Misty’s Surprise

Sunny and friends have a surpise they must prepare. Misty has a big surprise coming. Her first birthday party from as long as she could remember. What will she do? How will she react?

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Comickook

Comickook #1 · January 6th · · ·

Aww. This was an absolutely beautiful one-shot. :-D Definitely liked the work going into the dialogue, characterizations and general wrap-up. I could certainly see where the gang would want to prepare a surprise birthday party for Misty and I loved Misty's reaction to it.

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #2 · January 6th · 1 · ·

”Oh! Well…” Misty gave a nervous chuckle. “Certainly sounds none of my business then. So I guess I’ll be on my way. Good luck!” Misty had said with a reassuring smile before she left the building. Everyone had a sigh of relief when she left. When they were sure she was way down the hill. Both sisters looked at their bother.

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Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #3 · January 6th · 1 · ·

Everyone felt horrible for Alphabittle. They did not understand his pain. But they knew it cant have been easy. On the day of your child’s birthday. Instead of watching her grow and a day of laughter and fun. It was a day of loneliness and grief. Fearing his daughter was dead or alive. He never got to watch her grow up.

That's like any other parents worst nightmare not knowing what happened to your child over these past years that's always the most difficult thing in the world that the parents have to go through

Axolotl222

Axolotl222 #4 · January 6th · 1 · 1 ·

This is a cute story, but unfortunately there are enough typos to be distracting. Still a good read though.

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #5 · January 7th · 1 · ·

“Well…” Alphabittle sighed as he looked at them. Not knowing the answer. He felt it was all good, he didn't know his duaghter as well as them. So why as they were asking him? “I…” he sighed. “I think its best we all leave this up to you. You guys know her much better than I do…”

Daughter

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #6 · January 7th · 1 · ·

“Thanks Sparky!” Zipp thanked as she grabbed the screwdriver from the little dragon. It was a nice improvement from a year ago. Where he’d turn something into something else and ignore anyone telling him to turn it back. Until Hitch got involved. But now, he was more willing to as told. About 50% of the time if it related to transform something back to normal. But still an improvement.

At least Sparky is learning so that's a good approvement

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #7 · January 7th · 1 · ·

He looked at Misty’s friends grateful. The gratitude could not be expressed with words. Who knew an earth pony shouting a forbidden word in your tearoom would eventually lead to magic and your own daughter being revealed as alive.

Hey Miracle always happens in any weird situation

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #8 · January 8th · · ·

It was supposed to be a drawing of her sitting on a swing, in a big meadow. With birds and a bright blue elephant with purple polka-dots for some reason. She smiled as she thought it looked like she was jumping from the swing, about to ninja kick the elephant in the face. She then noticed five ponies, presumably the royal sisters, Sunny, Hitch and Izzy. Sitting on top of the Marestream, cheering her on.

Probably Sparky got that inspiration when Misty did those tricks during the Make Your Mark chapter two which I think that's pretty amazing

Yoshifan30

Yoshifan30 #9 · January 8th · · ·

Okay that is a pretty adorable story and even celebrating Misty's birthday since she never had for a long time ever since she was kidnapped by Opaline and not only that Alphabittle never got the chance to celebrate her birthday I really felt bad for him not knowing what happened to his daughter all this time it was so much heartache for him but now he got the chance to celebrate it this time with her and along with her friends again I really like this it's a very sweet one keep up the good work

TalB

TalB #10 · January 9th · · ·

Here's my present for her.

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redmar

redmar #11 · January 10th · · ·

This was a nice story. Misty deserves to have fun birthday party.

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