A Marine, after mysteriously losing his memory and being transported to Equestria, must find out what is going on and how to get home.
The very first story I published here remastered. It received a lot of dislikes because of, (But not limited to) Short length, Format, and lots of other things. Will be updating a chapter at a time. Promise that it won't suck too bad.
I would also like to thank ElectroHaiso for helping me with the story.
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Glad to help with it, I love this story.
I like this story, I request more chapters.
Thing is, he is not joking about the science.
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There is so much science that went into just the back story.
Pretty good man. Loved it
Great! I love the story so far. I hope to see more in the future.
Can't wait for more SCIENCE.
This... This is....... A nice story
Uncle Sam's Misguided Children. Is there anything that they can't get in trouble for/with/because of?
1054118>>1054447>>1054484>>1054489>>1054541>>1054628>>1055235 Thanks guys! I am overwhelmed with the positive responses.
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If I have anything to say about it, there will be so much goddamn science.
Have a favorite, guys! You deserve it! This story is really good, and I'm going to keep a keen eye out for updates! I like how the story is going, so keep it up!
So this is what it feels like having a story with no dislikes.
Whaaaaaaaat... NIghtmare Moon is pulling some dirty strings... very dirty. Like Porn dirty...
Lovin it man. looking forward to more
Just remember Boot Camp trumps everything. That means that while he may not remember that he's a Marine his body does. Muscle memory and all that. First time he gets into a fight his body is going to do all of the correct things and he's not even going to know why. Which is really funny when you think about it.
This should be interesting.
Dude, I don't understand how you can make so many good stories
1071042 Well, I am going to not be a smartass here and actually answer you. I really don't know either. This stuff just comes to me...
ONLY ONE THOUSAND AND THREE HUNDRED OR SO WORDS?!? WHAT IS THE MEANING OF THIS!?!
1112064 It's more words than my last chapter....
Besides..check my next blog entry for information on my stories. It will be posted soon.
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1112077 I cannot see that image....
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I passed the G.O.A.T! I got 'Waste Management'.
1116927 HAHA! Someone got the Fallout 3 Reference! Finally!
“I need you to go down to the basement and hook up the Quantum Harmonizer and hook it up to the Photonic Resonation Chamber.”
“But Twilight, didn’t you say not to do that? Something about parabolic destabilization of the fission singularity?”
“Well up yours too Spike!”
Fucking awesome
1117793 Did you get it though?
1117904Hell yea I did! Fallout 3!
I bet on Twilight's G.O.A.T, question 10 is all 'Princess Celestia' instead of 'The Overseer'
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But the correct answer is "Lauren Faust".
MY NIPPLES THIRST FOR MOAR GOD DAMMIT!
1319729 That's the plan.
Long wait. But ultimately worth it.
NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO! THAT ONE DISLIKE! NOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO
1319729 ARE YOU A VIKING?
1320411Indeed my good sir.
1319908 There's always that one guy who has to ruin the fun for everyone else.
1320660 Glad to know some people still like it.
MY NIPPLES ARE HARD FROM THIS STORY. OH GOD THEY HURT SO BAD, But THEY FEEL SO GOOD.
Lolwut
I HAVN'T EVEN READ IT YET! WOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOO-
-OOOOOOOOOOoooooooooooooooooo.........DONE! Love'n every word of this!
1874081 Cool. Cool. Anything in particular you like about it though?
We need more of this, I like the story a lot so far!
1874383I like the fact that he isn't a fuck-nut and can do shit right, and not be a pussy all like, "LIKE, OH MAH GOSH! I'M SO SORRY I HURT YOU! I SAID A BAD WORD! I CAN'T LIVE ANY MOAR!!!!"...........
1874543 Well I'll try to update it more often.
What I like about this story? Personally I like how cold he is, the Marine is the new born area of dark inside such a peaceful place I guess it's true what they say the more innocent something is the funner it is to corrupt. Like I said so far I really like the story I doubt something will change just keep up the good work!
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2719412 Thanks for the notification