart: * Screaming and Running around like a weirdo *

4602313 lol I like you! XD

*screams and runs around with her* :pinkiehappy:

Great chapter.:pinkiehappy::heart: The only Pinkie-shipping I fully support. The writing does have some errors in it.
Some errors I found:

Pinkie was now hoping up and down

hopping

Everypony who walked by her starred

stared

Pinkie ordered the croissants for the both of them, no matter how much Cheese wanted to, and she smiled as Mrs.Cake quickly placed their plates down on their table.

Did you mean to say that Pinkie also payed for the both of them?
Pinkie ordered the croissants and payed for both of them,

I hope you didn't get a flu or something...those are the worse.

worst.

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