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Zipp is not okay! She is in the hospital, injured due to an incident. Pipp, is fine, totally dealing with this just fine! ... or is she?
Sorry for the grammar errors and unfinished/rushed looking story. Due to personal issues I wasn’t able to complete it but didn’t want it to go to waste.
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Holy crap this was actually kinda heartwrenching, bravo.
What a nice, enjoyable read. I really felt for everypony especially Pipp and Haven.
BTW, is it okay if I make a tv tropes page for this story?
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I don’t think this story is long enough to warrant a tv tropes page. Especially since it might not be left up.
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Well, I have seen some short stories with pages on there. Generally they're all over 1,000-2,000 words though so I think would be kept up.
I liked this story, you should keep it up.
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I was talking about the story not the page.
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Oh, okay.
While there are a few spelling/grammar mistakes, I'd say this is overall a good story. I've seen done before with Rainbow Dash, though you could argue something like this would be more likely to happen to Zipp. Non-the-less, the execution was solid, there were emotional moments, and the character's reactions were well done (especially Pipp's).
So I'd say keep it up
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Thank you for reading! And the grammar errors in the blue text were intentional was they were meant to be comments Pipp was getting on her livestream
I wonder if Sunny was having flashbacks of losing her dad.
Very nice story; especially on Pipp's part.