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Awesomedude17
Just some hidden brony with a s***load of ideas. Also available for assassinations (Not really, Deadpool does that.)
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This is the sequel to Nikolai Berlinski and Equestria, with no Zombies?!?! This fanfic features Dethklok and is a totally metal story.
Swears will be censored in this fanfic as opposed to the last one. In the style of Metalocalyspe, pretend all censors are guitar rifts.
Criticism is welcome. And Rarishy is best ship.
Looks at the cover image and title-
Ill give it a read.
what is Chrysalis gonna do? Hold on let me guess, Fool the people into helping her take over Equestria?
your answer: Woah, let's not draw conclusions! or You have know idea
(u mad bro?)
Dethklok in Equestria? That's doable.
1348144 nah bro, but let's just... Spies are everywhere, and nobody even realizes.
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Dethklok...? Oh good god this is gonna be epic.
It is an interesting premise, and it has alot of potential, but it seems to go buy a little bit too quick. There are a few formatting and punctuation problems here and there, but it's not that serious. Also, don't skimp on the details too much.
One more thing. Considering this is a new fic, treat it like one, and not a continuation. That means you should explain past events and re-establish characters, so new readers know what's going on (and gives them the incentive to maybe want to go back and read the previous work).
I'm going to watch this now, but only out of the sheer interest. Do it right, and i'll give it my approval (which in the grand scheme of things doesn't really mean much, but hey, that's all i can give)
There is another dethklok story on here and is never updated do I hope you update it more than that other story.
P.s. I am super hype for this story right now
I hope that this story's gonna be brutal.
Metal. That is all.
And the way this is going, I can see this story easily tanking, so step up on the goddamned quality ya douchebag! Sorry about the douchebag bit, but it's FUCKING DETHKLOK! Your characters need to be more in character, and your descriptions need more work!
I did like one thing though, whenever you censored out the swearing, I heard the guitar note in my head. In my opinion, all swearing should be censored as such.
I've been planning this since late April
Eh, I'll get to it later anyways.
Fav'd for now.
False.
SpikeBloom is best ship.
1349444 Don't worry. With the power of Old Spice, I will make this story f***ing metal!
I thumbs-upped this just because DETHKLOCK.
1350827 It's spelt, DETHKLOK. And this story will not be complete without gore, lots of it. So stay tuned.
1350834
Oh, goddammit... got in a hurry typing, what with all the excitement.
yays dethkloks in equestria I'm afraid what pickles is going to do
I will fav this 
can't wait
you better not mess this up
You know, if you're planning on censoring swear words, you might as well get it right. Cock isn't really a swear word, but hell most definitely is. You shouldn't censor, of course, because that's stupid and this is Dethklok we're talking about. I think George Carlin said it best, "Shit piss fuck cunt cocksucker motherfucker and tits".
1350798 You know, that might be possible, but for right now, Dethklok needs to be douchebags.
1351230 Those are the words that I heard get censored in the show, and so they are censored. If you don't like it, then don't like it.
This will have 3 acts in a nutshell, 1st act is this one, 2nd is the misadventures of Dethklok and the Mane 6, 3rd is with the changelings attacking Equestria.
Next chapter will also introduce an interesting concept.
1351246 I just don't really see the point.
1351276 It's funnier with the censors IMO.
1351283 Whatever.
Okay, this is starting to tank for me. Please, for the love of all that is black and brutal, take your time writing this! Try to add more description!
No creative use of "Deth" in each chapter title? Pass.
1351572 Why the hell would I do that?
*ponders for a few seconds before realizing what user meant*
Deth would only be used if something violent is in the chapter. Don't ask why.
OH GOD,
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swear, f yo mess ths p, mma e all lke
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da hell's wrong with my comments?
1351230 well put sur.
Yours truly... NecromancerX69
Ps.
If you ruin this story I will swallow your face and chew your soul like old bubblegum!
This chapter is better than the previous, for sure, but it still seems to be a little bit rushed. Seriously, take your time on this stuff.
1353705 They aren't that clever enough to ask that.
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1357411
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Good. You're getting better at this. Keep at it.
1357446 Thanks, BTW I used a random translation site, the french sentence was, 'Yeah, I can totally speak French.'
Being gutted nice
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1357472 Your image is invalid.
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This story ams opposite of dildo.
1357533 Yeah, unlikes thats other storys, never gets f***ing updatesed.
1355452.. true well played sir
I noticed an 'Assist Me' Doctor Doom reference in that chapter
1357857 Oh hell yes! Someone got it!
This is definitely amazing. I'm happy to have tracked another good story
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And you capture Dethklok's characters just right :D