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I can hope Sparky pops into the story because he have four moms.
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He will. And correction; he has five moms.
I like the idea of them being a herd, but I'd like if the mares were a thing together too. The others nuzzling and kissing would be cute. I'd understand if Zipp and PIpp not due to being sisters, (unless you maybe think its hot?... that or bring it up with them and others understanding). Just reminds me of Visual Novels that have multiple love interests that only see them one at a time, I'd just like them all together. I'd imagine if Misty was wondering if the others are together sometimes without Hitch, just thinking about the dynamics.
Also, super happy that there are more stories with Misty, bonus points if includes Alphabittle and Queen Haven.
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I’m still not sure if I’m gonna have Zipp and Pipp do it with each other, but the mares will be physically affectionate with each other and not just Hitch.
I wonder if they're going to run too any racist ponies who don't like it the idea of ponies racing a dragon.
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I mean, I probably wouldn’t race a dragon either
burning his head in her neck. should be burying his head in her neck.
Burning would be bad.
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Good catch. Thank you.
Maybe once the herd comes out to Misty and she tells them she is aware, they would hide Zipp and Pipp being 'close' thinking she and other ponies would hate them for it. Few chapters later a tearful Zipp and Pipp are somehow talking about not being as affectionate they want to be. Misty finds out somehow and maybe is OK with it? Just an idea to work it in somehow. I'd just like them to be happy, and I love Sparky having 5 moms.
I'm guessing Alpha and Haven are distracting Misty for the herd to have some 'together' time. (Someone setup to watch Sparky?)
🐺🐉🧩Why did you delete the last few chapters, they were good? Are you going to redo them?🐺🐉🧩
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I intended for this book to be romance focused with sexual references, but never outright sex. My proofreader felt the story was devolving into nothing but porn, and upon a reevaluation I realised they were right. I therefore unpublished chapters two and three so I could edit them to a be a bit less explicit. Both chapters have been altered and are now available again.
I bet you was hitch being a single father What drew the mares love out towards hitch.
The rest just didn't know how to tell Misty they were all together, and didn't mean to hide it. Haven pointing out if something was going on they should have told her just makes Misty think they don't trust her or she doesn't approve. Hopefully we'll have all of them together soon.
Continuation hopefully soon.
That was actually rather sweet. I was expecting some shenanigans involved in Misty trying to decide how to tell the others she wanted to join, and how to do it, but this was actually a very emotional build-up, and as it turns out, there was little debate because the others had been wanting her to join the herd almost from the start.
Hmm, now they'll have to confront Haven and Alphabittle...
This was a interesting beginning I can't wait to see where this goes.
This is getting more and more interesting.