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Hopeful Soul


I'm just some 29-year old dude from Canada hoping to become a screenplay writer one day. That's all.

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nice work

Interesting so far.

Comment posted by doomie-22 deleted May 9th, 2023

Really need to see this finished, and hopefully Zipp and Pipp's friends supporting them, maybe even Haven herself.

Can't wait to see how Haven is going to react to all of this!

Aww, I didn't want them to be caught this early in the story

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I’m not sure if Queen Haven will be join in. I mean, I may or may not have an idea that involves her, but I’m not sure

11564838 I certainly hope you do! :pinkiehappy:

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She may or may not be a casual partner, Zipp and Pipp are the main romance of the story, that ok?

11564843 Gotcha! :raritywink: Would be hot to see, though. :twilightsmile:

Looking forward to the next chapter! Can't help wondering how things are going to go. :pinkiehappy:

Comment posted by LordFlareon deleted May 15th, 2023

11579646 Point taken. I'll shut up now. I'm sorry.

Haven's reaction was certainly unexpected, but it's good to know that Zipp and Pipp have her support.

That was certainly surprising, but it was nice of Haven to be so accepting of the relationship.

I can only wonder what's gonna happen now.

Comment posted by LordFlareon deleted Jun 29th, 2023

Didn't expect Haven to spank her adult daughters right there, but it was a nice surprise. I guess, now we know where Pipp and Zipp got there fetishes.

Damn it! I knew it was Misty!

oh.....she will pay later and nice work:twilightsmile:

Can Sunny and Izzy really keep up this "plausible deniability" thing anymore? At this point, Zipp and Pipp have pretty much done everything but actually tell them they're in a relationship.

Comment posted by LordFlareon deleted Jul 5th, 2023

For someone who wasn't entirely on board with the situation, Haven seems very interested in her daughters' relationship now :rainbowlaugh:

"Zipp, come on. Look, I know we all agreed that we'd pretend nothing was going on when we knew something was going on, but I think we can all agree that it's not exactly a well kept secret." Pipp pointed out. "I mean… me and Pipp have walked on you both… a couple of times. Then there's all those times you kissed and nuzzled each other with us watching…"

I think you meant to write Sunny and Izzy, right?

Anyway, another great chapter! The sisters are now engaged, and Sunny and Izzy know the truth about their relationship. I don't know whether you took my suggestion or not, but I'm glad they're all on the same page now.

As for Hitch, I hope there'll be a way for him to find out the truth without any problems. I mean, if Haven is willing to risk a public outrage for her daughters' sake, then why shouldn't Hitch do the same for his friends?

Did you make up Pipp and Zipp's songs yourself?

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I used a lyric generator

I'm interested to see what Haven's plan regarding Hitch is.

I really appreciate that you're addressing my thoughts :twilightsmile:

"Ooh! I really hope the big, super, duper surprise is what we think it is!" Pipp commented, practically bouncing with excitement.

"Hey lovebirds!" Pipp waved cheerfully.

"Oh, I've been working on this my entire life." Pipp revealed proudly.

I think you meant Izzy for all of these?

"What? No! I'm sure they didn't!" Sunny tried to assure him until the sound of wet lips smacking together repeatedly grew louder and louder, followed by moans of pleasure and pieces of the tuxedo flying off. Hitch and Sunny widened their eyes and lowered their jaws more and more as the erotic show before them continued, while Izzy just watched with interest. "Or… maybe they did…"

Will those two ever learn? :unsuresweetie:

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Link to this lyric generator?

"Ooh! I really hope the big, super, duper surprise is what we think it is!" Zipp commented, practically bouncing with excitement.

I don't think you mean Zipp either; I'm with LordFlareon on this being supposed to be Izzy.

The next day, at the Brighthouse, the girls quickly gathered together to discuss plans for the upcoming wedding, with Sunny and Izzy both acting as wedding planners. They only had five months and four days to get everything ready, but they felt like it was still doable.

Since it's the next day, shouldn't they only have five months and three days left?

How's the next chapter coming along?

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Haven't quite started, been busy

"Yeah! Yeah, we're friends!" Hitch agreed with a rapid nod. The blush on his face didn't vanish though, in fact it intensified, as did Sunny.

Uh-huh. Sure :ajsmug:

"And you-know-who will be their step-sister ." Izzy whispered to nopony in particular.

I see what you did there :raritywink:

Maybe there could be a chapter where Zipp and Pipp do something nice for their friends. Both to show their appreciation for supporting their relationship, and to make up for lying to them in the first place.

he wedding was now only two months away, and while with the cake, the music and the flowers all taken care of, there was still much to do.

The

James, being a kind-hearted and understanding pony, smiled warmly at the situation. "No worries. Accidents happen, I'm just glad Sunny's ok" he said with a smile.

James? Was that supposed to be Hitch instead?

nice work look forward to the next chapter:twilightsmile:

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